Lurrrre!'s comic of Good Times

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Here is Link's Kablahhh! Episode 2! Episode 1 got erased, not my fault. Enjoy this, even though its not that good. Note- I was very young when I made this, so it is very poor. Whatever.

It just goes to show how comics get betta if you take the critisizms of Morons!!!



Past Episodes:

(1) Attack of the Currrr!
(2) The United Nations Inspector
(3) Kalimar and ZeldaXX3
(4)ZeldaXX3 Kill's Kalimar
(5) Evil Mike sing's?
(6) Zelda is Fat!
(7) Link Sucks!

He keeps changing colors I don't know if their was something about that but I just did not know why. And the plot was pretty hard to follow, but other then that I love A-1 steak sauce

Well finaly I got this thing up here and in cass anyone is wondering why I have people in my comic from Zu it's called Guest staring oh and Blizzaga Said I could use the name Kalimar in here because he changed his name but he thought Kalimar was still a good name so he's letting me use it!!

Oh and he doe's change color on purpose so it keep's every one guessing!!
Ps sorry Shade the Sheika i made this when I was frist banned and thought it was you and what's his bucket's falt so don't take it personally

Okay Okay Take et easy!!

MY next one sould be up by Thursday Or friday or Some time next week,
oh and up there right now is episode 6 or five so look at the past episode's as well!!

Yay Funny and Awesome! You did well on these and made them really good! I like how that they make sense if you read them in order and they seem to have a good plot although it is Random! And Kalimar is my favorite character he looks so small and innocent like a happy little guy but he's really self-centered and Grubby! Episode 3 is the best of them all its by far the funniest anyway keep it up!

I really like your comics, Lurrrre!. They're randomly funny. I especially like the last one since it was making fun of the South Park movie all the way through. I pictured the devil singing that song.

There are a few spelling errors here and there. The main font is a little hard to read at times and I don't appreciate the swearing, but other than that, I like it.

Thank's and Don't apreciate it all you want that's why it's there and the font's not hard to read you just need to take a few step's back from the cpu but thank's for pointing out problem's!!

Muy bien. Tu esta muy delicioso. Yo estoy mucho contento. I loved how you added the German in there. Do you use paint because dem speshal ef-x wuz incredi-bull.

Say, Lurrrre!, what program are you using to make your comics? I just might check it out. ^_^

Also, I love the "evil yellow box" thing. Try not to use it too much though or it will go stale.

You are a Stupid Nav! fetchith me mine cup!!

But yeah if you do over use thing's they go stale!!

Hey I like them when's the next one coming out???

Oh and I pm'd you Lurrrre!

Yeah, when is the next one coming out? Do I have to threaten you with my Random Ironing Board of Randomness?

*Waves board menacingly*

-1 for the introduction of Inyuasha....otherwise it's some good stuff. Little confusing at times, but I understood what you were doing. Was it kind of a take off to satan in the southpark movie? If not....then I guess I didn't know what you were doing. But yeah....no more Inuyasha....horrible...horrible anime.

...KAGOME! DAMMIT! LOL!

Why thank's Freak For the critizem And for giveing me a good Grade and yes it's after south Park Satan and NO I won't kill Inuyasha because he is the guest star ZeldaXX3!!

It's quite a good comic Lurrrre!
I like it, I didn't really like the Evil Mike singing one...I would like it if I knew the tune of the song (hint hint =]) But still I like these comics. Keep 'em up.

P.S.
'criticism' Not 'critizem' :wink: Just giving you a heads up =]

You are a stupid Nav young Gumbie!!
But now enjoy My next comic of Goodness and thank's everyone!!
Oh and yes I did spell "Iron" But it is ZeldaXX3 so it's okay!!

Number 5 is definitely my favorite. lol

Nice sprites, back drops, speech bubbles and
overall theme but please work on the grammar.

Keep up the great work!

Wow! El Stud is Impress'd! The part where Evil Devin jumps out of the Whale Thing was awesome he looked cool and your sword is awesome! Oh and it was funny when they fought over the coin and the Devin got eaten. And the Zelda Marle part was funny but you swore you bad Lurrrre you.... but other than that it was great!

Though it was a nice addition to your series, I found your fifth the less appealing to me.

The text on panels six and nine were hard to read because they were against the checkered floor. Next time you should either try talk bubbles or a different text color.

Panels 14 through the end seemed like a confusing mess that would have been better with some close ups, like with the crab stealing the coin. There was a huge lack of animation with the monster appearing, eating Kirby, then disappearing. It was uncomfortable reading the last half of the comic because of the very same background. This would have been fine if you did more close ups or something.

Lastly, I suggest you use a spell checker before writing in your comic. Here are some errors I noticed:

Iorn= Iron
Pearl= Peril
Bearly= Barely
Fily= Fly
Were= We're
Preciouse= Precious
Minate= Minute
Here= Hear

I don't know, but this comic felt like you just threw a bunch of stuff together. Your previous ones were really good, but this one feels like a tangle of wires. I respect your attempts at moving the plot along while having a fight, humor, and a kidnap going on at the same time. Though none of us are perfect, there's always room for improvement.

I'm looking forward to your next comic!

And this is why your a GumbieDoosh!!
But yeah I sould spell check every thing but dude you just click a button if you spell something wrong so the computer's fixing your mistake not you so thus your comic is Automated and it's not hard to read step back from the CPU you'd have to be blind not to see it But soon I will have my next one out shortly!!!