As for the look i'd like to go for, i'd like to mix this



(yes, that's in game graphics of the new Prnce of Persia) with anime elements, like this

Or, we could just go with this XD

Let's go with that, as that makes the most sense instead of the Girl wandering across the world. Although wouldn't it (and the girl) end up in ancient Hyrule if we use WW (think we should use WW), but then that could allow for the girl to wander the world for tens of thousands of years (she's only kept alive by Majora, without it she would die instantly), and Vivala is on the otherside of the globe to Hyrule, so I suppose it makes sense.

And honestly I had never heard of Beetle Bailey/Billy Bailey, I'll look into though =P.

By the way, now that we have all of this down, I'd like to choose which kind of link we want so that we can add onto the beginning. It's either TP Link, WW Link, or a new Link. My vote is for WW Link, esp since that now that he would be on the sea for 9 years he would probably roughen up alot and we could give him a more Mugen/Ichigo look (in both facial structure and build) but in WW art style (i'd prefer a mix of real and WW art, I mean really the WW art style represents Childhood, and Link would be an adult, so it would make sense to darken the style and add some real and anime elements). Plus it makes a better story, and I have some ideas about how Link and Tetra get into prison. I'll get to those later.

Ohh my bad, you call him Beetle Bailey in english/USA(In my country his "Billy"). and Lt. Futt is the one you call Lieutenant Sonny Fuzz.

Yes I noticed it and I don't know what to say...Might be that when majora possed the girl she/it started slaugthering the tribe, which responed by using a powerful "sealing" magic that completely seals away something to nothing, or so they believe(it's actually a magic which sends the thing or person to another dimension) Unfortunatly, Majora kills the man casting the spell so it just becomes a dimension hole which drags the whole tribe into it. On the other side Majora kills the tribe...or something

by the way did you notice the explanation that I put for how Majora and Oni eventually meet? As in how Majora gets to Vivala/Hyrule.

will do haha (what's Lt. Fut in Billy?)

TEN PAGES?! Do it as Lt. Fut in Billy, write the short summarizing and then have the long detailed story afterwards(but tell them what's what)

Golmena, and really I'd like to strengthen the plot a bit before I go much further in the plot summary.

And honestly, should I just make it a paragraph or three that summarizes it really briefly and then just work on different sections overtime? Because it's ten pages long now and it may be too long of a read for many people to start getting involved with it. Plus you and Adam basically know the whole plot anyway so we can just explain things as we go.

Also, I think I may begin drawing Golmena today.

Hello Xeves! Sorry to bother you during your summarzing of the thread, but I just got one question:
I looked my post and other peoples posts in the thread and guess what, I found THREE diffrent ways of writing Golmena/Golemna/Golmnea. So I'm just wondering: WHAT IS THE CORRECT ONE?!

About Majora meeting Oni, and Majora becoming a little girl (The true Majora has no gender):

-The ancient Terminian tribe used Majora (in mask form) to give curses and to make sacrifices. The sacrifices would be done by temporarily unleashing Majora, and allowing it to consume the sacrifice as a tribute to the moon. An 8 year old girl is chosen to be the sacrifice, and is offered to Majora. Majora chooses not to consume her, and instead houses itself inside her body.

-Somehow (we'll discuss this), Majora directs the girl back into the realm of Vivala (or Hyrule and Vivala if we use the Adult Timeline) and she lives on for thousands of years, roaming the lands and trying to survive without Majora taking over her.

-She wanders into Unharus, lives there for a few years, and meets Oni, her first and last freind.

There you go, although it's watered down from where I want to go with it (as in putting some history towards that Terminian Tribe).

1. And figure it out we shall...eventually
2. Sounds good
3. Forgot about the fact that Golmena breaks the men out of the prison, so yeah they meet breifly. As for the Goron Dungeon I'd like him to be there, but we have to figure out a reason why. I mean that place was deserted 500 years ago, maybe the Golden Hand is exploring the ruins?

4. Oh they meet, I just didn't get to that part yesterday =D.

I'll elaborate on what happens to Majora after it's turned into the mask later tonight or tomorrow, but right now I need to do some reports.