The Misadventures of Fox McCloud: Staring Fox McCloud.

First off, please, other spriters don't send me hate PMs. This first one was sorta to make sure I remember the basics. I don't think it has too much humor, but the ones to follow will be way better. (Also, if anyone can find some good Starfox-like backrounds with panels, please let me know)

Die Mario!
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I take no credit for any sprites. Remember they will get much better. Mario was not harmed in the making of this comic...but poor Wario...

I know it only has 5 panels. But its an intro dammit.

Wow, kind harsh for poor mario there....what the hell!
7.5/10!
Maybe make fox bigger? And the speech bubbles les....white? I'm sure you'd probably know how, right? You can PM me for help!

Um, It's really blurry, but I was able to read it. It's good!

Originally Posted by Solink

Wow, kind harsh for poor mario there....what the hell!
7.5/10!
Maybe make fox bigger? And the speech bubbles les....white? I'm sure you'd probably know how, right? You can PM me for help!

Yeah, i'll use bubbles instead of the boxes for the talking parts. And we all know Mario had it coming...but Link, he won't have it any easier. And Fox will be bigger in the next one.

That'll be out tommorow or Tuesday.

Switch to imageShack. Now. hotobucket has problems, the Blur everything. Imageshack is better nowadays.

Or Imagehost. They have good size and no blurs.

Give my soar throat all the credit for getting it on here. Or else i'd be "there" *shudders*
http://img170.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic7oy0.png

All sprites from the spriter's resource. I take no credit. Hosted on imageshack.

Wow......weird. Funny, but weird.
8.3/10

Issue 3 was made yesterday but I fell asleep. Enjoy. Issue 4 will be on between later today and the weekend. All sprites are from TSR and backgrounds from one of the links AM gave me.

Woah dude, you have enough white space there?

The comics was okay, mostly graphicwise. The backgrounds were good, and you had some speech bubbles.

The humor was the thing I didn't like. I really didn't understand it because you had text boxes and unneeded lines everywhere. It was hard to understand it with all of the text. And the swearing. Comics can have some profanity, but don't go overboard with it. These comics didn't, but I'm warning you for your future comics...

Why was there fire on the speech bubble...?

Well...thank you, I usually don't have good humor without link, so the next should be better. No, white space is da bomb...but really I didn't know how much i'd need. I kept changing it and just go pissed. And...well....comics get on fire sometimes...or it got misplaced. I also only consider "profanity" something that gets bleeped out or you don't see on regular t.v. shows. I used S*** and the other I saw was "crap" which really isn't that bad. I'm sorry, i'll use less or none next time.