Legend of Zelda: World Gates

[Ritogirl]

This game is a direct sequel to Twilight Princess and occurs a year later. Link has joined "The Group" and they have heard reports of people, including Princess Zelda, disappearing, and monster sightings around Lake Hylia. Link goes there and he spots Midna (in her Twilli form). She waks past him and into the Lanayru's Cave wordlessly and Link follows. He enters the cave and sees Midna disappear into the spring. Link looks to see where Midna has gone and he falls in.
Instead of landing in the water Link falls from the sky and lands in the middle of a jungle while his sword fall into a nearby village. He is knocked out and is awakened by a roar he sees a terrible grey monster in the jungle and he begin to flee. He runs through the forest in a state of panic. He hears a humming noise. He sees a hummingbird hovering above him and it asks "Are you OK?" He is obviously startled and nearly. The hummingbird introduces as Iris a kind, timid Hummingbird, from the nearby village of Orwell. She explains that he is now in Avalon where the rules of reality are thin and talking Beasts and fairies are the native inhabitants.
"People like you show up all the time. They come from different worlds becuase they claim to see something they want and then they find themself in this world." explains Iris. She also asks for his help helping a human (Animals can't recognize the different human races) girl who is injured and captured by Boars. Iris and LInk set off to Orwell village.

This is the setup for the game. It revolves around animal transformations (which is never forced on you and are more necessary for the gameplay). Wolf Link as well as an eagle and a seal transformation are the three animals that Link may transform into with special transformation outfit. Zelda and Iris are key players in the games plot and eventually Link will be reunited with Midna.

[Goronlove7]

This game is a direct sequel to Twilight Princess and occurs a year later. Link has joined "The Group" and they have heard reports of people, including Princess Zelda, disappearing, and monster sightings around Lake Hylia. Link goes to Lanayru's Spring where most of the sightings have been reported and he spots Midna (in her Twilli form). She leaves the spring wordlessly and Link follows. he exits the spring and sees Midna disappear into the water. Link looks to see where Midna has gone and he falls in. Instead of landing in the water Link falls from the sky and lands in the middle of a jungle while his toward and scabbard fall into a nearby village. He is knocked out and is awakened by a roar he sees a terrible grey chimerical monster in the jungle and he begin to flee. He runs through the forest in a state of panic. He hears a humming noise. He sees a hummingbird hovering above him and it asks "Are you OK?" He is obviously startled and nearly. The hummingbird introduces as Iris a kind, timid Hummingbird, from the nearby village of Orwell. She explains that he is now in Avalon where the rules of reality are thin and talking Beasts and fairies are the native inhabitants. "People like you show up all the time. They come from all over space and time and no one seems to know why." explains Iris. She also asks for his help helping a human (Animals can't recognize the different human races) girl who is injured and captured by Boars.
This is the setup for the game. It revolves around animal transformations (which is never forced on you and are more necessary for the gameplay). Wolf Link as well as an eagle and a seal transformation are the three animals that Link may transform into with special transformation outfit. Zelda and Iris are key players in the games plot and eventually Link will be reunited with Midna.

Like the vocabulary the idea is o.k but I shouldn't criticize it's better than mine LOL.

[Verrick]

Hello, nice fan fic. I hate it. Goodbye.

[Ritogirl]

Originally Posted by Rhalen

Hello, nice fan fic. I hate it. Goodbye.

Some constructive criticism could be nice. Animals are a key element, but importance is placed on trust. The final boss is an NPC and the second part of the game revolves around finding out who that character is. To do this you must is "The Book of Truth" an omnescent tome that is written in an ancient launguage which can be decoded by finding six peices of a Rosetta stone like-object known as the Piedraverdad. I know the beginning may sound a bit dull but it will get better. Also as Avalon is a realm connected to all worlds a variety of races will be present form, terminian Deku, to desert dwelling Rito (they evolved similarly to Dragon Roost Rito but are not from the Great sea), and an previously unseen world where sencient Dodongo live.

[The Great Panda]

Yeah, no offense, but I can't understand half of what you're saying. Something about Midna and hummingbirds.

[Verrick]

Originally Posted by Ritogirl

Some constructive criticism could be nice. Animals are a key element, but importance is placed on trust. The final boss is an NPC and the second part of the game revolves around finding out who that character is. To do this you must is "The Book of Truth" an omnescent tome that is written in an ancient launguage which can be decoded by finding six peices of a Rosetta stone like-object known as the Piedraverdad. I know the beginning may sound a bit dull but it will get better. Also as Avalon is a realm connected to all worlds a variety of races will be present form, terminian Deku, to desert dwelling Rito (they evolved similarly to Dragon Roost Rito but are not from the Great sea), and an previously unseen world where sencient Dodongo live.

I don't review fanfics. It it was a game idea I'd give it some thought, but for now it's diddly-squat.

[Ritogirl]

Originally Posted by The Great Panda

Yeah, no offense, but I can't understand half of what you're saying. Something about Midna and hummingbirds.

Hold on I'll edit the first post to make it clearer. The second part will get into more of the gameplay elements.

[Hylian Princess]

Rhalen--you don't have to give constructive criticism, but evem if you're joking you shouldn't say you hate someone's work. It's hard to TYPE sarcasm, and when you send messages like that to some people they'll get upset.
Sorry if that sounded mean, I'm just saying that not everyone can tell the difference.

[avroillusion]

That's very Oracles; the transformations I mean. But your game mechanic ideas don't seem too bad. The big thing that worries me is why/how is Midna back in Link's world and what business does she have in Avalon? Avalon is kind of a cliche name for a place, too. Also, is the fact the Princess is missing widely known or kept secret from the public? If not, Hyrule's people should be panicking. If they had know how much danger the Princess was in during TP, things wouldn't have been as peaceful as it was ingame. And why such a complicated name for the tablets?

What are you going to do with this? Make a fancomic or something?

[M Sicopath]

This sounds pretty interesting. I like how you've updated MM to fit into TP's storyline, and also how you draw in characters from different realms.

Have you heard of Ravenloft? I can't help but think about that as I read some of your descriptions. That's not a bad thing, either.

[Wolf_of_Shadows]

The sequel to TP is good but I don't understand what Midna has to do with this? She's back in the Twilight Realm! and the Twilight Mirror is destroyed.

[Ritogirl]

To answer avroillusion and Wolf_of_Shadows Avalon is connected to alot of Realms including the Twilight Realm. One of the peices of the Pierdaverdad is in the Twilight Realm. You get to explore Termina, Exodus (world of the Rito), the Twilight Realm (the world itself was barely included in TP), Lime (the world of Dodongo's). avroillusion I thought Avalon was a fitting name due to the fact that it's the home world of the fairies and Zelda had only been missing for an hour (The Group were informed instantly due to Hyrule's incompetent army) so the news didn't have time to spread.
Part 2 Orwell Prison
Link arrives at the gate but the Ram guards won't let them in. Iris tries to reason with him but all the say is "Four legs good, two legs bad. Four legs good two legs bad."
Iris explains they won't let Link in unless he's an animal. Iris's friend Jones knows the location of an artifact that can turn man into beast. Jones will tell where the item is but only after he cuts the grass. Because Link has lost his sword Jones lends him a wooden one. After he cut the grass he tells him the item is a tunic hidden in a cave full of monsters. After fighting his way through he is awarded with the Wolf's Tunic, which allows him once again to become Wolf Link and to enter Orwell village.
The Rams allow him to pass and he arrives at a hate rally against humanity. The Pigs show the supposed suffering of the animals at the hands of man. After the speech, the head Pig Alexander mentions they have captured a human girl and locked her in Orwell Prison and found a human sword which they have confiscated in the storage area of said prison.
Link sneaks into the barn, which is the prison in built over he digs into the floor hidden under a hay bale and enters Orwell Prison. The structure of this level is similar to Goron mines he has to rescue several Animal prisoners to get the Big Key. In this dungeon he find his metal sword and finds an item only usable as wolf Link the Grappling Muzzle which allows him to duplicate the Midna jump technique with certain objects. The puzzles in this dungeon are either solvable by Link or Wolf Link As he uses this technique to get to higher floors he discovers that the upper stories of the Prison are actually a slaughterhouse. He rescues two more animals on this floor and the Big Key is completed.
The boss of the Dungeon is a giant mechanical butcher who can only be defeated by reaching the top with the Grappling Muzzle and then switching to Link and using to sword to hit the weak point on the back of the machines head. The butcher falls apart after three hits and it is really Alexander using technology from behind the "End Gate" to destroy intruders who discover their secret. He gives Link the Key to the cell where the girl is held as long as he promises not to reveal their secret. The girl turns out to be Agitha (didn’t expect that did you) who is grateful to Link for saving her and gives him a piece of a key that can unlock the Avalon Gates.

[formula1]

Can you organize this a bit?
Is this even gameplay or story?
If this is story... then... Could you explain the story in abstract instead of specifics?

I don't know where storys go honestly... but I've been told fan fiction... so...
If you want to make a decent Future Zelda Game, tell us your abstract. If you want to make a story, other places will help you with that and criticize correctly...

[Ritogirl]

Originally Posted by formula1

Can you organize this a bit?
Is this even gameplay or story?
If this is story... then... Could you explain the story in abstract instead of specifics?

I don't know where storys go honestly... but I've been told fan fiction... so...
If you want to make a decent Future Zelda Game, tell us your abstract. If you want to make a story, other places will help you with that and criticize correctly...

It is suposed to be a game idea. Can you tell me how to write a good abstract? I would like to incorperate some ideas from the plot but I am describing the game.

[Fluteboy]

Originally Posted by Hylian Princess

Rhalen--you don't have to give constructive criticism, but evem if you're joking you shouldn't say you hate someone's work. It's hard to TYPE sarcasm, and when you send messages like that to some people they'll get upset.
Sorry if that sounded mean, I'm just saying that not everyone can tell the difference.

[sarcasim]Yeah, but sarcasim is just so easy to recognize![/sarcasim]

HP has a point. We shouldn't be treating people's Ideas like dirt. A post like "I hate you're idea" is disrespectful and makes this beautiful site a cesspool of spamming squabling immature brats.

[Verrick]

Originally Posted by Hylian Princess

Rhalen--you don't have to give constructive criticism, but evem if you're joking you shouldn't say you hate someone's work. It's hard to TYPE sarcasm, and when you send messages like that to some people they'll get upset.
Sorry if that sounded mean, I'm just saying that not everyone can tell the difference.

You don't know me. I'm totally serious. I hate this.

Also, if that sounds mean, you should see some of the things I've said.

This is a fanfic. It should not be in the "Future Zelda" seciton. This constitutes no discussion to the future of the Zelda series. It's just another lame "I have a stupid cliche plot idea" threads.

[formula1]

Originally Posted by Ritogirl

It is suposed to be a game idea. Can you tell me how to write a good abstract? I would like to incorperate some ideas from the plot but I am describing the game.

Character and what their wants
-Their main place and where they go
--the reasons why

Master Mind-The antagonist
-Their main Base and why they go to different places (afraid of link and looking for help)
--The reasons why they are a threat

Link-The hero
-Where they start and where they have to go
--THe battles that are in each scenario
--The Reasons why they seek to defeat the threat

THis is one way of doing it... but its only one way...
You may think of a better way...

[Daphnes]

Rhalen, stop being mean. Leave the thread alone if you have nothing positive to say.

There's a fine line between future Zelda and fanfics, isn't there? So as long as it's Zelda related I think it fits fine.

Edit: I don't think it's too bad an idea for a game. You might want to space your stuff out into paragraphs for easy reading, though.

So Avalon is a kind of gateway world that connects to all other universes?

[Ritogirl]

Originally Posted by formula1

Character and what their wants
-Their main place and where they go
--the reasons why

Master Mind-The antagonist
-Their main Base and why they go to different places (afraid of link and looking for help)
--The reasons why they are a threat

Link-The hero
-Where they start and where they have to go
--THe battles that are in each scenario
--The Reasons why they seek to defeat the threat

THis is one way of doing it... but its only one way...
You may think of a better way...

Thank you Formula1. I think that's a Good layout. I'll try to summarize the game in that layout.
Except I'm not sure what you mean by character, are you talking about Link or someone else?

[formula1]

Originally Posted by Ritogirl

Thank you Formula1. I think that's a Good layout. I'll try to summarize the game in that layout.
Except I'm not sure what you mean by character, are you talking about Link or someone else?

It doesn't matter which one...
Just descirbe the imnportant characters and then the rest are just little helpers or obstacles and are no big deal...

Originally Posted by Daphnes

Rhalen, stop being mean. Leave the thread alone if you have nothing positive to say.

There's a fine line between future Zelda and fanfics, isn't there? So as long as it's Zelda related I think it fits fine.

Edit: I don't think it's too bad an idea for a game. You might want to space your stuff out into paragraphs for easy reading, though.

So Avalon is a kind of gateway world that connects to all other universes?

I agree with Rhalen here... These stories don't need to be here... I think that future Zelda should really focus on Gameplay. Story Lines will change... and there are plenty of other people that will actually read the story in fanfic...

[Ritogirl]

Originally Posted by Daphnes

Rhalen, stop being mean. Leave the thread alone if you have nothing positive to say.

There's a fine line between future Zelda and fanfics, isn't there? So as long as it's Zelda related I think it fits fine.

Edit: I don't think it's too bad an idea for a game. You might want to space your stuff out into paragraphs for easy reading, though.

So Avalon is a kind of gateway world that connects to all other universes?

Yes, I got the idea from Citagazzee form His Dark Materials, but Avalon is connected with them through gates rather than windows. For example the End Gate connects to Termina. However the Gates open randomly in most other worlds and mirages caused by these gates lure random people into Avalon. Becuase of this the population is extremely diverse. For example Rito, Twilli, and Gorons are all found in Mozaic City, the capital of Avalon.

[Rew]

There was a degree of fanficing involved to introduce the game idea here, but I think it very much belongs here in the Future Zelda section. Pure fanfic is stuff that the writer doesn't intend will be in any game. The OP of this thread, however, is suggesting something for a future game, albeit with a heavy focus on the story, which is fine. Some focus sheerly on gameplay, others on plot. I see no reason to exclude one or the other or to move either to a different section. Future Zelda is a broad umbrella, and I think this thread fits just as well underneath it as the other threads here.

Daphnes: Does that answer your earlier question?

[Daphnes]

Originally Posted by Rew

Daphnes: Does that answer your earlier question?

Thanks for supporting my thoughts. I feel that as long as it has to do with Zelda, then it should fit. There is