(Zgen/Rom) Gannon's Revenge (T)

(Zgen/Rom) Gannon’s Revenge (T)
Author’s note: This is right after Link defeats Gannon and escapes and all that. Link was brought back to a child remembering every thing he did also the royal family and zoras/gorons and Navi know too no one else though. Also I’d like to say this will probably be a crappy story with misspelled words. I wish I could do better and am probably not meant for writer stories; after all I’m only in 4th grade. Also feel free to tell me anything wrong and I’ll put in my “mistakes” book for future stories. Thank you.
Chapter 1: Link’s destiny.
A cold wind blew threw Link’s tall house as he slowly awoke. His eyes opened and he took a whiff of his house and a smile crept open his face. He was home nice and young with all his gadgets. He looked around hoping to see Navi and he did! Navi was asleep on a desk on the other side. Link let her sleep and got of his bed. He slowly moved out to his small porch to see the sun raising.

“Hi Link!” A voice shouted from below.
Link smiled widely as he saw Saria climbing up the ladder.
“Link! I saw a fearie’s glow through your window! You got one!” She said happily. Link decided not to tell Saraia's future. He thought becoming a sage was a good surprise but not right now. “Link?” Saria Saria asked as Link just stood there.
” Oh uhh sorry just thinking.” Link said. “Oh well what’s its name link?” Saria asked.

“Well acutely it’s a she and her name is Navi.” Link said.

“Hmmmm funny name, anyway. Come on Link you where asleep all day yesterday.” Saria said worried.
“Really?” Link asked looking at himself.
“Yeah we are all worried we thought something had happened to you.” Saria said.
“Well I’m ok now!” Link said reassuringly as Saria’s face looked worried.
“There starting to get up.”

She said pointing to the houses as small people began to walk out. “Let’s go tell them you’re ok Link.” Saria said.
“Ok.” Link said following her down the ladder. “Navi!” Link yelled from below as Navi floated down to Link still tired. “That battle made me so tired Link.” Navi said her eyes still shut. “Battle what battle?”

Saria asked. Navi opened her eyes and quickly realized that the sages had already sent them back. “Ummm you know Link the battle” Navi said. “Uhhh yeah I went to hit some training dummies when I woke up a while ago!” Link said quickly. “Oh.” Saria said.

Saria felt Link was lying some way but she decided to leave it. “I’m goanna go take a walk in Hyrule field.” Link said. Saria gasped “Link Kakori Kids can’t leave the forest reamber?’ Saria said. Oh right Link said in his head remembering.

“Well I’m tired you know…” Link said climbing the ladder. “But Link every one thinks your dead still.” Saria said. “Oh right well tell them I’m not.” Link said. Saria figured he was still tired and walked away.

“I have to meet Zelda.” Said Link. “No you don’t you want to meet Zelda.” Navi said correcting him. “Fine but reamber the royal family still reamber.” Link said. “Oh right.” Navi said. Link crawled out and jumped of the back of his tree house. He slowly slid along the wall hiding. Link watched the small gurad the way out. “Navi distract him.” Link ordered in a whisper. “Ok just don’t be so orderish say please next time.” Navi said.

Navi flew fast about 11 feat in front the guard then flew on the ground like she was dieing. The guard quickly ran up to Navi along with a few others. Link ran through the door and waited for Navi.

Link heard footsteps and turned to see Saria. “Link you’ll die and you lied to me..” Saria said. Link sighed he couldn’t deal with her not trusting him. “I’ll tell you.” Link sat down and told the whole story of his adventure which took about an hour at the beginning Navi floated in.

She warned Link not to tell her But Link said it anyway. Navi listened to Link saying in her head Yep I helped. When Link was finished Saria was amazed. “You’re a Hyliaen? And I’m goanna be a sage? And you saved me along with Hyrule!” Saria said believing him at once. She hugged him and whispered “good job..Hero of time.”

Link and Navi said goodbye after Navi saying several times don’t tell anyone! Link looked around and smelled the fresh grass and noon air. “Just think what Gannon would of done if it weren’t for you Link..”

Link didn’t say anything. “Good old modest Link.” Navi said as she slid into his pocket. Link walked over the bridge into the lively market. He was happy to see lots of lively people instead of unlivley redeads. Link waved hi to some strangers who waved back.

Then Link slowly walked on the castle dirt. He thought about Zelda and her pretty face. He quickly her face out his head and climbed the vines silently. Zelda’s face kept entering his. He wondered why he was now running through the area the guards not seeing him. He figured they knew about him but didn’t care.

He ran up more vines and dived in the water. He was swimming as fast as he could. He’d never wanted to see Zelda more badly and she wasn’t even hurt. His Deku shield bobbed up and down as he climbed up.

He arranged the boxes as fast as he could and jumped through the space. He stoped for a break only to have Zelda’s face enter his beating heart. He thought next Zelda would kiss him. He shook all thought of Zelda out his head and stared at his sword.

Link ran through the areas stopping so as not let the guards see him. He walked to where he very first encountered the girl that made him feel numb and nervous. Zelda was singing to herself on her stool eyes closed.

“Zelda..” Link said. “Hu?” Zelda’s eyes opened. “Link! Our hero!” Zelda said running at him. Right out of the blue he was hugged. As her hands touched his back he felt happy like nothing else could hurt him.

“Zelda.” Impa said looking at her. “Impa Link’s back!” Zelda said happily. “Good Zelda go to the castle and bring Link some good milk.” Impa said. Zelda nodded and ran of in her dress. Impa looked at Link. “Umm why are you just standing there?” Link asked feeling a bit uncomfortable. Her arm rasided holding a Deku Nut and she threw it a big flash of light.

Link rubbed his eyes adjusting his sight. As his eyes opened they went wide. He was in a room with decorated glass windows. The King of Hyrule stood at the end. “Link…Hyrule needs you.”

Coming Soon: Chapter 2: The Dawn of Gannon’s Revenge.
(Zgen/Rom) Link’s Adventure (T)

That ws so seriously cheesy...and I loved every word of it. I hope you wrote more cause I'd really like to read it.

You should realize though, you have a serious under usage of pronouns....strangely missing pronouns, but whatever...being comma challenged myself I got little to say on that note

Chapter 2: Gannon’s Revenge.

Link woke up in a big bed hearing guards running around preparing for something big. Link had talked to the king and Impa about his new quest. He really felt bad about this one.

Link stared into the wall remembering what had been said.

“Link….somehow someway Gannon has escaped.” The king said. “But how?" I just beat him!” Link said mad that he had no time of. “We don’t understand either now calm down Link.” Impa said patiently.

“You see Link…well.” The king said not finishing his sentence worried looking. “Zelda has a brother.” Impa said. “What?” Link asked surprised at this new peace of information.

“Yes…, Link Zelda doesn’t even know.” The King said. “We sent him far away because there was a legend after the royal family had two children a boy and a girl, the boy would get sent away or release great and terrible evil.” The king said.

“It seems the boy figured out his real family and came back.” Impa said. “So…this boy set free Gannon from where I trapped him?” asked Link confused. “Yes, you see it was only because of Gannon that the boy got here.” Impa said. “But Gannon was sealed away!” Link said. “Exactly….which is why we have reason to believe it was a follower of Gannon who survived.” Impa said. “But then….” Impa shuddered.

“A boy appeared messy orange hair and blood red eyes.” Impa said. “Sounds like Gannon...” Link stated. “Well it was Gannon’s son…..” The king said. “What??” Link looked confused. “We are all confused… Link.” “But he warned us Gannon’s not real I am I’m his blood!”

“He fainted after that.” The king said. “We searched him and found a scroll.” Impa said as she handed him the scroll. Link read “The Real Legend. After a boy of the royal family was born he would grow his life normal. An evil man named Gannon will attack for 7 years then out of nowhere a boy in green will stop him. After that happens the boy will be brought back through time to live his life but Gannon’s son would release pure evil. The royal boy will stop him.”


Link finished thinking “So you got the wrong legend which caused you to send the hero away?” Link asked. “Yes now our boy is along side with Gannon’s son ready to take over Hyrule.” The king said. “But don’t we have him?” Link asked. “No he escaped sadly.” Impa said. “Nothing bad as happened yet but you must prepare link.” The king said.

Link’s vision was cut short. “Link? Link?” Zelda asked worried. She had been saying Link for a while and was about to call for help. “Oh sorry Zelda.” Link said. “Come on Link daddy said we should go play in Hyrule Market.” Zelda said. Link wondered why but was pulled away too fast to think.

Link and Zelda walked to Hyrule Market talking. “Link what did daddy and Impa need from you/” Zelda asked curios. “Oh they wanted to say thanks and all.” Link lied. “Oh ok.” Zelda said. “Let’s stay around the castle Zelda.” Link said.

“Ok Link.” Zelda said obeying his orders and not another word he was tagged. “Tag your it!” Zelda said giggling and she ran of. Link ran after shouting playfully I’m goanna get you! And such. The king looked from a high window looking happy he turned to leave and there was a boy about Link’s age with dirty messy orange hair and deep red eyes.

There’s chapter 2 sorry I took so long to write more!

Good writing makes a good story. Nice work there!

What dose the gannd stand for in the autors note

Chapter 3: Gannon has a plan.
Author’s Note: Ok I’ve taken so long lifes causing problems we’ve been on three vacations friends bother me to write them stories. I have to tons of homework and school well its not so well. I will finish this story just bear with me please!


“What what are you doing here boy?” The king stammered. “I want the boy who locked away my father!” He shouted. “Wheres your dad?” The king said. “Planning to finish Hyrule while I assault you.” He said coolly pulling out a dagger marked with burning red glyphs.

“Please… your not like your father.” The king said. “Yes I am, I’m gonna rule alongside him we have the hero after Link and Link can’t save you again otherwise the legend would say!” Gannon’s son said.

“Not all legends are true to the- Silence!” Gannon’s son yelled. The door burst open. There stood Link aiming his slingshot. “Hmmm I’ll kill both of you.” He nodded his head and out of the shadows a boy who looked like Zelda walked out.

“Hello dad miss me?” The boy asked holding another blade with burning red glyphs.
“Gace…” The king said. “I’m not Gace anymore! I’m the all mighty Redblood!” He shouted.

“Well redblood gannon’s son meet my sword!” Link shouted. He ran at them and Redblood kicked him back. “Easy shrimp you might hurt yourself. Redblood laughed. “And call me Blade.” Gannon’s son said. Link was amazed his fastest hit was blocked like he was a baby.

“I’ll take Link Blade.” Redblood said. “Gace…” Zelda said. “Names Redblood sis.” “Zelda how do you know about Gace?” “Redblood!” Redblood shouted.

“I…always knew Daddy you talk loud..” Zelda said. “Alright lets shut up now.” Blade said. “So Blade…whos your mother?” Link said getting up. “Heh for your information he born me from magic…after he was close to failure I was created to draw Redblood here and free him.” Blade said sending a sly grin to Link.

“Enough…” Redblood said and raised his blade to Link’s neck as he knocked him down. Ervey one stared in awe Redblood was so advanced in combat. “Say your paryers.” Redblood said simpily. “Gace!” Zelda shouted. Impa appeared and attempted to kick Redblood but he swiftly dodged and kicked her into the wall.

Blade took his chance. “Redblood catch!” Blade said and kicked him out the window. He flew down and right befor he hit he disappeared in a black bubble. They all looked confused. “Ermm Blade your suppost to work for your dad not kill his men..” Link said.

“I know…I’m not like him.” He spit. “Sorry I took so long to strike King..” “Its ok Blade. The king said nodding. Link and Zelda together said “What?”. “You see when we found Blade he told his father’s plans we pretended to capture him then let him escape.” Impa said getting up. “Yea you see Gace is spelled Gannon passed on us half of the Triforce of power but I gave it to Gace, so that’s why he’s so strong.

“Then isn’t Gannon weak?” Link asked. “Not exactly you see he feeds of unused amounts of energey after all Blade was already good at combat so he uses only enough poer for if a mere kid uses too much he’ll go insane.” Blade said explaining.

“How can we trust Blade?” Zelda said. “Don’t worry Zelda.” Impa said. “So we gotta beat an advanced kid in combat and Gannon as kids?” Link asked. “No. You’ll be using the temple of time but in the future I can’t promoise much but a wasteland and a castle…”

Whoa lotsa of typos in this I bet sorry its 1 AM here and i'm frikkin' tired night.