Well, it's mainly the tense that his thoughts were written that sorta bothers me. It's in first person as if he's telling the story after it's happened, like written in a journal. I dunno, throws me off a bit. I RPed with someone who wrote entirely in first person once and it was frustrating because I was in third person. xD It just clashes a little is all.

But what twist and paradox are you talking about?

Ooh, sweet!

*reads*

Alright, so I'm not used to your style just yet. Will the narrative things come up too often? I don't want to sound rude or anything, but for me they seem to take away from Tree's part in this thing, placing him as a secondary character. It's really my only complaint, but so far it sounds interesting regardless.

I'll try to get a post up soon. Some stuff has been going on lately and I'm hoping to get through it soon. When I find a good bit of spare time, I'll begin writing. I'm hoping tomorrow, but it will probably be over the weekend.

I still don't feel comfortable changing anything drastic in the Rapture universe.

And yes, a crossroads. Honestly, I don't have Word on this computer either. xD I'm going to have to get some sort of word processor on here soon, probably within the week.

Yeah, I figured we'd time travel. Tree has the ability to Time Travel, but he can only move himself through time. If he tried bringing anything else through time, he'd end up carrying with him the surrounding four miles (which includes the earth beneath him). Doing this would cause great destruction, lol.

But I don't think we should do anything so drastic as to alter anything major in Bioshock. I think they should go to Rapture to possibly track down someone else who snuck into the city to maybe avoid detection or to get something there of value. Maybe they enter the city to find something inside it. Something small, really, I don't want to destroy the city or kill any characters from the series. I don't even know if that's allowed in the EH. xP

Random Submarine exploration happens upon it?

Gets teleported there by inter-dimensional ghosts as a form of punishment?

When Tree Shade teleports there, for whatever reason, he teleports the surrounding 4 miles and Aronin happens to be within that radius?

He's looking for a cure to cancer (xP) and seeks it out intentionally, word of it spread possibly through someone who might have escaped the city somehow?

A nuke throws him in that general direction and he crashes into the lighthouse.

UFOs abduct him, but their ship is shot out of the sky and the tractorbeam malfunctions, teleporting him into the city.

Ryan invites him because of his perfectness...?

I guess what would help this a bit is when this will take place. Will it take place before or after the events in Bioshock? Like... after it's gone to hell but before you crash there?

Where's our Bioshock RP, Sonny Jim?

Power Shot has filmed your request! Go see it and tell him of its awesomeness!

That was quite interesting, Flue. XD

How're things?

EDIT: By the by, v that was CW. Any dice with it, or were you too lazy?

Look on Wikipedia.

I don't guess you saw the answer to my question in the OoC?