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Old 03-19-2007, 10:46 PM
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Hiya! This is my new comic, called 'Arf!' I don't have photoshop, so I used 'JASC Paint Shop Pro 4'. Its a Crono Trigger comic and its fun! Please
give me comments so I can get better at this! Everybody post!

Latest Episode:

(Episode 6) The Cinderblock Effect



Past Episodes:

(1) The Table that Fell From the Sky
(2) Robots will Beleive Anything
(3) Crono's Companion
(4) Bob the Assassin
(5) Insights of a Frog
(6) The Cinderblock Effect
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Old 03-21-2007, 04:54 PM
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Will you choose a series and stay committed already? I'm still waiting for the Lost Episode of Koopa Bros! XD

This is a very nice comic. Panel 14 with the stars hanging of string was my favorite part! ^_^
Also, the very last panel was downright hilarious!

The only things that I found some problems with is that you continue to misspell "Chrono." If you wish to spell it that way differently for this character, that's fine (but your banner has a typo). The world balloons were a little jagged.

All in all, great comic.

Oh, and...COMMIT!

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Old 03-21-2007, 05:05 PM
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Yay! A post!

Oh, the name of the game is 'Chrono Trigger' with an 'H' and the kid's name is 'Crono' with no H. That's because there was a 6 letter limit on names, and anyway Crono just looks cooler than Chrono. So yeah, my banner is wrong, but the name in the comic is right.

Yeah, I guess my ballons were jagged. I have to draw the tails by hand, before I place it on the frame, so its a lot of guesswork (and talent!) although I think they're the best I've made so far in my short life.

Episode 2 is done. Should I post it?
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:11 PM
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Tcha.

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Yeah, I guess my ballons were jagged. I have to draw the tails by hand, before I place it on the frame, so its a lot of guesswork (and talent!) although I think they're the best I've made so far in my short life.
You are coming along very nicely then. Sometimes I make a circle and erase some of it and use that for the tail.
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Old 03-21-2007, 05:43 PM
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Hmmm.... maybe I shouldn't have called it "Arf". But I can't think of a funnier name than arf. Arf arf arf. What does 'arf' mean anyways? Like a sea lion "ARF ARF!!" or what?

What the heck. Episode 2 is up.
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Old 03-21-2007, 07:02 PM
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That last one was funny. It was the table talking after all!
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Old 03-21-2007, 08:32 PM
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Yay! Heh, I thought that one was funny too. Especially the robot "BEEP!"

And I can't decide on a name. Like, "Crono's Adventure" or "This Could Happen To You So Feel Lucky That It Hasn't Yet" or something like that.

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Old 03-21-2007, 08:43 PM
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Howsabout Crono's Crisis, mysterious and edgy. That way you can stay 'hip and funky fresh'. Great comic by the way, a little confusing at the beginning, but great in all.

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Old 03-21-2007, 09:08 PM
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Not bad. Actually, that's good. Way better than Arf. And its hip. Hip, cool and modern. Plus its retro and its classic, because Chrono Trigger is a Retro Classic. Like Me.

P.S. Your comic banner in your sig. Where'd you get it? I want one!
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Old 03-22-2007, 03:59 AM
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Re: Arf!

Haha, I like where this is going. Note that this review is for the two comics displayed, so I'm gonna give a full review later on.

Sprites: 10/10
Nothing to say at all. Superb.

Backgrounds: 8/10
Not much to say yet. 8/10 because the ones I saw were good and fitted in, but maybe they'll turn out screwy/better.

Text: 10/10
Again, superb.

Humor: 8/10
Possibly the funniest Sprite Comic on ZU yet.

Story: --
It's the second comic. I can't say anything yet.

Special Effects: 7/10
Pretty good, nice text effects, movement, the works. It's nothing "OOOOHH, PRETTY!" though.


Possibly the best comic on ZU. It's only two comics, so there's no definite answer. I'll wait a few more comics and I'll give a definite answer.
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Old 03-22-2007, 03:49 PM
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Not bad. Actually, that's good. Way better than Arf. And its hip. Hip, cool and modern. Plus its retro and its classic, because Chrono Trigger is a Retro Classic. Like Me.

P.S. Your comic banner in your sig. Where'd you get it? I want one!
It's from Userbars for all! Make your own Userbars with Userbar Maker. There's a trick to getting the image the right size, but once you get it, it's easy.

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Old 03-22-2007, 04:50 PM
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Nice

Take a look


Nice! Stylin, simple, I like it! But I made my own and I think it's a little better. I'll make one for anybody who wants one and put it in my sig
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Old 03-23-2007, 08:22 PM
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Hmm, you do know that they named it 'Chrono Trigger' for the reference to it's root, "Time". So, in reality, it's name is "Time Trigger". Crono was taken from that to also represent it.

Anyhoo, GOLDSTUD! I swear, I adore you because you're such a CT fanatic. XD

I shouted "I adore these!" when I read the second one. I like the perspective you put on it. You and Bliz, man, awesome. <3

Plus 'ol monkey, there. I like him. Keep him. *heart*
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Old 03-24-2007, 11:53 PM
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Heh, CT Fanatic. You make it sound like a good thing. Well, it is.

Oh, yeah, and about the Chrono=Time thing, that's why the Chrono Trigger in the game (the egg) is called the Time Trigger, because it will allow you to replace something in a timestream. But that has nothing to do with this comic.

But episode 3 does! #3 is up, hooray! (I actually have #4 done but you don't get to see it yet )
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Old 03-26-2007, 06:59 PM
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Bleaugh! The posting is pathetic here. No posts for a whole issue, for 2 days!

Ah well, as long as no one's reading, I may as well double post. #4! I won't put it in the first post just yet. For no real reason.

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Old 03-26-2007, 11:20 PM
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Sorry Dude haven't been here for a While BUt...
COOLNESS OF WOW!!

This is really funny I mean the whole thing and it make's sense sort of I like the little dude at the frist he's cool!!

But I like your speech bubble's alot and there made with paint so there not automated like a can opener like some comic's here...
But anyway I like the falling furniture and that magus get's smash I don't need to rate this but still no comic is perfect but this is Close so for you 85/100
GUM GUM IT's fUn FuN YEAH!!
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Old 03-28-2007, 12:15 AM
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!!!! A POST!

Posts in here are like food to a starving man. Thank you Lurrrrre! You didn't just save my thread, you made my thread worth saving. WHEEEE! Thanks 85 out of 100 is a good score and i'm sure it would be better if I made it with an automated can opener like some people do. But since a can opener is too expensive all I have is my time and my head. Poor GoldStud.

But hey, dude, tell me what I'd have to do to get like a 90-95 out of 100. I'll take your critisizms i'm not a gub.
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Old 03-30-2007, 11:46 AM
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But hey, dude, tell me what I'd have to do to get like a 90-95 out of 100. I'll take your critisizms i'm not a gub.

O.k let me see. This an adventure between 2 freinds of some sort.
Though I find the story line going into complete confusion which isn't a good thing because I don't where the whole plot going? Oh and you put too much action it takes a lot away from the story!
Oh yes more humor may be required! Thats my opionin!
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Old 03-30-2007, 05:44 PM
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Hmmmmmmmmmm I have to say it looks nice and all, but I see that you did not explain the plot very well..................... and if you had a banner for every comic serise you made you would not even imagin the size of 3 1/2 pages of banners after your sig............
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Old 03-30-2007, 11:57 PM
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Number 3:

It was...okay. I'm thinking that the storyline is beginning to pale a bit from that. The random arguing. I dunno...

4:
A bit better. Magus's appearance isn't much of a shock, but I laughed out loud when the furniture squished him. And when the Nega-ette [that's what they are, isn't it?] had "Bob's" head. Heh.

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Oh, yeah, and about the Chrono=Time thing, that's why the Chrono Trigger in the game (the egg) is called the Time Trigger, because it will allow you to replace something in a timestream. But that has nothing to do with this comic.
Well, obviously. And of course, yours is much different than the actual game storyline. I was just informing the uninformed. =D
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