[fan] curse of the arbiters grounds

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my first story (ooooh) it is about the Arbiters grounds, and how it came to be in the sorry state it is in, all told through the eyes of Vaux, an inmate wrongly accused of murder (gasp) whilst trying to prove his innocence, he gets stumbles across some seriously evil stuff! and gannondor makes a short apperance! anyway, here is the opening...


The curse of the Arbiters grounds


Inside a dimly lit court room, stood a young man, in shackles, chained to a platform, his long, white, hair covering one of his eyes, his face expressionless.
A man in judge robes approached the podium in front of him; he cleared his voice and stared at the prisoner
‘Vaux Prewer, you have been convicted by five good persons, that you are guilty of the crime of murder, the sentence, a life time imprisonment in the Arbiters grounds.’ The judge said in a steady voice
The words hit Vaux like an iron fist; he lifted his head and yelled in frustration
‘But I’m innocent! INNOCENT!’
Whilst pulling his chains forward, but relaxed when he saw the guards pull out their truncheons.
‘Take him away, get him to the grounds as soon as possible’ the judge said, and walked away
Vaux followed with his eyes, slowly filling with tears…
***
‘Hey, you, the white haired one, wake up!’
Vaux rubbed his eyes, the bright sun was beaming down on him, and he squinted to see.
A sharp pain came from his scalp, the guard was pulling him out the prison cart by his hair, Vaux fell to the sandy floor with a thud.
‘You could have just asked.’ Vaux muttered whilst getting up and dusting off the sand.

Vaux looked up at the grim building that stood before him.
The guard slapped him on the back
‘Welcome to the arbiters grounds, your new home!’

Vaux shuddered as he was led inside the doors. He had done nothing wrong, but was about to suffer for it.

chapter 2 coming soon

Hey!
Loving the story! Oh no that poor guy!! I hope he's ok...the Arbiters grounds are AWFUL! I get the creeps just thinking about it!!

oo forgot wait till you hear my story!! Yeah I have one too :p I'll post it now...well the first bit anyway! Its a slight remake of TP...hope you like it!
The Triforce Gathering
In a land far, far way Hyrule Castle stood, towering above the many fields of Hyrule. Two young teenagers Zelda (who was princess of a Hyrule) and her close friend Link (protector of Hyrule) stood next to their horse Epona and watched in horror as a dark cloud of twilight covered the land. The darkness came closer and closer until it enveloped their bodies! They felt a painful burning as if their bodies were on fire. Their hands turned into paws, their heads turned more wolf-like. They sprouted tails and black fur. Their ears and teeth grew pointed. They had become wolves! The only thing distinguishing them from normal wolves was the Triforce. Three golden triangles that were part of Hyrule’s long mysterious past. It glowed on Zelda and Link’s paws. They slumped to the floor and woke up a few minutes later feeling extremely strange. They could hear and smell EVERYTHING! The breeze in the trees and the fresh smell of spring grass. It was amazing! Their new found bodies had heightened senses! They were seeing the world through different eyes. Zelda tried to speak but all that came out was a frightened snarl. She whimpered and laid her head on her paws. Link nudged her with his nose and looked at her with his bright blue eyes and told her, silently, that everything was going to be ok and they were going to be fine and they were going to save Hyrule from this dark blanket of twilight just like they’d done before. Zelda nodded, got up and together, they set off to find the light that Hyrule so desperately needed.

Nice short story. You should make another that's like a second chapter showing what happens to him while he's in there.