Oh, Unit7, I forgot to mention, it's probably best to post the story with a link, that way we don't have to go searching around for it.

I'll edit it into the first post so no one else gets confused.
Anyways, I recently made an update to my
Ocarina of Time Retelling which found its way into the Fan Fiction Showcase, to gloat a bit.
Just before that, I also wrote a short story entitled
Traffic Lights which can be found
here.
I'd appreciate some comments and critique, especially on the latter, as it's still lonely and sad without any reviews.
