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You're in, Queen Bee. :3
First things first, what do you want to be learning? From what I can see, there are a few things you could improve on: render choice, render placement, background effects and involving the render itself. There's a tutorial I wrote floating around here somewhere that deals with some of this stuff. It teaches the basic composition elements of a signature, and
you might find it useful.
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Central render placement is pretty much always a bad thing. Anyway, this is quite nice, but I'd like to see a version without the scanlines. They're not something I'd recommend personally. The text isn't that good either, I'd axe that.
The background doesn't work here. The render looks completely uninvolved, and the glowy thing doesn't really help. It's better placed this time, but the text is badly placed again, and the colour of it is completely off. It doesn't help to use different fonts either. I always used to use Stark, and it just got lame after a while. I don't always bother with text anymore, it can ruin pieces if not done right.
Okay, that canvas size just looks off. I wouldn't have it so tall, if I were you. Also, it looks like you saved it as a JPG from the distortion around the text. JPG makes me a saaaad panda! The background isn't very exciting here, which would help. Also text asjaosifapsfasf.
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Much much better flow here, but the render is all whited out, which isn't so good. The text is bad again though. :|
Try reading that tutoiral I liked to Zarah and keep the stuff in mind. Also, remember you don't have to do text, as that's the biggest most obvious flaw in your signatures.
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Ehh... Text is a real issue here. Take a gander at that tutorial I linked Zarah to and try another. :3
08-25-2009, 10:35 AM
