(ZGen) Lost in Time

Since everybody here is writing something I'll try it too although I'm not so talented.
My story deals with Link, Navi and Zelda landing in our world and time, after Link fooled around too much with his Ocarina. Please tell me what you think about it. If you dislike it that's OK for me but i have to know it because I don't want to continue a story that nobody reads. And please concentrate on the story itself and not on the writing-style because I'm not used to write storys in English. It's a humoristic story and it starts out in a strip-club.



“Link?“
“Zelda?“
“What happened? Why it’s so dark now?”
“I don’t know. Maybe Gannondorf comes for you again.”
“That’s not funny! I’m scared.”
“You don’t need to be. If he really comes I’ll kick his ass like I did the last 20 times.”
“I trust you but… I want to now what’s going on here.”
“Yeah, me too.” Navi participated.

“Why are you asking me, girls?” Link wanted to know. ”It’s not my fault.”
“Are you sure? Maybe the tune you played on the Ocarina caused this situation. Do you know what you played?” The Fairy asked.
”Well, that's a good hint...Ok maybe it is my fault but there’s nothing I can do about it now. Anyways, we have to find out what had happened.”
“But it’s too dark” Zelda commented.
“Right. Uhmmm…Navi, could you please try to glow more powerful?
The Fairy rolled her eyes. “Ha ha, you’re so funny, Link.” She said in a sarcastic tone.
After the Conversation had come to an end they were sitting in the Darkness for some minutes without saying a word, thinking about their situation.
It felt like a Flash inside their heads as suddenly the Light was switched on.

What the hell is that? It’s as bright as the sun. Link blinked his eyes and waited for them to get used to the brightness but that took quiet a while. So he had to rely on his ears.

“Good Show, Girls” A female voice coming closer to him. Now he was able to make out the silhouette of three women.
“Oh my God. Princess-Barbie is here, together with her boyfriend Robin Hood. But he’s kinda cute.” One of them said and they all bursted in laughter.
Princess Barbie? Robin Hood? Not really. Link thought.

Zelda went up in a rage.
“How can you dare? I am the Princess. Nobody makes fun of me, Link give me your sword! GIVE ME YOUR SWORD!!”
“No, calm down. You’re going to kill somebody with it.”
“Yeah princess, you should listen to him." The stripper standing next to the time-travellers said.
"I’m leaving now. These freaks are crazy.” She went off, followed by one of her Colleagues.
“You shouldn’t be here. This is a private area. Come on I get you out of here.” The third one said.

ok that was pritty strange but funny in a wierd sorta way lol you shouldnt cuss like that though the monitors get pritty mad about that just a heads up not trying to be rude sorry if i sounded that way

ZeldasShadow, they can curse as much they want in a fanfic. =P And you curse minorly in other threads. It's moderators, too.

Anyways, strip club, eh? I don't know why but I don't think Zelda would go with Link to a strip club.
Zelda would've killed them. I know it.
It was ok and please post more soon!