The Legemd of Zelda: War of Chaos

My original story, Rise of Evil, was never finished, and the other, The Eve Rest was never started. I have know wrought a new one that I hope will go far. It is
The Legend of
Zelda
War of Chaos
Prologue
100 years after the events of Twilight Princess, Hyrule was struck by a terrible wrath brought forth by the 7 evil beings know as the 7 Gods of Darkness. This alliance consisted of Ganon, Vaati, Majora, Veran, Onox, Shadow Link, and Twinrova. They sent out the minions to capture the 2 Hylians that held the other 2 pieces of the Triforce. To their surprise, they could only find the holder of the Triforce of Wisdom, Princess Zelda Hyrule VII. When they asked where the Triforce of Courage was, you refused to talk. They then decided to go and search for the holder of the Triforce of Courage on their own.
Chapter 1- The Holder of the Triforce of Courage
Running through a field in the small village of Saria, a young boy, named Link VII, was headed to the forbidden section of his village know as Valley of the Beast. “If you step foot in that valley, you’ll be sent to the Saria Dungeons!” said Link’s fairy, Cherry. “I don’t care,” Link panted, “I want that treasure!” He came across a giant door with the worlds ‘Restricted’ written in the ancient language of Hylian. Link then lifted his foot and kicked the door open. “Stop!” Cherry yelled as Link walked into the valley where, in the middle sat a blue sword that shown in the light. “So much for the Valley of the Beast,” Link said, “I see no beast.” He then walked over to the sword. At the foot of its pedestal, carved in Hylian, were the words ‘Here lays the legendary Sword of Evil’s Bane, The Master Sword’. “Cool!” Link said as he wrapped hands around its handle. He then pulled the sword from its pedestal. There was a clicking noise and the door slammed shut and locked. Then the walls spread further from him and a doorway appeared in one of the walls. The there was a roar from the doorway and a huge spider-like creature appeared. Then Majora appeared in the air above the beast. “There you are!” Majora said in a menacing voice, “You are the holder of the Triforce of Courage. I see you have met my pet, Queen Gohma.” Link stared from the demon to the spider-like creature. “This is your pet!?” Cherry asked surprised and shocked. “Yes,” Majora replied, “isn’t she beautiful? Now my pet, ATTACK!” With these words, the demon disappeared and the creature charged Link. “WHAAAA!!!” Link yelled dodging the monster. Link then took his new sword and slashed the beast’s eyes. “KIAAAAAAAA!!!” The beast screamed as his eye bled from the cut. “Die you ugly son of a gun!” Link yelled as he thrust his sword through the demon’s heart. “KREEEOOOOOLLLL!!!” Queen Gohma yelled as she fell to the floor. The beast’s body turned to dust and left behind a shield with a shining surface. “Link, that’s the Mirror Shield!” Cherry said as Link picked up the shield, “It was used by the Hero of Time just like that sword.” Link hooked the shield to the sword’s sheath and left the valley. “Link, you can’t go back to the village!” cherry yelled as she flew after him. “I have to.” Link said, “I need to ask the village elder about what Majora said.”
Chapter 2- The Wise Words of a Hero
“Grandfather!” Link said walking into the Elders hut, “I need to ask you something.” The Saria Elder looked and shook his head. “OK.” The man said. “I went to the Valley of the Beast and found this sword.” Link said holding out the Master Sword. The old man’s mouth fell open and then he said, “Could it be? No.” Link then went on to explain about the demon called Majora and how he unleashed a beast called Queen Ghoma on him. “After I killed it, the beast turned to dust and left behind this shield called the Mirror Shield.” Link said finishing up. “So you say Majora called you the Holder of the Triforce of Courage?” the Elder said as he opened a small chest sitting next to him, “If that is true, then this should glow when in comes in contact with you.” He then pulled out a small golden triangle and handed it to him. The triangle then began to glow instantly. “It is true. You are the new Hero of Time!” the Elder said as he took the triangle, “This is the Triforce of Courage. I was the last Hero of Time. I now will fuse the piece of Triforce into you. Oh goddesses of Hyrule, bless this boy with the Triforce of Courage and the power of Farore!” The triforce then absorbed into his left hand. On the back, the entire Triforce appeared and with the lower right corner piece glowing. “Now you have a mission,” Link V said to the new holder of the Triforce of Courage, “Now go and complete you destiny.” The Elder then turned to dust and floated away in the wind. “I will prevail grandfather.” Link said as he turned to leave the hut. When he was outside, the minions of the 7 Gods of Darkness were waiting for him.
Chapter 3- The Escape
“What the heck!!” Link said when he saw thousands of Moblins, Miniature Shadow Links, Ice and Fire Wizrobes, Poes, Miniblins, Mokoblins, floormasters, keeses, and Buzz Blobs. Then, everything around Link and Cherry froze. “What is this!?” Cherry asked as a figure began to appear in front of them. “I am Rauru, Sage of Light.” said the man that had just appeared in front of Link. He wore a golden and yellow robe with the symbol of light on it. He was a heavy set man with a white mustache. “Where are we?” Link asked Rauru. “You, my young boy, are in the Realm of the Sages.” Rauru replied, “Now, I see you have a problem.” He looked around at the beast around him. “Yeah, a big one.” Link said laughing. “Well, then you’ll need this.” Rauru said tossing Link a small ball of fire inside a crystal. “What is it?” Link asked staring at the small crystal. “That is Din’s Fire. When you gather enough magic into it, it will release a dome of fire around you and destroy about 50 of those monsters.” Rauru. “So I need to use this to kill all of these monsters?” Link asked. “No, no!” Rauru said laughing, “Just clear a path to escape the village. Then you need to reach Death Mountain and find the Fire Sage for further instructions. Rauru then disappeared and everything unfroze. “WAAAA!!!!” Link yelled as a moblin slashed at him. “Link, quick! Use Din’s Fire!” Cherry yelled. Link then gathered enough magic to unleash the power of fire. “RAUUUGGGGHHHH!!!!!” yelled the minions as they burned in the fire. He continued to use this ability until he was out of the village. “Now to find Death Mountain.” Link said as he looked to the North. A huge mountain rose high into the sky. “Well that was easy.” Cherry said laughing, “Onward to Death Mountain.”

I like the story, but I like it better when speech is seperated.

"What do you mean?" You may ask.

"I mean like this." I may say.

"This takes up more space though." You may say.

"It's easier to tell who says what this way." I may say.

Very Interesting I enjoyed It. Keep Up The Exelent Work!

I am working on typing Chapter 3 where he meets the new Fire Sage

I Suggest Work Editing The Title. You Spelled Legend Wrong. You Put Legemd

I know. I was just typing quick.

i like it so far. I could never write thatr much. I try but fail... Good job, keep up the good work.