The Legend of Zelda- War For Hyrule

[Malo and Talo]

Hey guys, I just thought I'd begin my monsterous fan fic here. It's all about unfolding war in Hyrule, where the dimesions have crashed, and it's up to one person to save all three Hyrules, combined into one, and avoid the war he is supposed to be fighting in.

This ends up having alot of characters, but the first chapter's easy. Just to explain what's going on, and there's a bit of a prolouge at first .

Please leave comments, becuase there's gonna be great additions if I get enough fans!!!

Okay... here we go:

The Legend of Zelda
War For Hyrule

Written by Malo and Talo


Chapter One- Parallel Universes Collide

The sky was red, bats flying all around the gloomy castle that resided outside a small marketplace. Redeads stalked innocent travelers from inside the market, while any survivors were instantly killed from what lived in the castle. Once home to the Royal Family, Hyrule Castle was previously taken over by a dark warrior called Ganondorf.

By obtaining the Triforce of Power, Ganondorf had taken over Hyrule and ruled over it for seven long, terrible years. The once beautiful waters of Lake Hylia had become frozen in ice, the Gorons had been taken prisoner and fed to a giant dragon, and Kokiri Forest was now crawling with monsters, forcing the children back into the secret wooded region near the Forest Temple.

But a hero had risen to fight Ganondorf, and fight him he did. Only after freeing what Gorons had lived through the horrible ordeal, saving the Zoras from their icy prison that could have very well become their grave. He saved the Kokiri children and led them fearlessly back to their home, and then turned his attention to the reason for destruction of his beloved homeland.

Ganondorf.

So the hero proceeded to the castle, met up with the brave Princess Zelda, and became a legend by killing Ganondorf; ending his reign once and for all. Zelda had assisted him, but the hero knew that he, and he alone, had become the savior of all lands; the hero of time.

“Link!” Zelda cried, throwing her arms around him. “You did it!”

Link stared at his blade, the Master Sword, which was still plunged deep into Ganondorf’s head. Pulling hard, he drew it from the flesh, and cleaned it, stowing it away again.

“Yeah,” Link mumbled, not daring to believe that his journey was finally over. “We should go help the others…”

“What others?” Zelda asked, laughing slightly. “You’re done, Link. You’ve saved the kingdom. You’ve saved me.”

Link stared into Zelda’s eyes, knowing that the Triforce of Wisdom had found a good home. He and Zelda would be together for the rest of their lives…

And that’s when the first chunk of ceiling came loose.

“Look out!” Link cried, grabbing Zelda and diving out of the way of the slab. The got up, and Zelda turned to Link, who drew his sword and Hylian shield once more.

“We need to get out of here!” she screamed. Rocks were pouring down on them, but Link and Zelda were already running as hard as they could down the corridor.

“I love you, Zelda,” Link muttered, panting hard.

“I love you, Link,” Zelda replied, staring ahead as she passed Link. Throwing herself out a window, Link watched her fall into the moat, so he followed. Splashing down, he resurfaced and made his way over to the edge. Zelda was watching the castle crumble to nothing, and Link couldn’t help but feel even more anger towards Ganondorf. They could have repaired the castle, but rebuilding it would take years…

“My home,” Zelda muttered. Link stared at her. Suddenly, he found her looking at him. “You need to go back to your own time, Link. To regain your lost childhood. I will stay here and help rebuild Hyrule. Stop Ganondorf before it is too late, and make sure this never happens. Please.”

“Zelda, I-”

“Do it!” Zelda was crying now. “Please! I will miss you, but if you become a hero again, we’ll be closer than ever. It’s the right thing. Please, Link. Play the song of time, and return to the past.”

Link looked at Zelda, wanting to cry as well, but he knew he’d be able to meet up with her again, so he brought the ocarina to his lips and played the song he would never forget. The song of time.

The swirling vortex surrounded him, but before he was gone, he heard Zelda scream and felt a sharp pain in his side. He looked down, and saw a pitchfork, gleaming in the light, going through his body. The blood started pouring immediately, but Link just waited, confused as to what happened.

And then, caught between all time, the wieldier of the Triforce, Link, died.


* * *

“And, from the Gods themselves, you have become a Hylian knight.”

Chris stood up, allowing King Lazarus to remove the long sword from his right shoulder. His new armor fit nicely, and Chris couldn’t be more proud to be the youngest knight in all of Hyrule. He stepped off the carpet, and moved closer to Zelda, who looked at him.

“Because Link went back to Ordon, we really need a young hero. One who is handsome, and brave, and smart. One very much like you.”

“Thanks,” Chris said, smiling in the princes’ direction. Zelda certainly was beautiful, and the fact that she called him handsome made fifteen-year-old Chris blush slightly. Suddenly, though, Zelda was looking at Chris in concern.

“Everything okay?” Chris stepped forward, but then backwards again as Zelda’s eyes grew in shock.

“It’s happening,” she breathed.

“What is?” Chris asked, drawing his short sword and iron shield. He could fight anything that came his way, but it didn’t seem as if he’d be able to take down whatever was hurting Zeda.

“He died while in time travel…”

“Who?”

Zelda grabbed Chris by the shoulder, and dragged him into a closet. Nice! Chris thought. But Zelda wasn’t playing flirty. She was literally freaking out, and Chris was growing nervous.

“Listen carefully,” Zelda breathed, “because we don’t have much time. A war will start. Link, a previous one, from ages ago, has been killed while in time travel, which means that the Tiforce will be split into different dimensions. All Hyrules in which the Triforce has been affected in will crash into our realm, where he is headed, and suddenly millions of people will suddenly be living here.”

“I don’t get it-”

“Ganondorf will be coming back!” Zelda cried aloud. “Once the people land here, a war will start between the races, fueled by Ganondorf of course. You must collect three spiritual stones and fufill Link’s place.”
“What?” Chris almost yelled. He had just become a knight; there was no way he would would be ready for an adventure already.

“Just go to Kokiri Forest and speak to the Great Deku Tree,” Zelda instructed. “He will explain everything. Without Link, the previous Zelda would have perished, which means that I am long gone.”

“And Link?”

“Ordon Village will be missing a hero as well. Good luck Chris.”

And with that, Zelda was gone.

Chris stepped out of the closet, and looked around. People were suddenly dead upon the floor, and others Chris did not recognize were standing around, quarreling with each other. Zelda was right- dimensions did mix, and Chris was the only one who could stop it.

“There is war!” a king announced. “The Zoras and Gerudos have attacked the Goron Mines on Death Mountain! We must go to their aid!”

Chris saw soldiers getting into clumps, and ranking up. Technically he was a knight, so Chris technically should have joined them, but technically, Zelda had given him a mission. So Chris had to make it to Kokiri Forest. In one piece.

Chris opened the chamber doors and ran down the hall, towards the new land that Hyrule had become. “Why does this crap always happen to me?”

[TRICKSTER]

... Nice! This is very well written (at least good enough to catch my attention and not many fan fics on this site does that) there where some parts where i noticed you repeated the same word at least twice and it just looks odd. parts like this:

Technically he was a knight, so Chris technically should have joined them, but technically, Zelda had given him a mission.

and suddenly millions of people will suddenly be living here

try not to do that so often ok? This is looking great, keep it up!

[=Zack=]

I'm a bit confused about what era this is in. Is this OoT, TP, or both?

Other than that, good job.

[Grass]

A great start, MnT! I really like like the direction it's heading.

Although, it is confusing which era it's in- TP, or OOT? After all, you have mentioned both Ordon and the Kokiri Forest. Or are you combining the too?

TRICKSTER's advice is what I was thinking, with the repeated words. Just watch out for that. Otherwise, I'll be able to give you much better comments once I see more of your work, which is typical.

Keep going!

[InkBomb]

nice!!! keep going i want to see more of this story!!!

[Malo and Talo]

About the suddenlys, that was not intentional, so I'll watch out for that . The technicallys were supposed to be sarcasm from Chris' thoughts, but that really didn't turn out as I had planned, so I'll watch that, too.

Glad you guys like it! The beginning is at the end of OoT, but Link dies while in Time Travel, so TP and OoT worlds collide, making there both an Ordon Village and a Kokiri Forest in Hyrule.

It'll make more sense as I go along, hopefully! A new chapter will be up very soon.

...Yay! I have fans!!!

[TRICKSTER]

Is this gonna have any spoilers? I havent played TP and well I was just wondering

Originally Posted by Grass

A great start, MnT! I really like like the direction it's heading.

mabey someone else should watch out for repeated words as well as Malo and Talo xD

[Malo and Talo]

Only characters and weapons...

[Malo and Talo]

Hey guys! Thanks for all the feedback! It's the best response I've ever had in this section, so I'm moving forward! This next chaoter introduces two new characters , so I hope you like them!




Danny opened his eyes, glaring at the ceiling. Already, throughout the forest, people had begun to start their days. Danny was just frustrated at them, all of them, for not letting him sleep in. Ever.

Throwing the covers off his body, he parted his long blonde hair out his eyes and strapped on his leather boots. Belt being fed through the slots at the waist of his tunic, Danny grabbed his small wallet and fastened it to his side. It was time to start another bring day.

Stepping outside, Danny blinked stupidly. The sun was bright, but the laughter was almost unbearable. Why he was the only Kokiri who hated the forest was unknown to him, but his moody arrogance had certainly driven his fairy away, years ago. He was truly alone.

Danny climbed down the ladder, and jumped down the last few rungs, hitting the soft earth lightly. A Kokiri strutted up to him, pushing his had up straight.

“I need you to move all the rocks in front of Saria’s house today,” Mido told Danny. Danny had to stop himself from laughing at the Kokiri leader’s hat, because there was no way any of them would force one on his head.

“Did you hear me?”

“Huh?” Danny asked, losing track for a second. Mido swelled with anger, and Danny at least got some satisfaction out of saying. “Right. The rocks. No can do, Mido, because I have to go make a sword today.”

It was Mido’s turn to laugh, which he did without a thought on it. “A sword, you loser? Honestly? What- you think you’re going to become a big warrior or something? Face it, pal. You’ll never even hit four feet. And they don’t make armor to fit imps like you.”

“You’re just as short as me!” Danny cried out, barring his teeth.

“No,” Mido corrected him. “You’re really, really short. It’s okay, Danny. Maybe someday you’ll become a Kokiri like the rest of us, and stop being a moody little imp.”

“I swear to Gods,” Danny muttered, but Mido had left, attempting to strike up a conversation with Saria, who was passing by.

Danny pushed Mido’s bullying to the back of his head, and focused on the sword. That man had come the previous night, and he told the Kokiri about some “unfolding war”. He said his name was Rusl, from Ordon Village, but Danny had certainly never heard of Ordon before. But if there was to be a war, Danny was sure that he’d be fighting in it. So it was best that he should prepare himself and let the swordless idiots, preferably Mido, die at the hand of those who Danny would kill shortly afterwards.

Danny grabbed his Deku Shield from his lawn, where he had left it, and couldn’t help but being slightly deflated at the sight of it. It was just wood- a simple fire arrow would render it useless. Danny needed a stronger shield, but the steel Hylian shields that were on sale in the market were massive compared to any Kokiri, let alone the smallest one.

Danny walked to the training grounds, realizing that, once again, he’d have to use a simple deku stick to fight off imaginary monsters. Day after day this went on, but Danny was content if it meant that he was one day closer to getting his real sword.

For the first time, however, Danny noticed the hole in the side of the wall. Approaching it, he peered inside, but heard nothing. Looking around, Danny drew breath.

“Strange…” he muttered. “Oh well. Only one thing to do now.”

Getting on all fours, Danny crawled in, and found himself in a small cave. There were many turns, and Danny figured that after a few minutes he might very well be lost. But he was too curious, and too sick of his boring life in Kokiri Forest. War was coming. It was time to be a little more daring.

And with that, Danny broke towards that wall, turned left, and continued into the darkness.

* * *

Chris ran to the foot of the castle. The market was chaos, he observed. There were three times as many people there, and the animals were also much more numerous. Dogs and cats, and horses and goats…

“Goats?” Chris pondered. There were never any goats in Hyrule Market. Chris wandered over in their direction, by the stables, and he saw a tall figure step out from the stable, talking to the goats:

“Ready to go on home? Fado’ll be so mad if we don’t make it by nightfall. Epona, come on girl. Epona!”

The boy was slightly older than Chris, possible sixteen or seventeen, and had thick curly hair. He was also dressed in very strange clothes, an attire that included many layers of colorful blankets and whatnot. He turned back into the stable and brought forth a horse- a beautiful mare with a reddish body and a snow white mane.

“Epona, I know you won’t listen to anybody but Link… but let’s face it girl. Link’s dead. You need to be my friend now, okay?”

Chris stared at this boy. He was obviously having trouble, and whoever Fado was would give him a hard time if he was late; he was sure of that. So even though Chris needed to get to Kokiri Forest quickly, wherever that was, he figured that the boy could provide him transportation, and maybe a partnership.

“Hey,” Chris muttered, addressing the boy. He turned suddenly, and smiled warmly.

“Good afternoon. Do you mind helping me-”

“Relax,” Chris told him, stepping forward to take Epona’s reigns. “I’m great with horses.”

“That makes one of us,” the boy said. Chris laughed.

“What’s your name?” he asked the boy.

“Brad. You?”

“Chris. I’m a Hylian Knight.” Brad seemed to be amazed at Chris, looking at him thunderstruck.

“But- but- how old are you?”

“Fifteen.”

“How did you get to be accepted so quickly?”

“I’m friends with the royal family,” Chris explained. “I’ve had a lot of training.”

“That makes one of us, too,” Brad smiled.

“Well, I’ll help you,” Chris told, Brad seriously. “But I need your help in return.”

“Okay. What do you need me to do?”

“Do you know where Kokiri Forest is?”

“Yeah, why?” Brad was looking at Chris strangely, like the request was not something he heard everyday.

“Can you take me there. I need to talk to the Great Deku Tree about this war or whatever.”
“So the war rumors are true? There is a war?”

“That’s what Princess Zelda said. I need to save Hyrule.” Chris was pleased that Brad was not only accepting his strange story, but believing it as well. “I’m apparently the hero or whatever.”

And that’s when Brad started laughing.

[TRICKSTER]

I'm gonna point out these little things because I think they're errors, unless there's a meaning for those which I do not know of:

Originally Posted by Malo and Talo

It was time to start another bring day.

A Kokiri strutted up to him, pushing his had up straight.

This was pretty nice, but you might wanna slow down, take it easy. Many fan fic writers prefer to be two chapters ahead. You know, have three chapters finished(1 2 and 3) , then you post one (chapter 1) of those and wait a while before posting the next one (chapter 2) or wait until you finish another chapter (chapter 4). It might seem like you're making your fans wait, but think about it this way: If you get stuck on chapter 4, you can post chapter 2 and keep working on chapter 4. If sometime has already passed by and you're still stuck, post chapter 3. And that way you won't keep everyone waiting and it would give you a lot of time to check for errors on the other chapters. You suck if you're still stuck after all that time! ( just kidding ) I'm telling you this because you posted chapters 1 and 2 too fast ( You most have a lot of chapters already finished or/and a lot of freetime ) so think about what I just said.

[Malo and Talo]

Yeah- your advice is really good, Trickster. Thanks bud! I'll remember that...

Unless I forget. (Just kidding!)

[=Zack=]

I've noticed that the names are too modern. Danny, Brad, and Chris are all names that you'd find in this modern day. What're the chances that a guy will be named Altnear in today's day? And I want to see more discription in this comic.

Danny walked to the training grounds, realizing that, once again, he’d have to use a simple deku stick to fight off imaginary monsters. Day after day this went on, but Danny was content if it meant that he was one day closer to getting his real sword.

What did the training grounds look like? How long has he waited for a real sword? What inspired him to get a sword?

[TRICKSTER]

Originally Posted by Smeezette

I've noticed that the names are too modern. Danny, Brad, and Chris are all names that you'd find in this modern day. What're the chances that a guy will be named Altnear in today's day? And I want to see more discription in this comic.



What did the training grounds look like? How long has he waited for a real sword? What inspired him to get a sword?

I think this is okay like that, but he HAS a point. Remember what you said once on Grass's parody when someone didnt like one of the chapters and you wanted to know why?

Yeah, details are always nice

as for the names, well you can still change them right? hope this helps: Hylian Names Generator.

[Malo and Talo]

Thanks guys, but the generator has not really helped me out very much...

If you have any ideas for better names just let me know .

[=Zack=]

Yeah, that generator blows.

Just use unusual names, like Luthin, Narox, or Malory.

[Malo and Talo]

Originally Posted by Smeezette

Yeah, that generator blows.

Amen!!!

[=Zack=]

Anyway, if you're looking for old-timey names, use names with X's, S's, and Z's.

[hero<mobile]

Malo and Talo, you were right. That is really good. Brad is definitely teh best character in this;p

[Malo and Talo]

Originally Posted by hero<mobile

Malo and Talo, you were right. That is really good. Brad is definitely teh best character in this;p

Somehow I knew you'd think that, Hero.

[TRICKSTER]

sorry that name generator didnt help. I cant help with names because I suck coming out with good names (I'm struggling to come out with names for MY fanfic). Something I do is take usual names and twist them around, add letters, take away some and so on. It only worked once for me, and you seem to have a good imagination, so be creative.

[Malo and Talo]

I'm sorry guys... but I'm discontinuing this fan fic . I've been writing a series of novels entitled Survival ever since eighth grade, and I have an opportunity to get the first one published. So I'm focusing all of my energy on my own origianal works... it's just that this fan fic was for fun and my books are very serious business.

So sorry, but I'm glad you guys liked the first (and only) two chapters! It really gave me some experience with writing, so hopefully I'll make it big with the Survival series. So if you ever see a book called Survival in your bookstore, pat yourself on the back. You helped me get there.

Thanks a million guys!

[TRICKSTER]

Originally Posted by Malo and Talo

I'm sorry guys... but I'm discontinuing this fan fic . I've been writing a series of novels entitled Survival ever since eighth grade, and I have an opportunity to get the first one published. So I'm focusing all of my energy on my own origianal works... it's just that this fan fic was for fun and my books are very serious business.

So sorry, but I'm glad you guys liked the first (and only) two chapters! It really gave me some experience with writing, so hopefully I'll make it big with the Survival series. So if you ever see a book called Survival in your bookstore, pat yourself on the back. You helped me get there.

Thanks a million guys!

... Awwwww! please continue this fan fic pleassssssse. It's awesome. I am writting a story (I guess you can call it a book since it's waaaaaay too long) called the dragon slayer (remember?), but at the same time, I'm writing a fan fic (which I'll post soon) and I don't have problems writing them at the same time. Maybe you should give it a try. Anyways, good luck with your novels.