Signature/Small Work Showcase [V.II]

He only got one comment, Monty, and that was yours.

Eye fink it's perty, Ice_dragon. :3
The colors are simply amazing! It has a nice vibe to it. Though, that particular image is getting to be horridly overused. x_x

I think a thicker border would suit it alot better, though, in my opinion.

OH WHAT! I opened a portal, so part of my post moved here.

I don't like how you broke the text like that. It seems to go "Mid" on the upper, and "idna" on the lower. It makes it look like it says "Mididna" :3

Maybe that's just my monitor playing tricks on me, though.

I've seen better from you, Monty. The blue blur that fills most of the sig has no depth, highlights, or variation at all. Where it overlaps with Midna it does just that: overlap with Midna, overpowering her colouring.

The orange hair near her head should be cut off; it clashes with the blue, and takes away from the focal point, which should be her eye.

The text kind of... tries to be there, but isn't. Perhaps you should try having it a darker colour?

I'll agree with Chozo... Drop the text, knock the hair out, and make the blue swirls pop a little more if possible (Raise the contrast, but don't clip the swirls into solid blue).

im thinkin it has focus problems. i donty know whether to look at the right or left hand side. i keep looking backwards and forwards.

well, the light is coming from his left, but his shadows indicate the light is coming from the right. Other then that, it's fine.

actually its not. its coming from the left - only higher. the shadows are to the right and downward, indicating a high-left light source, which would be off the sig in the case of ice_dragon's sig.

Again, the text needs work. It's not blended, and it looks slapped on there. The renders aren't blended very well either, and it needs a border.

All I can say is UGH. Very low quality, two focal points, LOW LOW QUALITY, and lame text.

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ok, that the last time I post here.

Originally Posted by Prince Deity

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ok, that the last time I post here.

i lol'd

You seriously aren't related to Stony? Please tell me you are, that'll cheer me up IMMENSELY.

Originally Posted by musical zombie.

i lol'd

You seriously aren't related to Stony? Please tell me you are, that'll cheer me up IMMENSELY.

Didja hear? Stony's gone. Saharah and Razerkail finally did it!

You know, constructive criticism is a good thing. They've told you where you need to improve, and you sulk about it.

If you want someone to constantly say "10/10 GOOD JOB THAT'S AMAZING", you can probably find a program on google for it.

Originally Posted by Monty Burns

Didja hear? Stony's gone. Saharah and Razerkail finally did it!

NO WAI?!?!?!!?

really?

...plz?

Originally Posted by Prince Deity

I notice you saved in .JPEG format. That is one of the problems. Try .PNG next time.

And don't leave just because of criticism. That's the whole point of posting here.

Originally Posted by Monty Burns

Didja hear? Stony's gone. Saharah and Razerkail finally did it!

What happened??

Originally Posted by Prince Deity

ok, that the last time I post here.

I think its pretty good for starters. I would add a border and a few effects behind Zelda and Link. If you don't have photoshop, do what you can.

Oh, and please don't leave. I promise you, EVERYONE SINGLE PERSON in this thread started out making sigs like that. But look at our sigs now. Criticism works. Don't give up. We are here to help you get better. Don't take it personally, we admire your efforts.

New avvymatar made with beautiful PIXELZ!

It took me a while to figure out what it was. I see it now. Very clever and cute. I honestly don't know what to crit though. Maybe it could be a little bigger? That way more people won't be confused as to what it is. ^_^

Yeah, thats just how it came out when I drew it, and I could NEVER draw a pixel Dragon, si I went for Ice instead .