Yeah, I know. I find it kind of hard to find err in some images, and it's pointless to point that out in the comment.

6. Might I suggest using another language?

OH THATS WHAT YOU MEAN. I guess I oughta make it clear that there are three bells, and there are six notes in the Sun's Song.

*edits post*

4. No. If you're doing a "mash A to do this" thing, you need to be pretty specific.

5. If you didn't, easy thing to fix.

6. Hence me showing you this.


As for the orientation thing, I kinda had trouble conveying that idea. The Wiimote icon is pointed in a random direction and tilted by a random number of degrees. When the player "copies" the Wiimote icon with his/her Wiimote, Link will hold his sword in the same way to block Nimbus' attack.

Is it clear yet?

1. Well, I will commend you on having a far cleaner presentation than mine, but in my defense it's harder to clean up an entry as large as mine.

2. Not to be offensive or anything, but I just can't take this character seriously.

3. Phase 1. I'm guessing that there's no time limit even though the rocks are falling towards the ground fast.

4. ... in order to do what?

5. Not quite sure how you do this.

6. I apologize for this, but would you mind looking up "Maxim" on Google?

Other than these relatively minor issues, that's a mighty fine entry you have there .


Just wondering, when you said that some of the wording was confusing, did it affect your understanding of the battle, the backstory, or both?

When you say "strange wording", do you mean "confusing" or "ambiguous"

I thought I said somewhere that Nimbus was the "sworn enemy of the Sand Goddess and all her followers".

And since Nimbus is the bad guy, I kinda thought it would be pretty obvious that he was faking the "brink of death" thing.

Hold on, I think I see what you're saying. Let me make a small modification.

I saw this coming, somehow.

Where specifically can I improve my wording?

Personally, I think it's far too early to make a discussion thread for the DAB contest, there are only three entries lol.

I await your input .

I will post mine in a few minutes, in that case.

How ironic. In my entry there's a character named Fira.

Shall I change it?