Title: In Progress

Its a little short but here it is....




A red moon lit the sky, as thousands of Moblin’s and Bokoblin’s gathered on a sea torn dock. A man in a blackish brown cloak walked in front of them. His eyes scanned the sea then he turned to face the building forces. Numerous whispers filled the air, but the man lifted and his hand and all was silent. The man began to speak in ancient tongue spoken only by the hordes in front of him. As his speech ended the monsters began cheering and shouting.

A large boat came floating into view on the front was a large skull. The boat was followed by two others. The boats stopped at the docks long enough to load the army of monsters. The first held the moblins and bokoblins, the second was loaded up with large boar like creatures. The last held only the elite minions, DarkNuts, and WizzRobes. Along with the elite minions rode the man in the cloak and at his sides were two more cloaked figures. One had eyes of blood red and the other of deepest blue.

As the boats began drifting off over the horizon the man in the dark cloak muttered three words

“It Has Begun.”

Originally Posted by Izak

Its a little short but here it is....




A red moon lit the sky, as thousands of Moblin’s and Bokoblin’s gathered on a sea torn dock. A man in a blackish brown cloak walked in front of them. His eyes scanned the sea then he turned to face the building forces. Numerous whispers filled the air, but the man lifted and his hand and all was silent. The man began to speak in ancient tongue spoken only by the hordes in front of him. As his speech ended the monsters began cheering and shouting.

A large boat came floating into view on the front was a large skull. The boat was followed by two others. The boats stopped at the docks long enough to load the army of monsters. The first held the moblins and bokoblins, the second was loaded up with large boar like creatures. The last held only the elite minions, DarkNuts, and WizzRobes. Along with the elite minions rode the man in the cloak and at his sides were two more cloaked figures. One had eyes of blood red and the other of deepest blue.

As the boats began drifting off over the horizon the man in the dark cloak muttered three words

“It Has Begun.”

Wow! That looks really interesting, will Link be in it? Can't wait for the next - keep typing!

I guess I like the premise, if a little generic sounding. But it vaugely reminds me of Lord of the Rings. A little too much. But your writing seems pretty good and I'd like you to build up on it.