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Old 08-20-2005, 08:16 PM
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(Act) Heaven's Guard: REDUX (T)

Chapter 1, Entry 1: See you in hell.

“Run, legs run!” Richard Kings said to himself. He was running through a huge building, with doors everywhere. The walls were lifelessly brown, as were the floor and ceiling.
“Stop or we’ll shoot!” he heard behind him. The guards were still chasing him. They took their handguns, and shot before Richard could answer. Richard quickly opened a door, and ran ahead.

Or, he would. Instead, he saw four guards in front of him, with their guns raised. “Don’t move! Or we’ll shoot you!” shouted one of them. Richard could see he was new at this. He always had an eye for details.

But, there was a bigger problem. A tall man, dressed in black, with black hair and pitch black sunglasses appeared from behind the guards. Richard immediately recognised him. This man was his boss, Mr. Harold Grave, or Grave for his employees. He was the one that sent the guards after him.

“Idiot… Did you really think you could get away with that?!” Grave said to him. “That’s what I was planning…” replied Richard. “Fool.”

Suddenly… pain. Grave punched him on his face. He raised his arm, wanting to strike again… However, Richard was prepared this time.

He grabbed the arm Grave was trying to punch him with, and then he, Richard, tried to punch him, Grave, with his other hand.

However, Grave was more powerful then he looked. He stopped the attack, and kicked Richard in his stomach. “You’re even a bigger idiot then I thought you were…” he said.

Grave grabbed a gun out of his pocket. “This is for my dead brother…,” he said. “Maybe you’ll see him… IN HELL.” He then pulled the trigger.

Richard felt an intense pain in his forehead… He fell over but.. When his body reached the floor, he was already dead…

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Okay, everyone, this is the better version of my first story, Heaven's Guard.

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