Old 03-02-2008, 12:37 PM   #1
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(Zgen) The Legend of Zelda Rise From The Sacred Realm (*OoT*)

Plot:
After 4 years of the events of Ganondorf, Zelda has been governing alongside her father the kingdom of Hyrule, while Link has been traveling Hyrule's fields with Epona. Ganondorf may be still defeated, but monsters are rampaging all of Hyrule. But, there have been some peculiar events that are concerning the kingdom's sake, the five main sources of life;Kokiri Forest, Lost Woods, Death Mountain, Lake Hylia and Dessert Colossus, have been disturbed by an unknown and familiar force.

Prologue:
A plea from the forest

Hyrule Castle...

In the most richest part of the castle, lies the throne room where Zelda, Link and the king, Malfikan Fuzkan Hyrule, reside. At morning, the guards receive notice of a caller from the forest that concerns to visit Zelda, Link and Malfikan. After minutes of waiting, the guards open the door and a pink sparkling ball with wings approaches the throne...

"Greetings your highness and warrior," Said the sparkling ball while stopping

"Greetings... whatever you are," Replied Zelda while wondering what that was

"May I know what are you?" Asked Link while wondering

"Oh, my apologies. I am Faezia, a fairy," Replied the sparkling ball while approaching

"Well, Faezia, what brings you here?" Asked Malfikan while scratching hes beard

"The forest, it has been lately filled with monsters and the earth is decaying!" Exclaimed Faezia while sitting on Link's shoulder

"Do you know when this calamity started?" Asked Zelda while staring at Faezia

"Well... there has been a rumor of a "spectral" walking at night," Replied Faezia while flying toward Zelda

"A spectral?" Asked Zelda while petting Faezia

"Yes, many Kokiries have been rumoring about a dark and transparent figure that has been appearing at night with blue fire surrounding him," Replied Faezia while sitting on Zelda's head

"Aren't you confusing this "spectral" with a Poe?" Asked Link while wondering about the spectral

"No, this "spectral" doesn't have a lantern with him, but a lance and a mask," Replied Faezia while cleaning her wings

"Link, does a "spectral" with a lance and a mask rings you?" Asked Malfikan while looking at Link

"It surely can't be him," Replied Link while wondering about the lance and mask

"Link, I suggest you travel with Faezia to the forest and examine this "spectral" the Kokiries have been rumoring about," Said Zelda while opening a hidden door at the left side of the throne

"Link, a sword and shield are inside, grab them and travel to the forest," Said Zelda while lighting a torch

Link grabbed the torch and headed inside the door. The door closed and the torch began lighting the darkness that filled the hidden path. As Link kept walking and walking, he encountered a door that had a hole by the shape of a hand. Link put hes hand there and the door opened.

In the room he was, a thick darkness filled the room, that the torch only shone Link's face. Suddenly, Link saw a tablet with some drawings in it. It seemed that the tablet was a song that was for Link's ocarina. He played the song and thousands fireflies appeared and lighten the torches that were surrounding the room.

Link then saw two chests in the middle of the room. He opened the one on the left and he found the Hylian's Sword. He then opened the right one and he found the Hylian's Shield. He swinged the sword around and he managed to hold it. A door opened from the eastern corner of the room and Link approached to it.

Link was then outside of the castle in the bridge that leads to the castle's room. Link got out and Faezia got out from Link's hat...

"Yawn! That was some nap!" Exclaimed Faezia while stretching

"You sure are a lazy one!" Exclaimed Link while grabbing Faezia

"Why you!" Exclaimed Faezia while flying in circles around Link

"Haha!" Link laughed

"Lets go to the forest already!" Exclaimed Faezia while entering Link's hat

Link walked down through the town and exited the town. He then opened the gate that leads to the fields and exited. He then grabbed out hes ocarina and he singed Epona's Song. In 45 seconds, Epona was approaching. Link ride Epona and he run to the entrance of Kokiri Forest.

-END OF PROLOGUE-

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Old 03-02-2008, 03:43 PM   #2
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WELCOME!

Anyways, its a great start, just wonder who that spectral with a mask and a lance is... (sarkasm)

Anyways, great job! For a first timer, your quite skilled!
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WELCOME!

Anyways, its a great start, just wonder who that spectral with a mask and a lance is... (sarkasm)

Anyways, great job! For a first timer, your quite skilled!
Thanks!
I will post the other chapter soon!
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This story is very interesting. The "spectral" with the lance and the mask is Phantom Ganon if I'm not mistaken, right?
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Old 03-03-2008, 09:31 AM   #5
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This story is very interesting. The "spectral" with the lance and the mask is Phantom Ganon if I'm not mistaken, right?
Yes he is.

Chapter 1:
Forest's Decay and Phantom Memory!

As Link entered the Kokiri Forest, he saw a hoard of monsters around the peaceful village of the Kokiries. Link fought hes way to hes old tree house and entered it. In it, he saw a note that said...

"Link, if your reading this note, it means im in the Forest Temple praying to the Gods to save the forest. A phantom has been appearing at night and has been entering inside the Deku Tree. Please save your old friends, sincerely, Saria."

"So Saria managed to escape," Said Link while putting the note at the table

"Link, we must go to the Deku Tree at once!" Exclaimed Faezia while approaching to the door

Faezia looked outside and saw the spectral she has been talking about! She looked at it like she was being menaced by thousands of monsters. She then flew to Link...

"LINK!!!" Exclaimed Faezia while hitting Link's head

"Ouch! What?!" Exclaimed Link while grabbing Faezia

"Th-the PHANTOM!!!" Exclaimed Faezia while pausing

"WHAT?!" Exclaimed Link while grabbing hes sword

Link leaped out of hes tree house and followed the spectral to the Deku Tree's place. He then entered the tree and Link followed.

link was then inside the tree. The spectral fell in the hole that was in the middle and Link fell too. Link landed and the water and the spectral fell in another hole that was in the room. Link followed and he landed on water. He was then at where Gohma's lair was. The spectral entered the room and Link followed.

He was then at a room filled with mist. The floor had a glowing green slime in it. The columns were crumbling and the walls had scratches. The spectral then appeared and summoned hes lance. Link grabbed hes sword and engaged combat with the spectral...

SCIIING!
CLANG!
SCIING! SCIING! CLANG!

Many sounds from the sword and lance were heard. Link hit the spectral's armor but it didn't fall in pieces. Suddenly, the spectral charged a ball and throw it at Link leaving him paralyzed...

"Argh!" Exclaimed Link while resisting the agony

"You can never defeat a ghost!" Exclaimed the spectral while pointing hes lance at Link

"So it IS you!" Exclaimed Link while grabbing hes sword

"There's no point on grabbing that!" Exclaimed the spectral while raising hes lance

The spectral raised the lance and... SCIIING!
A few of blood was spilled at the floor! When Link opened hes eyes, he saw that he was intact but had a small scar on hes face...

"There's no point on killing you!" Exclaimed the spectral while rising to the air

"Why didn't you finished me... PHANTOM GANON!?" Exclaimed Link while standing up

"There is nothing you can do about this!" Exclaimed PGanon while throwing hes lance at the floor

"That's all?!" Exclaimed Link while bowing to the ground

"There is nothing... I can do?" Asked Link while seeing hes hands

As he saw hes hands, he then saw the mark of the Triforce of Courage. Suddenly, Faezia came out and began encouraging Link...

"Don't let him fool you Link!" Exclaimed Faezia while looking at Link's eyes

"You saved Hyrule from a hoard of beasts!" Exclaimed Faezia while staring at Link

"You can do it!" Exclaimed Faezia while hitting Link's head

"I can't do it," Said Link while trying to stop crying

Faezia slapped Link in the face and Link reaponded to the call...

"Wh-what happened?" Asked Link while looking at PGanon

"Merhahaha!" PGanon laughed

PGanon began to emitted an energy that began to surround the area. The mist had turned into a light purple and the place was crumbling. Link and Faezia escaped from the tree with a portal that was in the middle.

When Faezia and Link escaped the tree, the tree began to fall and crumble. When all seemed to be peaceful, a purple mist covered the whole place and PGanon rised from the ruins...

"YES! Only three remain!" Exclaimed PGanon while summoning hes horse

PGanon ride hes horse and disappeared from Link's eyes. Link approached the ruins of the tree and saw but nothing but the leafs and branches. Link then saw a shining seed that was in the middle of the ruins. He grabbed it and Faezia began talking...

"This, this is the Kokiries's Breath! Exclaimed Faezia while looking at the seed

"The what now?" Asked Link while looking at the seed

"Yes! This is what has been maintaining the forest with clean air!" Exclaimed Faezia while touching the seed

"So this is what PGanon was looking for?" Asked Link while raising the seed to the air

As the sun shone the seed, a black portal opened from the sky and PGanon came from it...

"You shall not breath the clean air!" Exclaimed PGanon while raising hes lance

PGanon charged an immense ball of energy from hes lance and throw it at the seed. The seed began to disintegrate only leaving but nothing...

"Merhahaha!" PGanon laughed while running to the portal

"NO!!!" Exclaimed Faezia while looking at Link's hands

"It can't be!" Exclaimed Link while bowing to the ground

"The seed... it has been... destroyed!" Exclaimed Faezia while crying at Link's hand

"Faezia," Said Link while petting her

"Yes?" Asked Faezia while cleaning her tears

"Lets get out before the mist reaches all of the forest," Said Link while walking out from the place

"Ok," Replied Faezia while sitting on Link's shoulder

Link and Faezia managed to get out from the forest before the poisoned mist reached them. Link, whom was sad that the kokiries would never breath clean air again, walked the fields and stopped to look at the mountain...

"Hey, atop Death Mountain!" Exclaimed Link while pointing at the direction

"Its a bird!" Exclaimed Link while staring at the thing

"Its a comet!" Exclaimed Faezia while staring at the thing

"No.. its... VOLVAGIA!?" Exclaimed Link while staring at the thing

-END OF CHAPTER-
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Now this story is getting interesting.
However, if PGanon is on the lose and Volvagia is raging upon the mountain, what will become of Hyrule?
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Now this story is getting interesting.
However, if PGanon is on the lose and Volvagia is raging upon the mountain, what will become of Hyrule?
You need to keep reading!

Chapter 2:
Village Eaten by Fire and Secrets on a grave

As Link saw how Volvagia raged upon the mountain, he grabbed hes ocarina and played Epona's Song. Epona came running from the west and Link rapidly ride Epona. He rapidly left to the mountain's direction and entered the village.

As Link approached the village, he saw how it began to be devoured by the fire the majestic dragon had been unleashing. Link saw how the houses began to crumble in the fire. Suddenly, Link saw a kid, that kid knew that Link saw him so he run to the graveyard. Link followed.

When Link entered the graveyard, he saw the kid pushing a tomb and jumping in it. Link walked into that tomb and pushed it. He jumped and fell into a deep hole.

When Link opened hes eyes, he saw some people surrounding him...

"He must be with the dragon!" Exclaimed one of the villagers

"He doesn't has the looks of a monster," Replied a villager

Suddenly, from Link's hat, Faezia flew out and began arguing with the villagers...

"Stop it! Hes not a monster!" Exclaimed Faezia while pointing at Link

"What is he then?!" Exclaimed one of the villagers

"Are you blind man?! Hes a hylian! Hes Link!" Exclaimed Faezia while grabbing Link's pointy ears

"Its magic! He used the fairy's magic!" Exclaimed one of the villagers

"Lets get rid of him!" Exclaimed one of the villagers while grabbing a sword

The villager raised the sword and... he stopped!

"Its enough!" Exclaimed a man in a purple hood

"But your highness!"Exclaimed one of the villagers

"Hes indeed a Hylian, a hero in fact," Said the man while approaching Link

The man gave hes hand to Link and he grabbed it. The man helped Link stand up and he began talking...

"Young warrior from the Gods, I am Shakun, the Brother from the Shadows," Said the man while bowing to Link's connection with the Gods

"Brother?" Asked Link while looking at Shakun

"Seriously, you can't be one from the Brotherhood of Sages!" Exclaimed Faezia while looking at Shakun

"So you think that my appearance does not show superiority?" Asked Shakun while standing up

"No its not th-," Faezia tried to say but Shakun stopped her

"Let me explain," Said Shakun while sitting on the ground

"Many years ago, the Hylians were protected by the Gods, but a group of evil arises from all the light that was in Hyrule. This group heard of a majestic power that will grant a wish to he who holds on it. This group destroyed anything on its path and managed to reach the power. The Gods, filled with rage, decided to seal all of them in a realm where they belong for their bad actions."

"Now, the Gods decided to protect the lands of Hyrule by selecting a group of 6 beings of different races to protect that power from evil. These "beings", were then called the "Sages". The Sages, decided to create some items to protect the power from evil. They made an emerald that they hid it in a forest; they made a ruby that was to be protected from people of a mountain; and they made a sapphire to be held by fish men. For safety, they forged a blade that would resist the power of the Gods and use it for the safety of people. They sealed it along the gates of the realm"

"The Sages decided to choose 6 persons to wield some of their powers to protect Hyrule while hidden. This is where we come in, the Brotherhood of Sages. We were chosen to protect the territories that hold the medallions that will save the lands. As I'm here, I protect the Shadow Medallion, my Goron brother Figan, was cursed by PGanon and turned him into the dragon that cursed this village."

"So this is all PGanon's doing?" Asked Link while scratching hes head

"Exactly," Replied Shakun while standing up

"But how did he get such power?" Asked Faezia while standing on Link's shoulder

"You see, PGanon is non other than our-," Shakun tried to continue but an earthquake occurred

The earth began to crumble. The tomb was falling apart. Shakun stayed and prevented the tomb to fall, but when they all escaped, Shakun couldn't stand more and he fell along with the place.

Link and Faezia looked at the mountain, they saw how Volvagia returned to its lair...

"We have to free Figan," Said Link while grabbing hes sword

"We have to avenge Shakun!" Exclaimed Faezia while floating around Link

"Lets go! To Death Mountain!" Exclaimed Link while running toward the village

-END OF CHAPTER-
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