[Hor] As the Twilight Spreads... (T)

Hello everyone! This is my first fanfic, on here at least. I started a Silent Hill fanfic on quzilla, but other than that, this is my first one, so please be nice. Also, I rated this for teens, which is stated as suitable for those 10+, but I recommend it for those 13+ unless you're really mature about literature, because sometimes I get a bit... descriptive... when it comes to the subject of violence, blood, and gore. I say thirteen because, well I'm thirteen myself. However, there will not be any sexual themes in this story. I never use that kind of stuff in a story, never any nudity, and I limit any romance to kissing, hugging, and holding hands. So yeah, if I ever give my stories a high rating, it's for violence. I don't plan on ever going above a T rating though.
Before I finally get onto the story, I'd like to state that it starts out in Termina, but not in a place that was in Majora's Mask. I made a small, relatively dark town just for the story. I'll mention other places from MM, but not until later. And lastly, I might use some referances to Sages of Despair, because I love everyone from there so much. <3 Now, to tell my story. Please enjoy.

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"So, you really are leaving, huh?"
Shilo halted at the first step on the stairs, that lead to the entrance of Termina feild. "So," she sighed, "you were following me."
She turned around to see her blue haired friend, Cassidy. When she heard footsteps behind her, she just assumed it would be her.
"Why are you leaving?" Cassidy questioned Shilo's actions. "What is all this really about?"
Shilo said nothing. Even if she did, Cassidy wouldn't understand. Cassidy didn't know about the dreams she had every night. Or about the bad feelings she had about the red haired man that departed for Hyrule two days ago.
"... Shilo, I thought you liked it here in Termina. We've lived here all our lives."
"You only know that I'm leaving Silent Town. You don't know that I'm leaving Termina."
"Yes, I do. I can tell. You're heading to Clock Town, because the Clock Tower is the quickest, most descrete way out of the Country. My question is, where do you plan on going?"
"..." Shilo sighed. Should she tell her? Would she follow her if she didn't? Or even if she did? Maybe it was best she just told her. She wouldn't understand it, but it was the best way to keep her from following.
"... Hyrule. That's where I'm heading. Please, don't ask me why, I couldn't explain it, even if I tried. I can't stay, Cass. Please don't try to talk me into it. What I'm doing is urgent, and I really have to leave."
"But... Shilo-"
"I'll write to you when I get there, to let you know I'm safe. I'll be careful. Now, the last thing I want to do is leave you here angry at me, or in tears, but if you try to make me stay I'll have to."
"... Alright. But you better write to me, got it?"
"Don't worry, I will. I'll try to take care of things there and get back as soon as I can."
"Right. Be careful, okay?"
"I will, don't worry. So... goodbye."
"Bye..."
Shilo hugged her friend and turned toward the stairs. As she stepped on each one, she could see the dim, gray light of the feild. She was almost reluctant to step back into the rain, she was already soaked. The tunnel was dry, and she almost wanted to sit down and dry off, but it was important she get to Hyrule. She stepped out into the wet feild and headed towards Clock Town.

Keep going! I'd like to see how the story develops. Nice writing style.

Yeah! I'll be interested to see where this goes. A well written opening, I must say.

I'm afraid that the dialogue to narration ratio is incredibly unbalanced. I say you need to prune quite a bit of that dialogue.

There are also several typos.

Great start I like the way your already creating questions to be answered.

Lol, thanks everyone. New post. This one's gonna be a little short, like the last one... sorry about that! ;.;

Shilo shivered. It was a long way to Clock Town. She had been walking for hours, and she still wasn't even halfway there.
"Gotta keep going..." She couldn't keep this up for long. The rain was freezing, and if she didn't find a dry area soon she would probably freeze to death or at least become very, very sick. Three more hours passed, and finally she found a large, cave-like log. Shelter from the rain.
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"N-no," Shilo choked out, "leave me alone!"
Barbed wire tightened around her wrists and ankles as she cried helplessly. Blood seeped down her arms and feet, splattering on to the floor at first, then slowing down to a slow, steady paced dripping sound.
Drip, drip, drip.
Shilo opened her eyes to see the red haired man and a dark, stormy sky.
"What do you want from me?!"
The man smirked at her, then looked towards the sky.


Shilo woke up from her dream. The same one she had since she met that man. The surrounding area in said dream looked to be that of Hyrule Castle, a place that she had seen only once when she was really little.
She felt her face. It would have been dry by now, had she not sweat so much.
"Ugh..." She muttered, "I guess I better get going..."

Mooore! Give me more! I think that was a little shorter than the pastchapter. Any chance of a longer chapter next?