Thank you very much for taking the time to read that, and I'm glad to hear that I reached the desired effect. =D Oh, and trust me when I tell you that I've been still working on it. The problem is that THERE IS SO MUCH TO BE DONE! I mean, I need to make more scenes that show Buirma (the character that I used to have as a piggy bureaucrat, and is now an insane pope figure) and his actual scheme. I also plan on having Link go to the holy place where Buirma resides, and THAT's where Arcodes will come and chase him instead of in some random street. I also want to add more scenes with the girl that Arcodes takes care of, as well as fix some things about the whole "demon" plot that I should have fleshed out more/foreshadowed.
And, I completely re-imagined the Sheikah village that I introduced in Chapter 3.
Anywho, how's the next chapter of the
OoT Retelling coming along? =D