The Legend of Zelda: THE LAND BEYOND THE BLACK SHADOW (7/02/08)

A BEHIND THE MASK PRESENTATION

::: THE LEGEND OF ZELDA :::
THE LAND BEYOND THE BLACK CURTAIN

NOTES: I have managed to work up my idea for a future Zelda game and Ive decided to post it for you all to read. I warn however that its not in its finished form and for now I will only post some of my ideas and such.

STORY: Following the events of Twilight Princess, Link now finds himself on a journey that will change the way he sees the world. To become a hero, one must understand the world and thrive to learn all they can; this is what Link strives to do. And his trek has brought him outside of Hyrule, past Death Mountain and into a land unknown. But, with in light of his arrival, he discovers he cannot leave Now, if Link ever wishes to return home to Hyrule, he must face new enemies and make new allies.

MEANING OF TITLE: The title of the game may seem somewhat confusing. Allow me to inform you that the title has nothing to do with an actual curtain, rather the title symbolizes Links journey beyond the known world of Hyrule past the dark side of the map which goes unmarked.

CHARACTERS: With the exception of Link, you will not likely find many familiar faces. New characters will be introduced with unique and differing personallities. As of yet, I few characters fully fleshed out. Some of the characters already created with personallity in mind inclde such characters a an army general, a new fairy (named Knowl, and will not be very much like Navi) and some others unique beings.

SPECIES: Common species in the Zelda Series are usually Hyrulians, Gorons, Zoras, Dekus, Gerudos, ect. My idea lacks these with slight exception. The 'humans' in my story are dominatly more human looking (rounded ears, though some may raise questions with pointed ones) and the Gorons, Zoras and Gerudos are absent with few dekus. This may seem odd, but some species are added. Taking the place of Zoras are 'Privateers' mostly appearing human with a light blue color (possibly Zora descendants). Some other ideas are in development.

WEAPONS & EQUIPMENT: This story will lack several weapons from Twilight Princess, such as the Ball & Chain, Iron Boots and other such heavy items. The reason for this is Links loss of 'Hammerspace' due to Midna's absence (she could store things in twilight). Some new ideas will be brought. Also its noteable to say that Link will not start the main game with all weapons. Once I post the main idea (later) it shall be explained.

BOSSES & MINI-BOSSES: A main problem I have with the Zelda Series is that as time has passed, the bosses have become easier as their weaknesses are pointed out. I want bosses and mini-bosses to actually be a challenge rather then an annoyance. Also, while I play to keep the 'Giant Monster' Boss ideas, I want to introduce other concepts.

***This is only a preveiw of my main ideas, mostly becasue to type it all up would take some time, rather Ive decided to update this thread every once and awhile depending on the number of posts given.

If you have questions or opinions, I'll be happy to address them. But for now, tell me what you think of my idea? I hope to add more soon, complete with pictures and such of boss ideas and characters.

POST AWAY

ok i like it. but why is it that whenever link goes to a new land he can never seen to leave unless he first defeats some big giant boss guy. kinda weird...

Wow, really well written out. You should draw some of the new species. Love to see more ideas!

Man I hate how fanfics are so good yet so bad.There real creative (somtimes) like this one but are pointless because they won't come true.

This is pretty cool, but just to be precise, it should be LAND BEYOND THE BLACK SHADOW, seeing as all the other Zelda games don't have 'the' before the title.
Ex. The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time, as opposed to
The Legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time.
It still is an interesting concept, it makes me think of the possibilities.

The Legend of Zelda: THE LAND BEYOND THE BLACK SHADOW (7/02/08)

::: THE LEGEND OF ZELDA :::
THE LAND BEYOND THE BLACK CURTAIN

You're going to need to pick one or the other.

Originally Posted by The Illusion

This is pretty cool, but just to be precise, it should be LAND BEYOND THE BLACK SHADOW, seeing as all the other Zelda games don't have 'the' before the title.
Ex. The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time, as opposed to
The Legend of Zelda: The Ocarina of Time.
It still is an interesting concept, it makes me think of the possibilities.

The Legend of Zelda: The Wind Waker
The Legend of Zelda: The Minish Cap

Wow. Im actually getting posts.

I'll start with a small update detailing a major character and posting a picture.

However, for the picture, I ask that you note that the picture posted is from a long time ago, but in facial features and body is the character. Clothes and weapons will be replaced when I redraw:

General Burldon S. Blavonovich :::

http://www.animeforum.com/image/7974047808018cbfdb.png

- This picture is old, basically recycled from one of my older stories. The image is hand-drawn but colored in microsoft paint. Aspects that will remain are the basic facial features (Hair Color will be turned more brown) the brace on the leg will stay (I've always considered the brace a powerful visual feature)... The clothes will defiantly be order to be based on medieval and ancient clothing (For his clothing, consider General Hannibal Barca, I want that sorta look)

::: ROLE IN STORY :::

Burldon's role in the story is a heavy mix of an ally an enemy. For about 3/4 of the story, Burldon proves a massive obstacle to Link, even at one point playing the role of a Dungeon boss (I'll defiantly explain this in descript when I get the chance).

Burldon is the General of the Blue Hammer Army (Named based on Red Army)... He is characterized with a good sense of humor, brillance on the feild of battle, and most majorly... a slight instability on his part. Burldon tends to break into a low laughter/giggle when put into a situation of incredible stress or has difficulty making a descision.

Burldon's role in the land is one of a sort of rebel. Though he owes no allegiance to any of the powers, he has managed to hold a base in every region (I'll post a map here as well). Burldon's main weapon is a large hammer which he weilds with ease. Also, when Link losses his weapons at the beginning of the story, Burldon comes into possession of Double Claw-Shot and shows no intention of relenquishing it.

Burldon also has several questionable aspects about him. Many theorize that he has pointed ears by the fact that he wears the ear flaps of his Ushanka down. Others also theorize he has origins in the Music Box Town.

***MAPS BELOWS***

REGION MAP
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MUSIC BOX TOWN
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SPEAR POINT
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PRIVATEERS DOMAIN
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Ichabod - Lol... I feel stupid. Thanks for pointing that out comrade

i dont think that being Midna-less would be a storage problem

in other games he clearly had lots of hammerspace

Originally Posted by Ichabod_L

You're going to need to pick one or the other.


The Legend of Zelda: The Wind Waker
The Legend of Zelda: The Minish Cap

Exceptions to every rule, but without 'the', it sounds more appropriate.

that is a rely cool idea i like it

wow i've not had a proper look (i am now) but the maps look impressive. i'm bust reading this thread through.

nice map

HATE IT
Let nintendo do there job.

Originally Posted by Stenner

HATE IT
Let nintendo do there job.

I'm happy with letting Nintendo do their job but theres nothing wrong with wishful thinking.

If you're gonna give criticism I'd refer it to be in the form of actual criticism rather then a mindless blurt out of "HATE IT"!

Also, Seeing as how there are actually people posting again I plan to make an update in the short future... `Thank you all for posting.

Originally Posted by Stenner

HATE IT
Let nintendo do there job.

-.- Pathetic.

Originally Posted by BEHIND THE MASK

Also, Seeing as how there are actually people posting again I plan to make an update in the short future... `Thank you all for posting.

haha, you still need to change the first post title to match the thread title ^_^. i really enjoy reading this idea, you should continue with it.

Originally Posted by ZantDarksage

haha, you still need to change the first post title to match the thread title ^_^. i really enjoy reading this idea, you should continue with it.

I cant find how to *sighI tried editing it through advanced on my first post but i got nothing.

im not criticizing*

Originally Posted by Stenner

im not criticizing*

your right, your just being a jerk because you cant come up with any good fanfic.

i like this fanfic alot, btw,

Originally Posted by DrFeelGood666

your right, your just being a jerk because you cant come up with any good fanfic.

i like this fanfic alot, btw,

Wow, I had completly forgot about this project Furthermore I cant believe it was resurrected...

I'm sorry to inform that I've moved on to grander projects, mostly my attempt at the creation of a new era Hyrule... I hope to post a small fiction soon explaining the setting and such but progress is slow.

Though, it is nice to look back on my old work for inspiration.