Old 04-11-2008, 07:42 AM   #1
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The Legend of Zelda: Sacred Blades

My story takes place in a peaceful time. Ganondorf has been locked away in the Dark World, and Hyrule is safe. One day, Ganondorf was plotting to escape the Dark World when he heard a voice. "Ganondooorf... Ganondooorf..." it said. "Who are you!" Ganondorf said. "I am _____. I will tell you how to escape the Dark World if you you killll the boy..." "Link?" Ganondorf asked. Yessss... "What has he done to you?" "More than you know... Do I have your word...?" "Yes." Ganondorf said. _____ shatters the barrier between the two worlds and Ganondorf escapes. The world is growing dark again. When the people of Hyrule seem lost, a Hero rises...



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Old 04-11-2008, 08:09 AM   #2
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"Link! Link! Wake up sleepyhead!" Link's friend Charre rudely awakens Link."It's time for the annual Ordon Festival!" "Okay... okay... I'm getting up. Link said. They go to the festival and have lots of fun. Before they know it, it's time for the sword fighting tournament. "Last call to enter! Last call!" the mayor said."Would anybody else like to enter?" "I would..." A towering knight in black armor rode over. "Uhh... okay..." the mayor said. The Black Knight had two swords instead of arms. You supposed to just hit your opponent 50 times to win. The Black Knight killed them. When it was time for him to fight Link... Well, I guess I'll leave that for part 3.




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Old 04-11-2008, 08:28 AM   #3
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Er. Is this a game idea, or just a story?
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"Okay... okay... I'm getting up. Link said.

Wait..... Link Talks?


Otherwise... It kinda Feels Like a Midevil Legend.... I like it...
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Old 04-11-2008, 01:51 PM   #5
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its a game idea
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Old 04-11-2008, 03:51 PM   #6
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yes he talks
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Old 04-11-2008, 03:53 PM   #7
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yes he talks
Wait...wait.

He Talks?

As in words coming out of his mouth?
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Another fanfic to fill up the Future Zelda section. I give this one 2 thumbs down and a kick in the face. (the kick is for link talking.)
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Old 04-11-2008, 04:48 PM   #9
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Yeah, it kind of seems like a hastily put together story, rather than an idea for a game.
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Old 04-11-2008, 04:49 PM   #10
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that was a little harsh Rhalen.
but he is right, on the Link talking part, the fact is that Link does not talk and never should talk and that is what makes him Link.
other than that, I for one would like to read the 3rd part of this story, and also if you have some gameplay elements already planned out, I would also like to see that too.
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Old 04-11-2008, 06:44 PM   #11
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link doesnt actually talk it just shows words on the bottom of the screen and that only happens when you beat two files and start the third file
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Old 04-11-2008, 06:57 PM   #12
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little change in part 2 when the black knight starts killing the mayor tells him to stop and he kills the mayor. all the people flee except link and charre
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Old 04-12-2008, 08:55 AM   #13
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you win link doesnt talk
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Old 04-12-2008, 08:56 AM   #14
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i was just kidding about him talking
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Old 04-12-2008, 09:16 AM   #15
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The Black Knight then turns Ordon Village into Dark Ordon Village, the first dungeon. He flees into the dungeon and Link and Chane[I changed Charre's name] go in after him. You can then choose either Link or Chane. You can switch between them whenever you want. Halfway throug the dungeon they find the miniboss, a giant stalfos. When they go through the boss door they find the Black Knight, who flees again and leaves behind a giant scorpion, the first boss. Beat him, get the Heart Container, and take the portal outside. Chane tells Link they are the only ones who can stop the Black Knight. Ordon Village is cured now. Meanwhile, Ganondorf is hunting Link down. Link and Chane are in the Faron Woods resting at a spot they thought was safe when Ganondorf burts through the trees. "We have to find the King and escape!'' Chane yells. He calls Epona and his horse, Sharim. You then have to ride all the way to Castle Town. Over the years, Eldin Bridge was breaking so they turned it into a rope bridge. Once you cross Eldin Bridge a cutscene happens. Link and Chane cut the ropes just in time and Ganondorf falls down the pit. "Believe me, he's not dead." Chane says.They turn around and gasp as they face Dark Castle Town.



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I suppose you were just kidding about that quintuple post, too. You know, there's this wonderful little device called the "Edit Button." It looks something like this:



Normally, I wouldn't recommend abusing anything, but please, abuse the edit button. It can mean the difference between sounding like a well-mannered young man/lady or a Neanderthal. Anyway, harshness aside, this isn't a very thought-out story. There's no form, the grammar is FUBAR, and you made Link talk. Why, why, why do people insist on making him talk?
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that was a little harsh Rhalen.
but he is right, on the Link talking part, the fact is that Link does not talk and never should talk and that is what makes him Link.
other than that, I for one would like to read the 3rd part of this story, and also if you have some gameplay elements already planned out, I would also like to see that too.
Yeah, well I'm tired of fan fics in the Future Zelda section.

If you have a story idea, go to the fanfics board, not Future Zelda.

This is by no means even a new idea for a game! It's a fanfic if I ever read one, and I have read a fair number.
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whats a fanfic anyway
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whats a fanfic anyway
fan made fiction. A story based off of a game, series of books, or other such things. These are not cannonical, and are just written for fun.
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it is not a fanfic
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Old 04-13-2008, 02:11 PM   #21
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At the end of the dungeon you see the Black Knight again, who flees and leaves behind a giant spider. Kill it and teleport out. Chane says,"Link, if the Black Knight came here then Zelda and the King would flee to the Hidden Village, the safest place. There you enter Dark Hidden Village. The boss is now the Black Knight himself. Beat him and he reveals he is Link's long lost brother, Joint.[Get it? Link, Joint, Chane?]



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Old 04-13-2008, 02:12 PM   #22
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And _______ name is now Zephos! Cool name huh? It just popped into my head at lunch.
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And _______ name is now Zephos! Cool name huh? It just popped into my head at lunch.
Yeah, real original... [/sarcasm] *Looks at The Windwaker*

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Normally, I wouldn't recommend abusing anything, but please, abuse the edit button. It can mean the difference between sounding like a well-mannered young man/lady or a Neanderthal. Anyway, harshness aside, this isn't a very thought-out story. There's no form, the grammar is FUBAR, and you made Link talk. Why, why, why do people insist on making him talk?
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What do you mean Daemonius?
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What do you mean Daemonius?
The wind god-Zephos, who got his name from a Roman god of the wind (east or west wind)

Anyways, this is so a fanfic. It's not a game idea. It talks nothing about anything but the plot, and that's a fanfic. If you actually talked about every puzzle in game, control mapping, enviornments (big time detail), and those sorts of things, it would be a fanfic that belonged here.

As is, this is fan made fiction told in story form. Fanfic.
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zephos is not in windwaker
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zephos is not in windwaker
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oh.... what about heliphos?
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oh.... what about heliphos?
Blatant rip off.

Why not make is like Sareladen (s's a's e's and r's make great fantasy names)
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