The Legend of Zelda: Wind Waker: Pokémon edition (Crossover/parody)

This story is hilarious! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^.^

I'd recommend you separate different locations, time frames, etc. with double-spaces. It'll make reading the story a bit easier and less likely for readers to lose their place when scrolling.

Also, try to throw a bit different humour in. I honestly mean no offense in saying this, but it's starting to get easier to predict the humour so it has less of a shock that causes me to laugh, although the last line did take me by surprise a bit.

instead of bosses you cold have gym leaders! a fire type for dragon roost. a grass type for forbidden woods. a metal or flying (maybe ground) for the tower of gods. a ghost type for the earth temple. and a rock type for the wind temple. and puppet ganon can switch between mamoswine (or primape) ariados and caterpie or weevle.

Originally Posted by mikae

instead of bosses you cold have gym leaders! a fire type for dragon roost. a grass type for forbidden woods. a metal or flying (maybe ground) for the tower of gods. a ghost type for the earth temple. and a rock type for the wind temple. and puppet ganon can switch between mamoswine (or primape) ariados and caterpie or weevle.

Unfrotunately that would run into a continuity error. I already introduced Ho-Oh as the Helmaroc King. The idea of the game is that It's Wind Waker with all the monsters, non-humans and items replaced as Pokemon.

continue the story plz

Originally Posted by phantomfan959

continue the story plz

Whut he sed.

Originally Posted by phantomfan959

continue the story plz

Originally Posted by HeroOfDragons

Whut he sed.

what they said.p.s sorry to both of you for think you are girls I did not see the male signs.

Originally Posted by mikae

what they said.p.s sorry to both of you for think you are girls I did not see the male signs.

....OK. BUT DONT DU IT AGAIN!!!!

I won't!

Im sorry but your grammar is bad, your jokes aren't even good and the idea is bad altogether.

Originally Posted by itz tw

Im sorry but your grammmar is bad, your jokes aren't even good and the idea is bad altogether.

you are crazy.

Originally Posted by phantomfan959

continue the story plz

Originally Posted by HeroOfDragons

Whut he sed.

I don't think she intends on stopping, and I think she'd appreciate some feedback as to what needs to be improved, where she's got the right idea, etc.

Originally Posted by mikae

what they said.p.s sorry to both of you for think you are girls I did not see the male signs.

Originally Posted by HeroOfDragons

....OK. BUT DONT DU IT AGAIN!!!!

Originally Posted by mikae

I won't!

I think she'd appreciate you solving that outside the thread.

Originally Posted by itz tw

Im sorry but your grammmar is bad,

Is that terribly relevant?

By the way, it's "grammar", not "grammmar".

your jokes aren't even good and the idea is bad altogether.

Then how about some worthwhile feedback? Suggestions? Constructive criticism is what she needs, not people needlessly putting down her idea.

Ok, your "sexist" jokes arent funny, and the part about Aryll calling a girl a boy is just stupid. BTW, Grammmar was a mistake, but she has too many for them to be mistakes. BTW, im just saying that I dont think that Pokemon goes good with zelda

Originally Posted by itz tw

Ok, your "sexist" jokes arent funny, and the part about Aryll calling a girl a boy is just stupid. BTW, Grammmar was a mistake, but she has too many for them to be mistakes. BTW, im just saying that I dont think that Pokemon goes good with zelda

you really are crazy.

Originally Posted by mikae

you really are crazy.

And why is this?

Originally Posted by itz tw

And why is this?

crossover parodies rock and pokemon add to humor possibilities.

Originally Posted by mikae

crossover parodies rock and pokemon add to humor possibilities.

No no no no no...
Crossovers SUX! Sorry, but its true. There may be more possiblities, but with a writer like this, nothing could make this stroy any better, even if they tried -.- I'm not even a good writer...lol. But I know whats good and what isn't, and this is horrible.

To Hikaru Rito:

I hope you aren't paying terribly much attention to your naysayers. They evidently have a narrow enough idea of creativity that it must somehow fall within the parameters of their tastes.

To treat the topic at hand, I think your ideas show creativity and an ability to adapt. Keep going and see what else you can do with it!

To itz tw:

Try to have some consideration for the author of this. Parody is parody for a reason. This thread is available for those who are *interested* in it. If you can't tolerate crossovers then I suggest you leave this one alone.

Ok, wateva. Just saying that he should practice before continuing this, to stop himself from getting embarrassed. Im sorry, but if he wants to get embarressed, then its his choice, but I would hate to see this idea to go to waste, so I would not like to see him practice here, as the idea would go downhill. But, this idea has some great possibilities.

Originally Posted by itz tw

Ok, wateva. Just saying that he should practice before continuing this, to stop himself from getting embarrassed. Im sorry, but if he wants to get embarressed, then its his choice, but I would hate to see this idea to go to waste, so I would not like to see him practice here, as the idea would go downhill. But, this idea has some great possibilities.

hikaru rito is a girl it says so next to her username.