Legend of Zelda: A new Hero

Chapter 1: The Meeting

Link woke up from a rest in math class, he yawned and got his stuff 'Thats the last time i want to see you sleep in this class young man!' yelled the teacher for the 4 time that week. All Link did was walk on to his next class. When he got there he saw a girl he had never met before, he walked upto her and was about to say 'hey, what your name?' but then the really mean teacher walked past him and this is he kind of teacher you dont even want to go near, so he back off really quickly

'hey Link' said a familler voice 'hey zelda' Link replyed 'look, i'm really busy right now' 'what, you dont have time for your girl friend?' she said ' You are not my girlfriend zelda! GOD! why do you keep saying that!' An angry link yelled.
Then the new girl walked past 'gotta go' he said to Zelda, Zelda folded her arms and said 'links weird some times, but i have to put up with him' then she walked off
'uh, hey, i'm link' he said to the girl, close up he could see that she was wearing a green top and blue jeans and had dark green streaks though her hair 'hey' she said ' um, what do you want?' 'i just wanted to meet you' link said 'well, if you need anything, let your people call my people, we'll do lunch' she said and walked off

Hey nice story Aqua! its a good story so far. I like the way you write, its so good, i can see the pic right in my head, though you have done better stories before, but this one is great too! Great job, i can't wait for the next chapter!

Link walked home looking at the stuff he had tomorrow, 'maths, English, history' then he flicked though the other notes, he went past one that said "school dance" and in a pen it said "will you go with me?" and guess who it was from, Zelda. Theres one stright answer to give to a demtented girl

'No? what do mean no?' zelda said 'im your girlfriend!' 'you are not my girlfriend zelda!' Link yelled and he stormed off. 20 minutes later he was sitting under a tree that was near a stream and he just stared into space, Then in the corner of his eye he saw that girl with dark green streaks in her hair walk past and sit near the stream's edge, Link got up and walked over to her 'its a nice view isnt it?' he said to her 'it is, whats your name by the way?' she asked 'link' he answered 'why do you wanna know?' ' a freaky blonde chick told me to stay away from you, she said that she was your boyfriend' she stated link nodded and said' that was zelda, and i am not her boyfriend, theres something up with that girl'
" by the way, my name is Erynn' she said while looking at link's face

Erynn and Link were walking to their next class and they walked past the notice board 'A school dance? those are so lame, they never have the good music there.' Erynn remarked
' well, the kids are picking the music this year' Link said. Zelda walked past and stops dead infront of them 'link are you cheating on me?' she said while glareing at Erynn ' no, hes not, coz he is not your boyfriend' Erynn said while pushing past Zelda.

sweet Do more chapters................

Good but i sorta dont understand how link is in school. Were there schools back there. Also i dont get some of the sentences.

its based around 2005

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Hey Aqua, what country do you come from because your grammar doesnt look like you come from a mainly english speaking country. no offence.

hey, i just cant spell,