No way! You too?! That's awesome!
And for the news posts link for pikigeek, is that what you wrote?
I only have written one review, and that was for Skyward Sword. I'll PM you the story.
Anyways, from what I see you have already developed your style of writing, which is always a good thing. I have yet to nail down how I want to write, which is a bit of a problem. I have seen some grammatical errors concerning commas, but nothing too obnoxious. For the news articles, I noticed you used some opinionated words. Of course with hard core news stories that you would find front of center of a newspaper, this wouldn't fly, but with video game news and stories there is a certain degree of latitude to be allowed. Overall, I think you are a very good writer.
