Well finaly I got this thing up here and in cass anyone is wondering why I have people in my comic from Zu it's called Guest staring oh and Blizzaga Said I could use the name Kalimar in here because he changed his name but he thought Kalimar was still a good name so he's letting me use it!!
Oh and he doe's change color on purpose so it keep's every one guessing!!
Ps sorry Shade the Sheika i made this when I was frist banned and thought it was you and what's his bucket's falt so don't take it personally
Yay Funny and Awesome! You did well on these and made them really good! I like how that they make sense if you read them in order and they seem to have a good plot although it is Random! And Kalimar is my favorite character he looks so small and innocent like a happy little guy but he's really self-centered and Grubby! Episode 3 is the best of them all its by far the funniest anyway keep it up!
-1 for the introduction of Inyuasha....otherwise it's some good stuff. Little confusing at times, but I understood what you were doing. Was it kind of a take off to satan in the southpark movie? If not....then I guess I didn't know what you were doing. But yeah....no more Inuyasha....horrible...horrible anime.
Wow! El Stud is Impress'd! The part where Evil Devin jumps out of the Whale Thing was awesome he looked cool and your sword is awesome! Oh and it was funny when they fought over the coin and the Devin got eaten. And the Zelda Marle part was funny but you swore you bad Lurrrre you.... but other than that it was great!
Though it was a nice addition to your series, I found your fifth the less appealing to me.
The text on panels six and nine were hard to read because they were against the checkered floor. Next time you should either try talk bubbles or a different text color.
Panels 14 through the end seemed like a confusing mess that would have been better with some close ups, like with the crab stealing the coin. There was a huge lack of animation with the monster appearing, eating Kirby, then disappearing. It was uncomfortable reading the last half of the comic because of the very same background. This would have been fine if you did more close ups or something.
Lastly, I suggest you use a spell checker before writing in your comic. Here are some errors I noticed:
I don't know, but this comic felt like you just threw a bunch of stuff together. Your previous ones were really good, but this one feels like a tangle of wires. I respect your attempts at moving the plot along while having a fight, humor, and a kidnap going on at the same time. Though none of us are perfect, there's always room for improvement.
And this is why your a GumbieDoosh!!
But yeah I sould spell check every thing but dude you just click a button if you spell something wrong so the computer's fixing your mistake not you so thus your comic is Automated and it's not hard to read step back from the CPU you'd have to be blind not to see it But soon I will have my next one out shortly!!!