(A) Monster [T]

[Insani]

PROLOUGE

It was a dark and stormy night...
Mario Stood in front of bowser's castle. This was the last straw. Bowser always ruined Mario's life by kidnapping peach.
Mario ran into the castle. He used a Star and became Star Mario, and ran through the soldiers of bowser.
He found bowser in the Bedroom.
Princess peach was tied up, sitting in a corner.
Bowser said, "Mario! No!"
Princess Peach tried to say something, but there was tape around her mouth.
Mario punched Bowser. Bowser punched Mario.
This caused Mario to get really mad.
"I'm Tired of you Kidnapping the princess! You will die!", Said Mario.
All of the sudden, he flashed. The star power went out, and Mario looked dark.
He had a black jacket with spikes on the shoulders, a black shirt, Gloves with spikes, Black Trousers, Black Sun Glasses, and Black Boots. His hair was capless and black.
The shock caused Princess Peach's tape to come off her mouth, and she said, "Mario... What happened?!"
"Mario's Not here. You see... they call me Goomba #760. Mario killed me with his blasted shoes. I was going to join him. But he didn't listen. He just looked at me... and then things went black... however, I was able to get my soul into his body, and ever since have been growing inside him. I was here... from Smb1," Said Mario. " Call me Bloodar."
Bloodar punched Bowser into the wall, then took out a sword.
He slashed it around a bit, and before long, Bowser was dead.
He knew that the princess would talk about the incident. He aproached her, getting ready to behead her...
The princess ran out of the castle. Bloodar followed. He knew that she would stop running. It was only a matter of time.
The princess knew her time to live was going to end shortly... she had to escape

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Chapter 1

Princess Peach Ran. Ran to the mushroom kingdom.
She thought, "No! What happened to Mario?! He killed Bowser! Bowser was going to resc--"
A stab in her back caused Princess Peach to faint.
She awoke in a cave.
"It's you. Princess Peach."
A tall, figure stood next to her, it had a purple mushroom head.
Peach Screamed, "Princess Shroob?!"
"Oh yes... except you made a mistake... it's Princess Shroobomb."
Peach exclaimed, "Princess Shroobomb?!"
"No i was joking. I will finally take over the mushroom kingdom!"
Princess Peach takes out some throwing stars. She throws them at Princess Shroob. Princess Shroob dodged.
Princess Peach Jumped on Princess Shroob.
"NOOOOOOO! My head!"
Princess Shroob became enraged and took out a gun, and started firing.
Luigi fell through the top of the cave.
Luigi shouted, "HE'S COMING TO GET ME! AAAAAAAAAGH!"
Bloodar came flying down, and punched Luigi.
Bloodar exclaimed, "Ahahahaha! Goomba #760 will rule ALL!"
Luigi, "You... you're that rebel...goomba..."
Bloodar said, "Yes. And now, you shall all pay. I will dominate the world!"
Luigi screamed, "Oh my god! Giant Robot!"
Peach looked at Princess Shroob, and said, "Let us put aside our rivalry. If we don't do something, we're both going to die."
Princess Shroob said, "Agreed. Now... do you want giant lazer or Even bigger Lazer?"
Peach said, "Well... LET'S NUKE 'EM!"
Princess Shroob, "I'm scared."
The Giant Robot sends an Even Bigger Lazer that vaporizes Bloodar. Bloodar reforms, and says, "Fools!"
Princess Shroob, Peach, and Luigi ran to the castle.

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Yeah im working on this
please comment

[Gman]

You're half way beetween script format and regular. You might want to fix that.

[Insani]

what do you mean? ???

[Gman]

Me: This is script fomat.

This is regular format. Your fanfic looks like a cross between the two.

[Insani]

I don't get it still
..sorry...
I'm just writing how i think i should...
Keep in mind i'm only 10 >.>