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Anyway, I thought this was a good chapter! It didn't have me laughing out loud like some of your chapters do, but it didn't disappoint me in the least. The "clad in black" part was confusing until it turned out it was Ruto. Luigi killing her was epic; I liked the Mario bros cameo. Not below par, but not above it. How do you keep thinking up these chapters? O_o Nice job, Grass.
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so your not happy with this chapter Grass? well at least smile with the reviews. Anyways, here is my review on chapter chapter sixty: the water temple part IV-morpha, what a waste Jokes: The jokes in this chapter had me laughing loud enough for my neighbors to hear! Everything about it was hilarious. I don’t know if everyone agrees, I think the Riddleman was on his best in this chapter. He made me laugh before, but he had me rolling on the floor this time with the water gun and the stuffed animal. 5/5 Entertainment: This chapter was entertaining all the way, it was very well written, and it was so damn funny! Man, once again you left me with not much to say. I mean, what else can I say? 6/6 Grammar: like MNT said, these are easy points. There were no mistakes at all(as far as I could see). 3/3 Plot: I loved the surprising twist you put in there! For a moment I could’ve swear the figure clad in black was Black, but it was Ruto the retard (ex retard). That was unexpected. 6/6 Overall: 20/20 = +A (100%) Perfect score! So you still not happy with this chapter... that's great! it means you can still do better than this. i dont think you arent happy with it. it was just one of the surprising twits wasnt it? you said you werent happy with it so we wouldnt expect much and we would set lower standars for it and be in for a surprise. its either that or I'm being a bit paranoic . |

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Ah, thread, i've missed you so!
*hugs thread* anyways... great chapter, Grass. Just as Random and original as always... but try to clear up the thick fog of randomness... if you get what i'm saying.
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I have to disagree with everyone, I though this one one of the worst chapters. I didn't giggled even once.
There wasn't anything bad, the problem is that I didn't find anything good. But that just my opinion... *sits and waits 'till next chapter*
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...WOW.
You really didn't find anything funny? That's mega crazy. I loved this chapter. Carge! Great to have you back!
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Grass, I normally don't comment, but, this chapter is a Masterpiece Your best so far expecially the 'water gun' and the 'made in china' puppy... i loled all the way through it... 5/5 lovly
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As usual, the Riddleman made me crack up, but this time I laughed two times harder than I usually do! I love how he threatened to kill the dog, even though White didn't have feelings for it. Made in China?! That made Laugh Out Loud! And his 'moron' riddle just shows how creative you could get when making riddles for this guy. I was actually pretty confused during the 'Certain Death' part, but that might have just been me. I usually tend to rush through the not-so-exciting parts. But hey, Certain Death makes some really good cookies. ![]() Morpha had to be the best boss battle yet. What's cool is that when Navi mentioned plumbers, I actually though of Mario and Luigi in my head. Then I read further and realized that my vision came true! The Mario brothers really DID come! Oh, I loved how Mario got killed and Luigi mumbled about stealing his spotlight. It made me laugh so freaking hard! But the best part just HAD to be the Mysterious Figure in black. I really though it was Black at first, but you managed to surprise me with Ruto instead! It felt a little weird, but it still got me shocked and entertained. I gave out a huge laugh after that. And THEN came Black who killed Ruto. Very nice way to end a chapter. ![]() So overall, this chapter was definately one of your greatest. 10/10 for this one, Grass!
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Happy New Year everyone!!! 10 hours late, but still...
I have a question, though. Are you going to do more sidequests in your parody, Grass? Because those extended the story nicely while being funny too. I can't wait until Shadow Temple...theres a whole bunch of jokes you can make with Bongo Bongo...lol
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I'm glad that everybody else loved it. I was scared for a second.
I thought everyone thinking Ruto was Black weas really good, and the certain seath bits were great! Plus, the moron joke rocked! How can you not think Riddleman is funny???
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Yeah, details are always nice.
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MasterLink- you're back!!! But now I have to call you the Hylian Death God Ninja... I might just break down and start crying now. I miss your red avatar! You were, like, my first best friend on ZU!
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What I meant is that I didn't find it as funny as Grass worst chapters.
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Little harsh there, bud. So you're saying that this was Grass' overall worst chapter ever?
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