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Old 07-04-2007, 09:41 PM
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Heroes and Villians! My new story!

I know most people won't read this and probably won't even care! But if you want to read my book! But then again everybody hates my books! Nobody even cares if I write a book! So if you want read this story! But if you just think it's stupid already then don't read!

Normal School Day...kinda


The sun rose high over Hayfield upon Hayfield High School. I was walking down the sidewalk by myself. I was almost there when I noticed something above me. It was a jet plane. Someone jumped out. Legend, one of my friends, came next to me. "Whatcha lookin at?" she asked. She was 13, I was 16. I shrugged. "Someone just jumped out of a plane...Wait a minute!! That person just jumped out of a plane!!" I yelled running in circles. She grabbed me. She was a lot stronger than me and taller. "So what? They have a parachute." she pointed out. And when I looked up she was right. "Oh...now I'm ok...Now that person's cutting the ropes! Now they're falling!" I yelled about to run around in circles again. She walked away leaving me with a person falling to Earth like a ton of bricks. But then I knew who it was. It was Sullyer111, another one of my friends. She switched out her jetpack. She flew through the doors of the school. I could hear the teachers yelling and I knew another detention was coming. I walked to my locker to find it trashed as always. I grabbed my stuff for math and ran hoping not to be late again. I walked in ten seconds before the bell rang. I sat down and took out my notebook. I pretended to write notes while I thought about after school. After school, me and my friends were going to a fight. That's what we called it. We were going against a group we call the villians. They stole, lied, and were up to no good. The bell rang surprisingly and I walked back to my locker. Legend and Sullyer111 were waiting for me. But as I was almost there, a hand pushed me to the wall of lockers. They held me there by the throat. I knew who it was instantly. No one was there but Legend and Sullyer111 knew too. "James! Let go! Seriously! It's not funny!!" I yelled. He appeared in front of me still holding my throat. "Why should I?" He asked. I frowned. "Want me to torch you?" I asked. Yes, you guessed it. We were teen super heroes. Well most of us...some of us were older. James was the leader of the villians and I was the leader of the heroes. Behind him was Shiro. He could turn invisible too but he wasn't as strong as James. His hand was still on my throat holding me to the wall. A flame flickered on my finger. His eyes flickered to my hand but then grinned. "You gonna hurt me, flame girl?" he asked. My eyes glared at him. Legend walked up punching Shiro in the face. He backed up a little but came back flicking out his fire katanas. Legend hopped on her hover board flinging out the spikes on the sides. He swung at her, flames consuming the hallway. She dodged then getting a burn here and there. She whipped off her hover board landing to the ground with a thud. She threw another punch landing him right in the face. Blood ran down his face. He was about to throw another punch when flames licked at his shoulder. Flames sizzled on my fingertips. I shot flames at Shiro but soon was fighting for breath. All of the sudden a voice rang through the hall. "Stop! Stop that right now!" yelled the voice. I tried to look but couldn't. But soon I was glad. It was Miss Speedy, James's girlfriend. Funny thing is she's on our side. "James! Put Shadow down now!" she yelled. James, being the weakling around girls, put me down gently. He walked over to her trying to sweet talk her back to him. Too bad it sometimes didn't work. She walked over to us helping me up. Us heroes walked away with James dumbstruck. Miss Speedy still likes him but sometimes she can't handle him being on the villians side. We left without another word to them. We headed straight for the hideout. We had to get ready for the fight. The villians wouldn't stand a chance against us. No way, no how...

Tell me if I should put the second chapter in or not!
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Old 07-04-2007, 10:40 PM
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Awsome! Any more coming up? =3
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Old 07-04-2007, 10:44 PM
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Re: Heroes and Villians! My new story!

ya I'm working on chapter 2 right now!
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Old 07-04-2007, 10:56 PM
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Here's chapter 2!!!!

YAY!!! Here it is!!!

The Villians


Now I know your wondering where Sullyer111 was. Well she was working on her new invention. It was heat sensing eye glasses. She fit them on a helment for herself. We were busy getting on our battle gear. We were ready in a couple of minutes. Legend made supper, making spagettii. But enough about the heroes. Let's check on the villians.

They walked into their hideout dragging their feet. "I can't believe she told me to stop! I had almost killed Shadow!" yelled James. He was never used to losing especially to the heroes. Shiro rolled his eyes walking to his room. A voice rang through the hideout. "Hello! Who's there?" yelled the voice. James rolled his eyes, annoyed. "Hey Chuck! It's us!" James yelled back. Chuck ran from the living room, a bowl of potato chips in his hand. "Hey how was school? Boring? Exciting? You kill anybody?" he asked. "If you want to know, why don't you come to school instead of skipping?" he said back. Chuck raised an eyebrow. "Well the teachers don't like me that's why..." he said. James rolled his eyes. "If you desperatly need to know, the day was exciting. I almost killed Shadow but Miss Speedy stopped me. That's about it." said James. Chuck laughed. "Wish I could have been there. I could have beat her to a pulp." he said. James glared at him. "You couldn't even hurt a fly!" he said. Chuck grinned. Aww don't talk about yourself like that." he said back. James turned away from him walking toward the phone. He dialed bringing the phone to his ear. He put his hand over the receiver and yelled "What do you guys want on your pizza?" Shiro ran down the stairs at the question. "Pepperoni! We need pepperoni!" he yelled right in James's ear. James rubbed his ear. "Stop yelling! Alright we'll get pepperoni. Anything else?" he asked. No one answered. He took his hand off of the reciever and said "Large pepperoni please...oh and extra cheese." He put the phone back and sat down on the couch. He turned on the TV.


Hope you liked it!

Please say if I should put chapter 3!!
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Old 07-04-2007, 11:13 PM
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Re: Heroes and Villians! My new story!

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It was okay. =3 But do please post Chapter 3! I like this story. =3
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Old 07-04-2007, 11:15 PM
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Re: Heroes and Villians! My new story!

Thanks!!

Battle at the DQ


The sun rose high over Dairy Queen. We heroes walked in the casual way. Sullyer111 walked up to the counter. "I'd like 3 blizzards please." she said. Legend smiled. "Thanks Sullyer111 for getting us blizzards!" she said. Sullyer111 glared at her. "There all for me...I didn't get any for you!" she laughed. Legend was about to throw a pretend punch when the door opened. We turned to see the villians come swaggering in. We glared at them. They glared at us. Sullyer111 grabbed her blizzards and sat down. The villians walked up to the counter each buying a blizzard. I watched them like a hawk. Legend's fists were clenching and unclenching. All of us were on edge. But then something really pushed me off the edge. Shiro was gone. I turned to Legend hoping she could sense him somewhere. She looked back at me nodding her head. She was looking behind me. Flames flickered on my fingertips. I shot out flames behind me. And of course there he was right behind me. With burns all over his body he got out his fire katanas. He ran at me katanas swinging through the air. I dodged them with ease. But soon I found that not to be true. Blood poured down my left arm. Shiro grinned in enjoyment. But that enjoyment didn't last. Legend came from behind me punching him in the face. He backed up slowly but stopped. He came at her fire katanas flinging through the air. He was almost at her when he stopped. His eyes were wide and his face was as pale as a sheet of paper. I knew what had happened. It was Sullyer111 and her illutionist powers. Legend went up ready to punch him. But she was pushed back. "What the heck was that?" she asked. James laughed. "It's called a force field idiot!" he said. Legend ran at him hopping on her hover board. She was pushed back hitting the wall hard. She sat there on the ground blacked out. James smiled turning invisible. With Legend out of order I turned to Sullyer111. She pointed behind me but before I could do anything I was pushed back over the counter. I tried to get up but soon I was pushed back even further. I hit the blizzard machine hard. He reappeared above me holding the handle of the blizzard machine. "I think think you better cool off." he said pulling down the handle. Cold ice cream dripped down my head. I sat on the floor shivering. My flame was gone. The door flew open and Chuck ran through. "What'd I miss? What'd I miss?" he asked hurridly. James laughed. "You missed all the action." he said still laughing. "Not everything." said Sullyer111. She grabbed her wrist watch and turned a dial. A flame thrower came out of it. James laughed. "I'll just block it with a force field." he said. "That's not really my intention." she said turning to me. She blasted at me with fire and soon I was dry and felt strong. Sullyer111 grabbed me. "Make a huge fire around James and Shiro. Don't worry. I already fire proofed everything in here." she said. James laughed yet again. Legend woke up and told him to "Shut up!" Sullyer111 handed her a flame proof suit to wear. I could feel the fire burning brightly shooting from my fingertips. A force field appeared around James and Shiro. The flames rolled off the force field...right toward Chuck! The flames engulfed him. He fell to the DQ floor and soon it looked like he would be burnt to a crisp. James tried to put up a force field around him but it didn't work. It made things worse. He was almost dead when the flames went out. He lay still. No one could tell if he was dead. He was face down. No one dared flip him over. James was the first one to speak. "Maybe we should just leave him here...Shadow killed him!" he yelled laughing. I pointed a finger at him. "But you were the one who put up the force field." I yelled. Soon we were yelling at each other and it seemed it would never end. But soon someone made us stop. Red and Blue lights flashed outside. It turned out that the manager had called the police due to our violent outbreak as he called it. Legend grabbed me and Sullyer111 and ran out of the DQ.


There it is! Chapter 3!!!
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Old 07-08-2007, 11:33 AM
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Sorry it took me so long to find and read this! It's awsome. =3 Please do post the next chapter soon. X]
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Old 07-15-2007, 08:17 PM
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Re: Heroes and Villians! My new story!

Ok I'm working on it!!
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Old 07-16-2007, 07:48 PM
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Re: Heroes and Villians! My new story!

Here it is!! ^^

After effects of Battle DQ...


James and Shiro turned invisible just as the cops burst through the door. They found Chuck. They weren't scared to flip him over. His face was burnt and his eyes were black. They put him in a white bag and carried him out. James and Shiro reappeared. Tears welled up in James's eyes. Shiro started out the door. "You coming?" he asked. James wiped the tears from his eyes. "Ya but maybe we should pray that Chuck is ok?" he suggested. Shiro laughed. "You kidding? I'm gonna celebrate!" he yelled running out the door. He walked out but the tears were still in his eyes. Two days later Chuck died. He is now buried in Memorial Graveyard. Now I know you're wondering where was Miss Speedy during all this. She was at a day retreat at the spa. How nice...

We walked into our hideout bruises and cuts gallore. I fell onto the couch. My mind raced. I had just killed Chuck! I got up and ran to the phone. "Can I order 20 pizzas please?" I asked. I was going to celebrate. *Frame freezes. James walks out in tears. "Am I the only one sad about this? It's murder I tell you! Murder!" he yelled. *Gets hit in the head with flying brick* *Back to story* Legend came up behind me opening the fridge. She grabbed a gatorade before going back to our weight room. I decided to walk around since I was bored and the pizza wouldn't be there for awhile. I found Sullyer111 in the training room. We were each at a different level. Sullyer111 was on level 50. I was on level 51. Legend was on level 52. I watched from the top of the training center. She was destroying robots left and right. A robotic voice yelled "Level 50 complete...Would you like to continue?" "No thanks..." she said walking out. I walked around some more. I came to a dead end when I heard the doorbell ring. I ran down to the door payed the dilivery boy and brought it to the kitchen. We all ate two pizzas each. I was about to eat another piece when the door bell rang again. I opened the door to find someone. None of us knew who it was. "Hi I'm Candy and I was wondering if I could join the heroes." she asked.


Hope you like it!! ^^
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