Animal Wars

I wrote this awhile ago. It's like Star Wars but animals. I've written quite a lot so I'll post in segments.

Ch.1 Origin of The Empress and of The Resistance

A long time before the treaty between cats and humans was signed a small cat decided her dream. This cat would one day strike fear in the hearts of millions of people. This cat was now the Empress. Her actual name was Preciosa but after being abused by people she decided that she would take over the world.
She started a robot building program and made a robot army. At it’s head was her right-hand dog General Freckless. The Empress soon recruited other animals to serve her and to destroy the humans and the animals who stood in her way. She tricked her sister Halloween into believing that her human was evil. Halloween joined as the Empress’ apprentice so did Sparky the goat , and Cookie the dog. Darth Cat took over the USA. Darth Horn took over China. Darth Bark took over Russia and Canada. While the Empress took over the rest of the planet.
Then as all seemed lost a resistance led by the fat cat Precious, the dog Zelda, the chicken Hawk, and the human John Purcell tried to stop the Empress. The Resistance was founded when Zelda found out that Cookie had become Darth Bark. She then gathered the other members to help her find out why Cookie and most of the other animals she knew vanished. Along the way found out about the Empress’ plan to take over the Earth. When they got to the Empress’ lair in Mount Fuji they discovered that she was in space and had built a huge space station known as the litter box.

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Ch2. DARTH CAT

When they went back home they couldn’t get in. They heard Darth Cat’s voice and it meowed, “Stupid people you can’t get in.” Precious said ,“Halloween it’s me Precious.” Darth Cat answered angrily, “Don’t call me that I’m no longer going by that name.” Darth Cat stopped talking and opened the gates into town.
Our heroes went in and suddenly the gates swung shut. Darth Cat came down from a tree and said, “This shall be where the resistance falls.” She then coughed up a hairball and pulled out a spoon and said “Enguarde.” The resistance fought hard but it was in the end Darth Cat’s victory.
Darth Cat took her prisoners to prison, but Precious and Zelda escaped. Darth Cat screamed “GET THEM!” at her minions. The Empress soon sent reinforcements so that no one else could escape. Hawk asked a horse who had been in prison ever since the Empress had been in power who the Empress was. The horse replied “Don’t you recognize me I’m Crystal.” Hawk said “ Oh now I recognize you, but who’s the Empress.” Crystal said, “John should know her because she is Halloween’s sister.” Then Hawk said “The powerful Empress is Preciosa.” When the guard came by five minutes later Crystal kicked him and got the keys. Let John and Hawk out and said to go find Precious and Zelda.

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Ch. 3 The Meetings

Meanwhile Precious and Zelda had cornered Darth Cat. Then before they defeated her General Freckless jumped down from the ceiling and told Darth Cat that Darth Bark needed to see her. Darth Cat then turned toward Precious and said “This isn’t over I’ll be back.” With that they got on an airplane and flew away.
At that moment John and Hawk found them. Zelda explained what happened and added that Freckles was now evil. Meanwhile in Russia Darth Cat ,General Freckless and Darth Bark were talking about what to do with the resistance. Darth Bark suggested that they boil them. Darth Cat and the General didn’t ever talk during the meeting.
None of them ever realized that an evil figure sat behind them until it maaed in a soft voice “Silence I know what we will do with them.” “Who are you?” asked the General. “I am Darth Horn I rule China.” “Sparky is that you,” asked Darth Bark. The Evil One replied “Yes I am now here’s what we shall do .”
In town the resistance came up with a plan. They decided that they would engage the Empress’ forces in a full-scale war. Just in case though they would start training camps to train animals and humans alike to be able to defeat the Empress. In space the Empress was meeting with a distant alien race so that she could get advanced alien weaponry to destroy the resistance once and for all.