OoT Link's Parody

Chapter 1 (He is 7 years in the future)
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* Link wakes up in a pile of dirt*

Link: Why must you wake me up so early?

Navi: Oh come on. It's not THAT early.

Link:...Navi, IT'S 4:00 IN THE MORNING!

Navi: So what?

Link: THATS WHEN THE REDEADS ARE OUT!

Navi: So?

ReDead: Hey, you Why not dinner?

Navi: Bye Link! *flies away*

Link: ...

ReDead: And you, You want to come along?

Link: No, *Stabs ReDead*

ReDead: Augh! Until next time! *Dies*

Navi: Well, That was weird, wasn't it?

Link: Let's go back in time now.
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End Of Chapter 1

My good sir, you need more length to your chapters. And quality (for lack of a better term for the moment.) For your sake I didn't vote yet. I'll see how the rest comes along.

Hmm...Well...more humor...and uh...make it longer.

I like it though.

I thought it was pretty good though you need more length. But other than that you have jokes and with more chapters you can have good character development.

it really needs to be longer, have more humor, & did I mention it being longer.
I'll vote when the next few chapters are posted

I really liked it and the redeads was funny, but I don't have any problems with it...

It's ok, not sure what I think of it yet. Like everyone else said, make it longer and try to fit a few jokes in there.