LOZ: goddess staff

[smartypants0224]

i noticed a lot of people posting their ideas for zelda games, so i've decided to add mine. i know it's still in the raw, so go easy on the criticism

the game starts off with link in a forest town similar to ordon, except more sacred. ya know, stone buildings and architecture. link is asleep and he is in the middle of a nightmare. in it he stands in the ruins of a temple. a shadow looms over him laughing "it's mine now!" he wakes up startle to a voice. it's a friend of his. link goes outside and he and his friend wander to a "playground." this is where basic techniques are learned. his friend reminds him that he must visit the town's sage. link runs off to an old smoky hut. a tall man stands in the back covored in a dark cloak. he tells link a brief history of hyrule, that there are three orbs that the goddesses left behind representing earth, fire, and water. the sage also tells link that he sences a dark force coming to the land and fears that darkness will consume them all. he tells link that these orbs have the power to protect hyrule from this force. he sends link to retrieve the first orb in the forest. link must accomplish some tasks to get a sword and shield before leaving the village. upon entering the forest, link hears a noice in the distance. he sees several monsters huddled around a tree, growling. link defeats them only to have a fairy fly out from inside the bush. she travels with link from now on. he goes to the temple in the forest and retrieves the first orb. he brings it back to the sage and the sage tells him a little history of a dark demon known as ganandorf. link travels to death mountain and gets the next orb. he brings it back to the sage and the sage tells him more of ganandorf and tells about an ancient hero. link finally makes it to lake hylia and zora domain to retrieve the final orb. he brings back the final orb to the sage's hut to find that he has vanished. villagers tell link that monsters have taken him to an ancient mountain located behind a gated area of hyrule castle. link reaches the gate where monsters have the sage. he frees the sage, and he opens the gate. he and link flee to the mountain peak. link presents the third orb, and the sage tells of the triforce and how it's power lies in three chosen people. he says how ganandorf was a chosen one, but he had his power stripped from him (reference from TP). he says how he wants power again and revenge on those who stole it from him. the sage introduces zelda to link and explains that she holds a key to an altar in the mountain where the orbs are to be placed. link fights his way to the altar. zelda and the sage follow him. zelda uses her power to open the door and the sage runs in and places the orbs on the altar, revieling a hidden room where a wooden staff is standing, with a golden orb on top. the sage goes to the staff and says, "it's mine now!" he takes the staff and explains that ganandorf cannot again have the power of the gods, and so he plans to control the gods instead, using the goddess staff. the sage then reveals himself as ganandorf. he uses the staff to call down the golden goddesses, who now are more like dark shadows. he orders them to lock up link and zelda and to strip them from their triforces. zelda is captured but link escapes. it's starting to get long, and i'm getting tired, so i'll rap it up quickly. zelda learns about three ancient temples. he plans on going to them to find zelda. in each temple he has to fight a goddess. after winning he learns something. he learns that if the power of a chosen one is lost, it finds a new host. he learns that the only way to defeat ganandorf is with the master sword and that he, link, is the reincarnation of the ancient hero, and that zelda has lost her powers. link goes to the temple of time where all three goddesses are. still under ganandorfs control, they attack. link defeats them and learns that he houses his own power and has recieved ganandorfs power and zeldas too. he has the complete triforce. he uses it to open a gateway in the temple of time to reveal the master sword. upon drawing it, he enters the sacred realm where ganandorf has claimed as his own. link must find three temples to get the three keys needed to reach ganandorf in ganon's tower. link fights ganondorf in the tower, wins of course, saves zelda and hyrule.
holy crap. i know that was long. i'm open to suggestions.

[formula1]

I suggest telling the..
Antagonist, Reason why they are the antagonist, their emotions involved and links involvement
What Link has to go through to defeat them

ANd in all... make it a little more organized... I'm not a fan of big blocks of texts... though I am a fan of potentially good ideas...

ANd your idea may be a good one...
-Keep in mind though... If you want to write out a story, fan fiction might provide more criticisms that this forum will not... Otherwise... I can't really tell you if I like your idea... just because... I don't have the patience for it...