loz: deceving darkness

Alrighty. What I might also suggest doing is notating what part of the chapter you're posting, such as "Chapter 1, Part 1; Chapter 1, Part 2" and so on. While it's great that you're going to notate where the end of the chapter lies, it's equally important to specify the beginning as well- especially if someone is skimming through your story.

I hope that helps. :3

thank you for your time and i will keep you tips in mind

"Medori, the Deku Tree said that monsters dwell here right?" Alamqu asked
"Are you afraid Alamqu?" Medori giggled
"No, its just."Alamqu said
"Its just what?" Medori asked
"That there is something over there, and i have not one weapon at all!" Alamqu exclaimed Sitting right within veiw of the enterance to the lost woods was a purple monster. It caught sight of Alamqu and it reached for its wooden club and started hopping over to Alamqu.
"What is that Medori?"Alamqu yelled
"Its a Bobakoblin (Bo-bake-o-ba-lin) they are some of the dumbest creatures."Medori said
"Do you think i can kill it with a club, Medori?" Alamqu asked
"A club where will you get a." Medori stoped as Alamqu picked up a rock and throw it at the chargeing monsters head, the club was knocked out of it's hand. As fast as Alamqu could run he picked up the club and hit the Bobakoblin in tell it vanished.
"Well im takeing this with me we never know what were going to run into." Alamqu said

"Medori, i was wondering, what other monsters are out there? Where does that one Bobakoblin go after it vanished? Alamqu asked after walking into the lost woods.
"I have seen many monsters, more than most. They are just mere henchmen of who ever sumoned them. But have no fear that Bobakoblin will be back by the morning!" Medori shouted as she flew a head of Alamqu to look for an monsters to forewarn him of.
"Medori, get back here!" Alamqu shouted but he heard no responce.
"She probably got attacked or lost" Alamqu thought