ocarina of time parody with an anime name for a title with a referance referance

Yeah um. Blame grass' parody being so good.

BOBOBOBO-BO-BOBO

GDK: navi get over! NOW!

navi: ZZZZZZzzzzzz...

navi: ZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, hu? what?

GDK: get over here navi!

navi: okay.

GDK: okay um. I forget. oh! yes! um. you owe me those bomchus!

Navi: ... are you sure that you don't want me to get link?

GDK: who?

Navi: destined hero of hyrule?

GDK: ...

Navi: only non-forest being here?

GDK: ... oh yes! Him! Get him!

Navi: okay.

Link: *dreaming* where am I? *sees zelda* hey you! Where am I?

Zelda: link! Please help! Take this!

Link: what? I just want to know where I am!

ganondorf: you. You are the child I saw looking at me dreamily as I bowed to the king!

Link: what? I just want to know were I am!

ganondorf: no matter I will just dispose of you!

Link: *wakes up* well. That was a weird dream.

Navi: finally! Your awake! Follow me!

Link: okay.

navi: *flies outside*

Link: *looks at wall* oh look. It's that wall with a carving of clock town and a skull kid that only one person on ZU can find!

Dimentio: if you are wondering it is not me. Check the easter egg thread in the general zelda section.

Link: who are you?

Dimentio: the writer of this parody that can do anything! *flies off arms outstretched flapping only my hands* weeee!

Link: ... weirdo.

Navi: anyway look! It's saria!

Saria: google! Wait. mapquest! Dang I can't remember what my favorite search engine is! Dang you amnesia!

Link: you have amnesia?

Saria: who's she?

Link: ... never mind. Lets just find a sword.

Navi: how did you know you needed a sword?

Link: um. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious?

navi: big word.

Link: we should stop talking.

So what do you think?

Ugh... So many things wrong with this.

1. Spelling and grammar is atrocious.

2. Who the hell is GDK? You can't expect the reader to know everything.

3. It's just not funny.

Overall, I'd say this parody sucks harder than a hoover with a black hole in it.

^^ Cruel but funny...lol

Anyway Like the person above the Grammar isn't that good but that's not what makes the story anyway. Although it does help. I knew the GDK meant great deku tree but others might be thrown off. I understand while you put GDK thou cause great deku tree takes longer to type. Other than that it was ok. I lol'd when you mentioned yourself and i laughed again when you mentioned your clock tower easter egg because i was on that thread this morning and saw that post

I'm sorry to agree with Silver (specially knowing you actually like MY parody...) but that was just bad. It wasn't funny at all mostly because it was too short and rushed. The jokes (and the whole thing for that matter) weren't very well thought out. It looks like you took more time in the title than the actual parody. If you really want to write a parody, you'll have to give it some thought. I'm sorry, no hard feelings right?

Um. I fixed the grammer in the previous chapter so it's less atrocious. And I forgot to mention that the reference was the flying away part I will probably use that less though. Here is next chapter.

Link: so I'll go get the sword.

Navi: okay.

Link: *go's to training grounds* okay this is weird I mean, look, a boulder is circling a small square piece of forest never slowing down with no hill. And when it hits something it jumps back stops and then continues moving for no reason whatsoever.

Navi: well isn't that how it's supposed to work?

Link: messed up laws of physics. Oh look! A large chest! *opens chest* I got a sword!

Navi: don't steal from ademwestlapdog.

Link: this is a free country I can do what I want.

Navi: no you can't life isn't that fair!

Link: whatever. I still got a sword.

Navi: just don't use that line anymore, okay?

Link: yeah, yeah, yeah. Oh look that rock that breaks the laws of physics.

Rock: you'll never catch me alive!

Physics: well just obey one law okay?

Rock: never!

Link: that was weird.

Navi: well we should at least get a shield now.

Link: yes we should. Now I will be needing 40 rupees.

Navi: how did you know that?

Link: well I figured since there are only about 50 in the whole forest.

Navi: touche.

Link: I think that was improper use of the word touche.

Navi: who cares.

Link: grammer nazi's.

Navi: I HATE them beyond reason, with them always correcting your grammer even if you're not all that old.

Link: I know.

Navi: well we should just get that shield.

link: okay. *somehow collects rupees in 1/2 second*

Navi: well that was not long , now just get okay that shield.

at the store

Fado: GIVE ME FOOD!

Link: why?

Fado: ME HUNGRY! TRAPPED 4 WEEKS GRAMMER LOST AND HUNGER GAINED!

Link: maybe later.

Fado: SOON!

link: *enters store*

Store owner: *is jumping up and down* hey you want a shield?

Link: can I use anything else in this store?

store owner: not really

Link: just gimme a shield.

store owner: fine here

Link: I got a shield!

navi: what did I tell you abo-

Chapter over!

Navi: but I didn't even finish my sentance!

Don't care!

More feedback please.

um. continuing my parody

navi: finally I can finish my sentence! what did I te-

Link: boring. Well. Off to the great deku tree!

Navi: will I ever finsh that sentence?

Link: no probably not.

Mido: STOP! NO PASS UNLESS HAVE SWORD!

Link: of coarse. Fado and her sister are the only people who talk in all caps.

mido: I'M A GUY

Link: you are?

Mido: UNFARE JERK!

Link: MEAN JERK!!

Navi: ANNOYING JERKS!!!

Link: fine I'll stop.

Mido: me too I guess.

Link: you will?

Mido: NO, MY FINGERS CROSSED!

Link: *draws sword* let me pass or die!

Mido: fine.

link: okay. *walks past mido*

Deku baba: ARISE FROM THE PITS OF TARTARUS!

deku baba#2: AAAARRRRRGGHHHH

link: a pirate?

deku baba#2: yes!

link: okay. FIST OF THE BACKWIND!

gasser:don't steal from me!

link: fine. FIST OF THE NOSEHAIR!

bobobo: don't steal from me or my show!

link: fine. *kills deku babas*

great deku tree: link get over here! NOW!

link: okay. WAIT! are you gonna tell me to get "inside " you?

great deku tree: maybe.

link: hm. can we refrase that without it sounding like sexual harrasment.

great deku tree: no.

link: okay fine. first gimme the stone.

great deku tree: no.

link: do it or you die.

great deku tree: fine here you go.

link: bye.

great deku tree: hey get over here!

link: no.

great deku tree: okay.

chapter over.



him is gasser.

Well,. New chapter.

Navi: are you sure that we're doing the right thing letting the great deku tree die like that?

Link: well he was going to die anyway.

Navi: how did you know that?

link: *takes out game guide* this

Navi: you suck for using that.

Link: why? It's just a book that holds the very future of my life which I can bend at my will.

Navi: well when you put it that way... YOU SUCK HARDER.

Link: WELL YOU SUCK EVEN HARDER!

navi: *cries*

Link: whatever you don't even have eyes.

Navi: true.

Link: well we should get going now.

Navi: okay.

link: *enters hyrule field*

keapora Gerber: *in fast voice* hi link you are the destined hero of hyrule who will fight many monsters an-

link: *walks ahead*

keapora: hey! Get back here!

Link: no. you suck harder than navi thinks I do and your grammer sucks so much a grammer nazi would probably KILL you for your grammer.

keapora: *cries*

Navi: well I hope you don't encounter anyone important in this chapter.

Link: me too sort of. Wow. The writer of this parody is so lazy we are already at castle town.

Navi: wow he is uncreative.

dimentio: jerks! *cries*

link: *dies*

navi: *dies*

Link: why did we just die?

Navi: perhaps you went too overboard with the authors uncreativity.

link: is that even a word?

navi: well the computer says no.

link: oh well. and can we just get back to the story?

dimentio: fine.

link: *lives*

navi: *is still dead*

link: well with navi gone I progress!

sorry this took so long my mom took my computer away from me

Link: hm. this is boring without navi and her being annoying.

dimentio: yes. And I can't think of anything to write. Or is that my bad headache?

link: probably both. now about bringing navi back to life...

dimentio: Oh yes.

Navi: *lives* yippe!

dimentio: just don't get on my bad side... *flashes keyboard*

Navi: gulp.

Link: NAVI!

Navi: what?

Link: YOUR ALIVE!

Navi: Oh yes. I am.

link: okay off to save princess zelda! *sneaks past guards* zelda! I've come to rescue you!

zelda: yay! but first you need the 3 spiritual stones.

link: where are they?

impa: in the hands of a strange rock man who will make you traverse a volcano and in the belly of a fish god.

link:

zelda: don't scare the boy that might actually get my earin- I mean sacred stones created by the three goddesses.

link: despite the fact that you almost called them earrings I will retrive said stones!

zelda good! now go! but fist let impa teach you the song of the sacred family or the song you heard whiles you where getting here.

link: Oh yeah. that song that went... left up right left up right

zelda how did you know that?

link: *flashes game guide* this why?

zelda: ... execute him. now.

link: why?

zelda for using a game guide of coarse!

link: fine. *shoots window with slingshot*

navi: where did you get that?

link oh this well I-

guard: don't shoot windows! *throws bomb*

link: *puts game guide next to the bomb.* fare thee well oh precious game guide. sniffle.

bomb: *bomb*

link: what? I thought the explosion sound effect was "boom".

dimentio: well link. the sound effect "bomb" is getting very popular among comic writers and manga artists.

link: but this is a parody not a comic or manga.

dimentio: whatever.

zelda: link just leave and get me those eari- I mean stones.

link fine.

Somewhat humurous at times, allthoughthe game guide was getting fairly old.

Spelling seems good for right now, although at the rate your're going the parody will be over fairly fast, don't ya think?

this is pretty nice, though you could use commas. I see that a lot in any sort of fanfic or parody here, so just try to use more of them.

and if it does end fast, you could add on a MM part to go with it.

I know I will do a mm parody. (I've never finished it myself but I helped a friend and seen plenty of walkthroughs)

Okay. New chapter.

Link: I guess I better get going.

navi: please don't reference cdi games.

link: what? Those games were good!

Navi: the only way someone can considere them good is as a coaster or a gift for someone you hate.

Link: or me.

navi: exactly my point

Link: hey! People don't hate me!

Navi: which is why we will buy you kid stuff like shake'n'go racers.

link: really!

Navi: you actually like that stuff?

link: "feel the power grow when you shake'n'go!

navi:

link: well I guess-

navi: please don't say that again.

link: I was gonna say "get to death mountain"

Navi: okay.

the two then arrived in kakariko village

Death mountain guard: *in german accent* none shall pass.

link: are you imitating Arnold shwartzenager or are you just a german dude?

navi: is that how you spell his last name?

link: *shrug*

DMG: show me letter from princess zelda or you shall not survive.

link: *takes out random piece o' paper* here you go.

dmg: free clucker bucket at kakariko fried cucoo?

link: wrong paper. sorry. *takes out letter from princess zelda* here you go.

dmg: okay you pass.

link: yay.

No don't start a mm parody! lol jks you can if you want.. I think you should just try to make this a little more... less... boring.. and more funnier.. nice job tho

the chapters could be longer, but I did like the german guard. do more stuff like that, and you'll be fine.

i like your story besides from what others has said about it, i found it entertaining and fun (probly because im easly entertain). i looking forward for the next chapter

CHAPTA TIIIIIIIIIMEEEEEEEE!

Link: ah yes death mountain the only known volcano on the planet.

Navi: what about... wait that's a different dimention. or... wait no that's the same one in the future. Ya' know, I think that nintendo needs to use the volcano level idea more theirs only about one in every game. Ya hear that miamoto? Use more volcano type levels!!!

Link: you know I think you just had the single most longest line in this parody.

Navi: whatever.

link: okay so let's get this-

tektite: *jumps on link*

link: ouch. *slashes tektite twice*

tektite: what the heck dude I just wanted to play leap frog. *dies*

Link: how do I know your not lying?

Navi: link he's already dead so why did you even say that?

link: IDK

Navi: have you really resorted to using txt talk?

Dimentio: no he hasn't I just didn't want to type "I don't know".

navi: but you just did and this is taking even longer to explain

Dimentio: yeah well maybe this is for my own entertainment.

Navi: what?

dimentio: *disappears*

Link: navi! Where here!

Navi: cool.

Random goron: humans aren't allowed in the goron village!

Link: isn't that twilight princess?

Rd: um. No.

Link: yeah right. Now GET OUTA HERE!

rd: okay *leaves whimpering*

Link: okay now were here!

Okay chapter over. I know that this is an awkward note than again most of the chapter endings are right?

nice. good chapter. although you abbreviated random goron as rd, when it should be rg. Other than that, I saw no mistakes.