Neko Demon's Sprite Comics!

I'm a newbi at this stuff so don't make fun of me okay. Here is my first one they kinda have no point by the way.

I want to give credit to my sis for nameing Samus Aran Pwn Master. Here's the continuation.

i;m gonna stay away from this for the time being...

I know the majority of people think it sucks ok all of you I bet but it'll get better if you give me time to improve.

Yeah,you will. If you add a plot of somekind,it will get better,and you will get lesser negativity. Try taking a look at the other ones that have a plot,and use that as a base for your next one. you can always look at mine(if you're gonna do a RPG styled comic)

I've got a plot u just can't see it yet because I've been busy with school and work and working at home so I don't have all that much time to do this kinda stuff everyday

For the moment I have this to say:

Sort out the comic panels, mere lines and a black background do not make a comic.

Random Example.

The backgrounds are not just one colour and are not boring, There are four panels in each comic all equal in size.

The way you resize the sprites you use is horrible:

Spriting Guide (Includes Resizing).

The Blood on the second comic needs more detail, there is a tutorial out there for making proffesional sprited blood but I do not have time to look for it.