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Legend of zelda, a revival
Legend of Zelda, New Dog, Newer Tricks
A corny title coupled with me procrastinating on my clan essay. How smart of me! Ha! Well grab a bowl of popcorn and read up. For certain rules and story elements this may interfere with, that’s why it’s fan fiction okay? So remember to chill. A new tale began, a tale of a new age, a new link, a new power. In the land of hyrule peace had finally seemed to be achieved. The great king of evil finally killed and banished away. No longer was a hero needed. Still that didn’t stop the relationship between the royal bloodline and that of the hero of time. As usual are hero was settled nicely in his village. As in the past the same Kokori village long before told of. But now our new hero doesn’t seem as,…..fitting for the part. We start as we find link, relaxing early in the morning by the passing stream. His tunic open almost like a trench cot swaying in the winds. His pants drawn into his boots hanging out making the bottoms appear more baggy. As he peacefully lounged chewing upon a wheat plant a bottle floated down stream. He quickly opened it to reveal a note. It sated “Link, I’m ready for you to prove how tuff you really are. Come down by the entrance to the lost woods and show me how your pathetic sword skills fair against me”. Link was truly exited as he quickly jumped to his feet and grabbed his wooden sword. “Finally I get to put that old’ wind bad Demitri in his place! Now I can get him out of everyone’s face bragging!” Just as he was about to race of to the challenge another less welcome message arrives. A message by a hyrulian soldier. “Link!” he called. “Link You have been requested to meet the princess at the castle.” He slowly drew upon him riding his glorious white stallion. One of the higher ranking generals link supposed. “Aw man what does she want this time? Last week it was a skultulla eating some cattle. The time before it was annoying owls. Can’t you guard and soldiers handle anything?” . He growled at him. “I have no time for commentary this is urgent.” Link continued to argue, “Well I have no horse of my own to ride, and you know how far the castl…..”. Before he could finish a second horse drew near with no rider. A brown horse with a green saddle. Made especially for link. “ Ehhehehe? Fine I’ll get moving”. Link lethargically gathered the rest of his gear he thought he might need and mounted headed off towards the castle with the general. During the ride he wondered why it be so urgent to send two horses , one for link to ride? Was it truly that important? After a few hours of riding now with it reaching mid day, the two had reached the gates. Link goofily smiled at the guards as he greeted them, “Hey boys, couldn’t clean the moat right so now they need me to do the dirty work?“ The guards ignored him as they directed link into the main area of the castle. There he met and angry Zelda tapping her foot like his mother and the king shuffling off to greet him. “Link!” He quickly greeted him with a hardy handshake. “What a pleasure to finally have you hear again!” . Link coolly replied, “Well you know, my life is so busy I can never make time to visit!” The both had a good laugh as Zelda interrupted. “Father there is important business to attend to!” He replied, “Why you are right princess. It is urgent we get strait to the point.” The king then took his place on the large throne. Zelda then got down to it “Link we hear of a small disturbances occurring in the village near by. It is urgent that you head to Kakoriko Village to investigate.” Link angrily interrupted, “Why didn’t you just send your men up there to investigate themselves. What are they good for?”, “ I WAS TRYING TO GET TO THAT!” , Zelda firmly replied. “We didn’t want to cause any high alarm about what was going on, It would be easier to send a more dependable, “she said sarcastically, “single person for the job.” “We may suspect there may be powerful shek…”, Link immediately went off, “Zelda I get you I’m leaving”. Before she had time to scream at his ignorance link was already horseback headed to town…..To be continued very soon….Like later today. So what did you all think so far? Last edited by lugeasilver; 02-03-2006 at 07:56 PM. Reason: I put in the wrong title |

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Part 2...
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I didn’t describe and use enough big words to some. Others I didn’t capitalize link or maybe they didn’t like how he spoke. Just chill okay. I’ll try my best to do better this time. Oh and I would listen to Zelda music to set the mood. As link rode across the field he began thinking again, what could be waiting for him in the village ahead. Could it be legendary swordsman, an evil dragon, or perhaps “he” has somehow returned. He shook of these crazy ideas as he soon arrived at the entrance to Kakoriko Village. He dismounted the horse and slowly entered the town waving to the guards. The stillness of the town was a it disturbing, then again it was beginning to get dark. The sun slowly setting and the day soon dipped into the night. Still, nothing too disturbing was found. Link was growing tired and went to a near by in. He walked in and was quickly welcomed. “ Hello, hello! Welcome to my quaint little in! Please enjoy your stay!”. Link was puzzled, “Um...why than you. Why…are you being so friendly? Is this a shake down?”, “No no force not kind sir! We just haven’t had many …visitors lately”. ::Link raised a brow as he took off his long trench coat like tunic and rested it on the back of his chair as he sat down. “ Um, not many visitors? This place would seem to be an area with lots of trade and what not? “He reaches into his pocket and all he can find is a sack of no more than three rupees. “Um...hehehe can you take an I.O.U? “ He made a goofy smile but to his surprise the inn keeper quickly took it. His brown mustache swayed as he ran to the counter and put the three rupees away. “So why aren’t there many visitors now a days? “The man mealy stood there silent. Link scratched his head and finally decided to turn in for the night. He went into the back and prepared for sleep….. The next morning there was a rude awakening. Link was …shaken and arose to the sound of an attack…”Swordsman, swordsman! Please awaken!”, Link as a true hero would replied…”Uuuhh, five more minutes mom”. He was then theory beaten in the head by a frying pan. He quickly responded as he jumped to his feet raising his weapon, “Wah wah wha!? What’s going on here!?” “Swordsman were under attack please save us!” And with that Link was already racing down the steps and headed out the door. As he arrived outside he was confronted by a man in a black cloth, “Hey pal, don’t you get peace? Either you calm down or I’ll send you home in pieces!” The man slightly chuckled, “Very confident are we? Look at what I have made of this town. What makes you think I can’t do the same to you?” Link observed the damaged fences, broken windows, and several fires around town along with many screaming villagers in the backround. “He you forget I’m not a piece of wood.” Link then quickly jumos back and draws his blade. The curved, hook like end of it gleems beutifly in the morning sun and reflects his amused face. Link leaps forward with a powerful jump attack but the man quickly dodges it. Link gets back up, “Wow your pretty fast hu? But not too fast for this one! “ Link makes a speedy dash twads the man, almost like a bolt of lightning but soon, he vanishes. Link looks about puzzled and then looks behind him to see the man was snickering. Befor he could react the man let forth a powerful round house kick to the hero’s face. Sening him flying back trying not to fall over. He wiped the blood off his face and tried again bu the same occurred. The man simply vanished and appeared behind the hero but this time grabed his neck. He then slamed him on the ground. “Aaahh! “ He laid there for a moment at the man simply laughed. When link came to his feet the man vanished in a puff once more. This time he was ready. Link unleashed a powerful back hand and miraculously knocked the man right in the face. “ha! It’s over now! Your tricks won’t save youn any more!!” Link then turn aroud and slashed the man across his shoulder leaving him in great agony, He stood there for a moment still in shock from beging caught off guard. Link then took him by the neck and charged as he ramed the man into the wall of a building. “It end today, light out pal! “ Link was about to drive his blade trhough the man’s skull when he interrupted, “Yes lights out for you my foolish Link!” He then fired a ball of yellow lightning sendng link flying into another building smashing into the wall leaving a deep imprint. The man then let loose more of these thinder strikes but they rested on links body and held him in the air. The man then pulled a knife from his cloak and slowly aimed his arm at link’s neck……….. |

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. Link doesn't seem like the person to chop up people easy. Link also seems a little mean...Also, what age is Link? Mabey add some monsters that's familiar too Zelda fans. All of it looks very good. Keep at it, and don't stop putting thought into the storyline .
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Part-3 ::1
Okay here’s the next part of the beginning of Link’s newest adventure. To answer any questions some may have link is about 16 at the time. He seems a bit mean to the man because well, e just thrashed him. I mean come on. If a guy just pulled a Houdini on me and beat me up I wouldn’t feel so friendly. Well it’s not time for the presentation. It appeared that our hero’s adventure would not last too much longer. He was on the ropes, or should I say the wood. The man was just bout to finish Link off with a précised throw of a knife. Sadly for him, the villagers had another plan in mind. The all surrounded Link and the cloaked figure armed with knives, pitch forks, and whatever they could muster up. “Hahahaha!” he bellowed, “What makes you foolish people think you have a ghost of a chance of stopping someone of my statues. I’ll show you how I can stop you with a flick of my wrist!” Link watched in rage as he charged his hand for a huge blast of energy at the towns folk until they decided to take the first move. As they stampeded towards his he didn’t realized the hundreds in numbers that he needed to face. It would appear or cloaked friend would not be foolish enough to take on so many and in a puff of smoke he disappeared. Link then fell to the ground being released from the magical grasp. He then, defeated and humiliated, slowly treaded off away from Kakoriko village. The towns folk didn’t even notice his exit as they were celebrating there victory. Combined they could do anything they thought, yet they will on day soon learn that you can’t always rely on someone else to be there. In the mean time Link had already rode his way back to the castle and with shame presented himself to the princess. “I….I couldn’t get the job done. There was a man…in a black cloak. He moved as if, …” Zelda quickly interrupted him, “He moved as if he knew of the ancient people of the shieka. “ Link looked up with a rage filled face. “You knew the whole time didn’t you! You were so smug when I left. You just wanted to have me get a thrall ass whooping!” . “ It wouldn’t have happened that way if you had only listened to me!” Zelda answered in disgust. “Well I also assumed those little stories you told me were just stories. I was a mere child how was I to know…” She looked at him now with a saddened look. “I can always help you, stories of there techniques have been passes down through the royal blood line I could, “Yeah right,” he yelled back, “After that incident I’m handling this guy by myself. You’ll just set me up for disaster.”, he slowly got closer to her, “You think just because you older and a queen your smarter than I am? I’m done with this! I,” “link! Why must you be so ignorant. If you feel you can handle it on your own then fine! I hope you get killed!.” Link looked at her in disbelief and even later as the guards had soon come up and apprehended Link, dragging him out the castle and throwing him into the town outside of the grounds. “your presence in no longer needed. Please leave.” Link growled at the guard as he soon headed off back to Kokori once again by horse. When he arrived the next day we furiously entered alarming a few people but attracted attention from Demitri. He soon confronted link as tried to keep up at his quick pace. “Hey missing link! Where were you the other day. Guess you chickened ou.. “ And with that, link had given him s strong left hook to the face and knocked out Demitri. Normally a pleasure but now an annoyance. As he rested down by the river he began to relax and reached in his pocket for a rock to throw across the river. “Man that Zelda, all well. It isn’t going to get to me today. I’m just going to rela..” Link then discovered a foreign object in his pocket. When he pulled it out it appeared to be a scroll like piece of paper. As he opened it up it had strange instructions and directions for moves of the….shieka. “”Well, I guess Zelda couldn’t stay mad at me for long could she? He chuckled to himself as he examined it theory. It contained information about harnessing inner energy and the use of powder’s , stealth, and even style for amazing abilities and even assassinations. For the next three days “because I’m too lazy to explain it ” link trained and practiced the ways of the shieka in the lost woods. After three days had past link came out much different than when we went in. He had a beaming smile of confidence on his face and ready to go…….. |

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I like seeing link as a teenager, rather than asmall boy. It allows for him to have more developed emotions, yet not too developed. I love the plot, keep it up! I also like the Sheikah twist, it adds depth. Good work!
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I liked your fan fiction. I liked how you added comedy and action into the same story. Great ideas too! Link learning the techingiques of the Skeika...can't wait for the next chapter!
[justkidding]But since why did you make Link curse?[/justkidding]
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Re: Legend of zelda, the sheka reamerge
And it continues
Okay what we have here is part 4 of 1. As you should know, Link has now learned some of the shieka abilities. I’m not a shieka so I’m kind of making a lot of this stuff up. They remind me of ninjas and stuff so I’m going to look to Naruto a little bit for this. As Link became house mounted once more he looked back at the fresh green of Kokori Village. He thought then again about the cloaked man and if he would ever see it all again. Soon to spoil his moment came Demitri. “ Hey lunk! Were are you off to in such a hurry? You just got back!. Afraid of my colossal power eh? “ Link this time mealy laughed. “Tell everyone I said goodbye. I might not be back for a while!” And with that link rode off out into the lush fields of hyrule once more. The morning sun gleaming on his face as was he gleaming back. As it soon grew to mid day riding across the field his mind had cleared of the upcoming battle. All he could think about was the kingdom of hyrule and how for some reason there were still monsters that lurked about. Monsters that mimic pigs and such . Monsters that still rear the smell of evil. Still, link hadn’t much time to thing about this because soon he was stopped by a large tree by the cloaked man himself. Link then dismounts his horse and eagerly steps towards him. “ Well, well, well if it isn’t old no face.” He chuckles, “No face? What ever do you mean? “ Link then stops a few feet in front of him and smirks, “As in no way your going to want to show your face after this.” The man began to laugh wildly. “Hahahahaha! What a foolish threat. I had you finished last time and your finished this time!” The man then vanished in a puff of smoke as before but link was ready. He quickly stuck his hand out and grasped at what appeared top be air but ended up being the man’s head. “ No mister no face. Remember what I said. “ Link the quickly slammed the man’s head into the dirt as he quickly jumped back. Then man then recovered from the blow and quickly got to his feet. “ Never again!” The man then charged at link and left a hard left hook to his face. Link began to fly back but the man had other plans, He disappeared again and ended up behind link and gave him a roundhouse kick. Link appeared beaten already as he was falling to the ground and the man flashed away one last time. He appeared high in the air and was about to stomp him within an inch of his life when link then vanished as well!. When the man hit the ground he was shocked. “ Were!? Where have you escaped to?! Arrch!” His confusion turned to rage as he was soon his with an arrow in the shoulder. He looked about and then saw link in the large tree with a bow in hand. Link then had such a smug look on his face the man was in blind furry. “ Ha! I’m kind of sad you’re a no face now since I can’t see the look on it! “ Link the n unsheathes his glorious blade as the sun slowly moves behind him giving him such a heroic image. He then breaks it as he jumps from the tree and dives towards the man. “ I said never again and I meant it!” The fan then fortuitously blasts what it would seem like hundreds of energy blasts at link. Sadly for him he was so blinded that most just went right pas him. The rest he merely took out his shield and deflected then away. With one final effort the man let loose a huge thunder ball strait a Link, “Prepare to die you foolish boy!” In his anger he didn’t realize his cloak came flying off. Link didn’t care as all he did was use his sword and with a well places slice cut right through the energy and then landed a mighty slash on the chest of his enemy. After that the man soon |

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Will it ever stop??!
Okay here is part five of one of my fan fiction. I don’t know how many parts I will have. This might be the last part of part one but there is chapter tw, three, and a bunch of others. So let me freestyle another fan fiction. If you aren’t exited yet, the mystery man is about to be revealed. “You look like….Ganondorf!” Could it be? Could the great king of evil have re-emerged and once more, be defeated so easily? ! The air grew eerily still as he shown his sinister face to Link once more. It’s as if all time had stopped. The unthinkable had happened. Or had it? The man staggered to his feet and hard of breath, responded to link. “ You fool, …..do you really think that You greatest nightmare has come true? That I am Ganondorf?! “ As he stood up strait once more Link realized, “You look awful young for a guy thousands of years old. Is that mask? I hate masks. There so creepy and…” Link was quickly interrupted “I said shut up! I am not the great king of evil. But I will be far greater. I am his son! “ With that a dramatic organ played out of no were at the shocking news. “What?! His, his, son?! Who would Marry someone like him?!, “Ha! No one can appreciate our powerful bloodline of the king of Gorudos. I was born of one of the foolish women in the fortress. After I was born I quickly learned of my heritage. I could feel the power rushing through me. Since then I knew what I had to do… “Do what?” Link asked. It is no concern of yours you foolish elf. All you need to know is that peace will no longer be a word well known in hyrule or soon the world! “ And with that Ganondorf son disappeared in a purple haze in the air. As it dissipated all was left was a note. Link picked it up and was angered to see it had the mark that always blessed the original King of evil. The triforce of power. Link clenched his fist and sheathed his sword as he soon re-mounted upon his horse and rose swards the castle. He was soon through the gates just before night fall. As link rode to the castle he quickly leaped from his horse. He looked around for a moment and saw all the guards on duty. “Man, there’s no time to explain….Unless. Hehehehe. “ Link then began running towards the entrance of the castle quickly. The guards didn’t budge being so well trained. But if one were to pass there line, they would attack like animals. Even against link. At the last moment link vanished into the shadows and under the vile of darkness and his new abilities he wound up at the castle doors. He quietly slipped in and closed the door behind him. Sadly for him he was greeted by an angry Zelda. “Link?! What the hell are you doing here?! it’s the middle of the night!. “Shhh shh! Calm down Zelda I have some terrible news! “ She taped her foot impatiently. “Fine but if it isn’t important I’ll have you held in prison for a month! “ Link casually rolled his eyes at her and mealy said “Ganondorf son….” Zelda grew silent as they discussed the situation over night. Once again I’m too lazy of a narrator to explain this in detail. The next morning Link, the King of Hyrule, and Zelda all assembled. “Well it’s settled!” the king proclaimed “Link will take charge of discovering Ganondorf son or whoever this is and stopping his plans at all costs! It is imperative you stay here and wait for orders or venture out and gather clues to this. This is understood!? “ Link quickly answered “Yes sire!” “And Zelda, you will also remain here and try your best to aid link and at all costs, keep the triforce of wisdom safe!” Zelda then answered “Yes father”. “Now Link, as your first order ob business I would advise you to continue patrol around Kakoriko village until further notice. Now move out! “And with a light smirk link headed off to Kakoriko Village. What dangers could await him? Is this truly Ganondorf’s son? And will the master sword need to be called again to save the kingdom of Hyrule? These answers and more will be answered soon enough. Tune it next week and find out! |

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