03-09-2008, 04:59 PM
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I'm Going to 6 Grade
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(com) Mario Sunshine Parody! [T]
Shaddap! I know it's not Zelda-related!
The point is, I have lately been playing lots of Mario. So I thought I'd make this. Let's-a go! Mario: I'm-a so anxious...I don't even-a know where we are-a headed! *Shine Sprite appears and flies out of dolphin-shaped island* Peach: Wow, that's real bright! Pianta: Welcooooome to the sun-drenched tropical paradise of Isle Delfino! Mario: That's-a so nice! *Pianta speaking on television, Shadow Mario appears* Peach: WTF?! Is...that Mario? That...Toadsworth, did you... *Toadsworth doesn't pay any attention to Peach or the Mario silhouette* *Mario only has eyes on seafood* Peach: Idiots... ________________ CHAPTER ONE--Vandalized Vacation *Plane lands smoothly on airstrip, then hits a big bump* Peach: WHAT THE **** JUST HAPPENED?! ________________ Toad 1: What's this stuff? Bird crap? Toad 2: No...it's goop... Shadow Mario: ........................ Peach: o.O Um...guys...what the? *Shadow Mario disappears* Toadsworth: Peach must be hallucinating...it's very likely the heat of this area. Mario: No, I'm-a very sure that was-a my shadow. Toadsworth: I am just very concerned about her being in such a hot place... Mario: Hey, don't-a blame me! That plane has-a autopilot. Just-a get off-a me. Shadow Mario: ..................................... Peach: Mario, hurry. Please find something useful over there. *points across the strip* ________________ Mario: What's-a this? Robot pump: *whirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...whir* POWER-UP COMPLETE. THANK YOU FOR PURCHASING THIS ITEM FROM GADD SCIENCE, INC. PREPARING TO REGISTER CUSTOMER INFORMATION. SCANNING AND VERIFYING DATA... Mario: A-what? Robot: SUBJECT IDENTIFIED AS MARIO HERO OF MUSHROOM KINGDOM, DATA STORAGE COMPLETE. I AM FLUDD-- Flash Liquidizer Ultra Dousing Device I HOPE TO BE OF ASSISTANCE. Dadadadadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! You got FLUDD! Now you're gonna PWN that shadow!! Why am I here when Link's probably gotten another item?! ________________ Mario: Let's-a try spraying that-a pile of-a goop! *SQUIRT SQUIRT SQUIRT SQUIRT SQUIRT* Sludge Serpent: RRRRAAAARAAWWWWRRRAWWWWWWR!!!!!!! FLUDD: SPRAY THE INSIDE OF ITS MOUTH! *SQUIRT* *RAAWRRR* *SQUIRT* *RAAWRRR* *SQUIRT* *RRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWRAWRAWWWWRRR * Death!!! *Shine Sprite appears* Mario: Yahoo! *Grabs Shine Sprite* SHINE!! ________________ Toad: Hey who are those? Cops: Alright, vandalizer, you're comin' with us! Peach: NO! MARIOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ________________ Okay, so I've yet to write the next chapter. I'll play the game, get past this part, find out when I can find a good end for the chapter, and modify the story into a parody.
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03-10-2008, 03:09 PM
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Don't ask.
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It's not... unique enough. It's too like the actual game. You made Peach swear once or twice, and you gave Mario a voice, but other then that, it's like reading a boring narration of the basic game.
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03-10-2008, 03:20 PM
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Cons:
1. Lazy script format. Not all parodies need to be this way. 2. It's "Let's 'a go!" Not "Let's-a go." 3. Way too many -a's. Some weren't even necessary, like "A-what?" 4. Reminds me of Epic Movie. Pros: 1. It's 'a Mario! About time to see something a bit different around here. I mean no offense, but it just felt like junk to me. Like Mario wasn't Mario. Peach wasn't Peach. Even in parodies, there should still be some similarities.
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03-13-2008, 07:34 PM
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I'm Going to 6 Grade
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No, no, wait, the second chapter just came out fresh-baked!!!
________________ Chapter Two - The Shadow's Debut ________________ Judge: Okay let's do this. Yata yata yata, I know what's happening so Mario gets locked up until tomorrow and he must clean the entire island, yata yata yata. *smashes gavel* ________________ Me: This is just great. I get to be locked up with you two JUST because I wrote the whole script?! That's just a bunch of baloney. Mario: I don't-a want any baloney. Me: I didn't say you could have... aw FORGET it. FLUDD: 72, THEY SHOULD'VE TAKEN YOUR SCRIPT BEFORE THEY LOCKED US UP. ACCORDING TO OUR AUDIENCE, YOU SHOULD GET RID OF MARIO'S ITALIAN ACCENT AND STOP GIVING ME ALL CAP'S. Me: Fine. Mario, hand me that. *erases the a's and all caps* *gives back script* Mario: Thanks! FLUDD: Thank you. ________________ Me: Hey, it's morning already. *looks outside* WTF?! It's still dark... Cop 1: Get the **** out here, people! ________________ Cop: Okay, plumber, go straight that way. You can't miss the mess. Your first job is to clean up that bird crap. Me: It's paint! The word you're looking for is paint! Cop: **** what the **** you think it is! Go get rid of it! Mario: *sprays center of paint* Sludge Serpent: RAWRAWRWARWRARARWARWRARRRRR!!!!!!!!! Me: Uh-oh, looks like this one is harder than that rainbow paint! Mario: *squirts the mouth* *mouth shuts* WHAT!!! FLUDD: Give it some good timing! Mario: I'm doing this the old-fashioned way! *tosses FLUDD* Hold that! *comes back holding water barrels* Throw these when the mouth is open! *toss* *RAWRARWRAWRAWRRARAWRWARWRWARWRWARRWARRARARWARWRAR WAAAWWAWAAAWWRRR* *Pianta Statue rises* Toadsworth: PEACH!!! UP THERE!!! IT'S MARIO!!! Peach: *looks on statue's head* M-m-m-m-m-ma-m-m-ma-m-ma...?! Shadow Mario: *looks at Peach* .................................................. ...*jumps off statue and grabs Peach* Peach: WHAT?! YOU'RE NOT MARIO! Mario: Hey, me! Erm--you! Get back here!!! Me: Get the cameras! This is gonna be LIVE! ________________ What do you think? I'm playing the game and plan on getting 120 Shines.
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This is my House, This is my House, Won't you Get Out of my House? This is...this is my...house, this is my house, won't you get out of my house? I'll give you...a good spell for you to use, so you can jump on my roof and everything like that, this is my house, I've got a big beard! Last edited by 72hours192; 03-13-2008 at 08:13 PM. |
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03-15-2008, 04:14 PM
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OMG, CHIBI!
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Well....it's....different. Really, nothing in that even made me smirk or giggle. Sorry.
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03-20-2008, 08:10 PM
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I'm Going to 6 Grade
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Erm.....I haven't played the game for a while. I'll go look back eventually.
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