I wonder if Ninty would accept this...

I made up a Wii Zelda for the future. It's called Link and the Cyclops, a game that takes place that my mind always is: Dragonia, the Land of Dragons. Link teams up with a Dragonian God named Kargorok, and they set off to find the tools once used by the mythical Warrior of Dragons (green-clad Dragonian) and use them to defeat the evil King Hinox. I had the idea of animating Link from Wind Waker, and I'm making a guide for it (dungeons look kinda short). Dragonia takes form of Termina, but the town looks different, and there's no moon. What do you think?

Horrible title, unoriginal place and names, sorry, but its not too good.

Originally Posted by ShiekahSage

Horrible title, unoriginal place and names, sorry, but its not too good.

Second.

:glare Who cares what you think?!?!?! Friends at my school think it's great... anyone else who thinks my idea SUCKS must NOT POST IN HERE!!!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by 72hours192

Anyone who thinks that dude there is Zelda goes to my school. Do YOU...?

Right, that makes your friends totally reliable.

What...? What do you mean???

Well then-*Isn't allowed to post in here*

Originally Posted by 72hours192

What...? What do you mean???

That dude there isn't Zelda. He's called Link. If your friends at school think he's Zelda, they're not really very reliable on the subject of LoZ.

It sounds pretty horrible so far. The whole 'Dragonia' thing is not to great.

Title is pretty crappy. What does a Cyclops have to do with Dragons?

Just sounds pretty crappy all around.

try giving us a bit more detail about the game? such as:

Why is this King Hinox so evil and why must Link defeat him?

Because... aw, man! Haven't been planning this thing out too well, so GIVE ME TIME!!!

And if one more person posts an insult on this idea IS TOTALLY GOING TO FIND OUT JUST WHAT KIND OF GUY I AM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very few people at my school think Link's name is Zelda.

AND MAN I HAD THIS IDEA WHEN I WAS IN FIRST GRADE SO JUST CUT ME SOME SLACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by 72hours192

AND MAN I HAD THIS IDEA WHEN I WAS IN FIRST GRADE SO JUST CUT ME SOME SLACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...Soo, why are you telling it to us agai- *Gets booted once again*

72hours192, please don't capitolize your words like so. It insinuates that you are yelling (which results to flamming). You must also remember that everybody is intitled to have an opinion. And since you created this thread for comments, you must take in the good & the bad. Although it might not have been the reaction you were initially looking for, you must control your anger and take this as a teaching lesson. You said "Who cares what you think..." well clearly you do or wouldn't have struck that kind of tone.

Instead of lashing out on the people who have commented so far, read their comments, and try to improve on them. Give yourself a few more days to re-work your idea, and then give us your final product. You said you originally got this idea when you were in the first grade? Well I'm sure some time has passed, and more ideas have come up.

And if you try to flame another member here on ZU, you're "totally going to find out just what kind of a mod I am"

-BGS

Wait! I got it!

Okay, so the King Cyclops is some sort of guy who once threw Dragonia into darkness, or at least that was his succeeded attempt until the Dragon Gods showed up with that warrior dude (he's really a Dragonian version of Link) and they sealed Hinox away in hell. There, the great presence of hatred and desire of power (Zant, Ganon, etc.) awakened Hinox. The once-powerful Cyclops king drew deep of it and broke his seal.

Despite his previous evil times, his power was not yet all-restored. So he met the reborn Dragon Gods. He actually became their friends, but he was just wasting his time.

Hinox finally led them into the ruins of his palace, A.K.A. place of his death. They found the three Sacred Gems of Dragonia, and also the crown of black aura that Hinox once wore. Above was a prophecy. There was something about the jewelery that seemed familiar to the Dragon Gods, so they fled with the green and red jewels (the red one belongs to Kargorok and the green one belonged to the Warrior).

Hinox stayed because the jewelery left was the only source of his full power. The ancient ruins blew up, and out came the almighty King Cyclops! He succeeded in an attempt to capture one of the gods and make it part of his followers.

Hinox decided to build a bigger, better stronghold up in the darkest stormcloud in the heavens of Dragonia. Years later, he shattered Kargorok's red gem and scattered the three shards in the Forest, the Mountain, and the Ocean. That's where Link comes in!
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Get it?

It's much better now. Much Except the title, that could use a little work. I suggest: The Legend of Zelda: Land of the Dragons or The Legend of Zelda: King of the Cyclops or The Legend of Zelda: Sacred Gems of Dragonia.

Zzzzzzzzzzzz, sounds really boring and totally ripped-off.

First: The Dragon Gods are like the Triforce powers. Rip-off, anyone?

Second: The names of the characters are totally ridiculous. They are either too hard or too amateuristic.

Third: Sacred gems: been there, done that.

Fourth: Where are the old characters? Everyone's new or?

Fifth: I'm not even sure why I'm replying here. I think you're just taking the piss. You're not serious about this. If you are, then stop right here. As hard as it may sound; this is going nowhere and you're simply wasting your time by making up all of this nonsense.

I can hear the bigwigs up at Nintendo furiously taking notes as I type this.

Originally Posted by 72hours192

:glare Who cares what you think?!?!?! Friends at my school think it's great... anyone else who thinks my idea SUCKS must NOT POST IN HERE!!!!!!!!!

....?

But you're asking us what we think about your idea..so we gotta be honest with you. I kinda like your idea...but...just...no

What is Ninty?

Work better on your work. You know what happened the last time Nintendo published a game that had a story that was only worked on for 12 minutes.

"Gee, it sure is BORING around here..."

Originally Posted by Kazan

What is Ninty?

Its supposed to be a cute way of saying 'Nintendo'

When in actuallity it makes the person look uneducated.