(Rom) Feelings Never Die [T]

This is a fanfiction awfully similar to my other one, The Warmth of Love. I wrote it the day after I wrote TWoL. Except now it is between Hiei and his lover (whom I made up just to make it cute).



These characters are from Yu-Yu Hakusho. I do not own them, just the short fanfiction.


Feelings Never Die

I remember you snuggling close to my body, saying how warm I was. I enclosed you in my embrace and pulled you closer to my chest, executing a low groan from your lips. We cuddled for hours, keeping each other warm in the midst of the winter. You told me you loved me and I returned those words, knowing that the day that we court each other had finally come.
When I hear you sigh deeply and caress my hair, you begin to drift off to sleep. I laughed softly; do you really trust me that much? Do you know that I’ll protect you no matter what without me saying those very words? You seemed to be very good at reading my mind. You answered me with a long kiss, your lips pressing so gently against mine. I pulled you even closer, touching you to every part of my body. I savored the feeling of your warmth against my own, whispering in your ear the sweet words of only the truest lovers.
As I watch over your sleep I think of the many mishaps we’ve been through just to get this far. The day you first confessed your love to me…there were tears in your eyes, the eyes that were staring at me so intently. I was speechless, wondering if it had been real. Someone actually cared for me…made me feel like I belong in this world. My past seemed to have paid off; you ran into my arms without waiting for my social reaction.
That was the first hug I had ever received. How special I felt when you began crying on my shoulder because I was the only one you trusted. Everyone else made you feel like a slave to this world, but you stated that I was the one you longed for. Your hair brushing gently against my face, I told you it was okay and that I would be here for you.
The others weren’t around to see this touching moment. I had wanted so badly to have someone to care for, to hold, and to cherish; I had never had that chance until now. I’ve always wanted to talk to my sister, Yukina, but she was playing with nature’s creations every time I felt that way. I never wanted to interrupt her; I didn’t think my needs were more important than hers.
But now, as I look into your face, my heart soars. I have finally found love, and it will hopefully stay this way until the day we part. I realize you are human and don’t live for thousands of years; when I think of this, I cry inside. I keep thinking it would be better if I went first, but life doesn’t work that way.
When you wake up, you greet me with a warm smile. I smile back, bearing the fangs that you said you found so irresistible. As I kiss your forehead, you softly utter my name. I look down into your eyes and wait for the question I knew was coming.
You stalled for awhile, then asked me why I never showed my feelings for girls before. I told you the truth: I had always thought of females as beautiful creatures with tender hearts. I never showed my true beliefs of these certain creatures because I was afraid that they wouldn’t accept me; they would abandon me like so many other people have.
As I speak these words, you break into tears of happiness. I always had a way with controlling your emotions, whether I really wanted to or not. I’m so glad you allow me that much power and don’t reject me. Even though I’m not human, you still respect me and think of me as your little demon lover.
My life has changed because of you. I still act the same as I always do around Yusuke and the gang, but when I’m with you I can sit back and relax. I feel that when I’m around you, I can expose my emotions and not keep them crammed up inside of me. Is this the true feeling of trust? I hope so; I’ll be feeling it a lot around you.
I could never and never will understand why you ask so little of me. All you want from me is to be held, cared for, and protected. Those are easy tasks; I even enjoy all of them. I’m so glad you’ve come to me in this way.
I kiss your neck tenderly, letting my fangs graze over your skin like you said you always wanted them to. You’re ticklish, aren’t you? I can tell. When I caress you with my teeth you flinch, laughing and giggling. It’s such a pleasant sound; your little giggles run through my head. How do you make such a sound? So full, yet so quiet at the same time. How I long to laugh with you, but I’ve never been very familiar with it.
But now, does that even matter? You're here. You're with me. That is the only thing that matters...

And so you continue to amaze, Alonely.

Your style here is consistent with TWoL (which means it's as close to perfect as I've ever seen for a piece like this), but the difference in subject matter gives it a slightly different feel. Plus, the way you've written it would tell me it was the same person as TWoL, even if you hadn't said so at the top.

As I've said in your TWoL thread, I'd like to see you 12,000-word fic. Especially if it's up to the standard these two have been.