(Fan/Act/Rom) The Legend of Zelda: Empire of Darkness [T]

I think I know why shrub says we will feel sorry for him. Poor Leita... I think onilink gets the picture... I don't feel one bit sorry for him... Leita is who should be felt sorry for.

I may have stated this earlier in this thread, but I can't remember and it needs to be said again. Each one of these characters needs some... more than some they need a lot, because this is getting ri-freakin'-diculous (by some I of course mean sexually related things). The next chapter should start off like this, "bow chica bow wow..." I think I'll let you take it from there.


I'm kidding of course, but know that I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Between who

Uh ... are you saying I should include lemons(meaning written sex scenes)? I have been considering that for a while and I was thinking I might do it. BUT! Don't go jumping for joy yet. There won't be any lemons in this story but you might find them in the sequel and/or prequel that comes after this. Anyway, I better go get started on chapter seventeen.

How many chapters are you planning on making?

Originally Posted by Shrub

Uh ... are you saying I should include lemons(meaning written sex scenes)? I have been considering that for a while and I was thinking I might do it. BUT! Don't go jumping for joy yet. There won't be any lemons in this story but you might find them in the sequel and/or prequel that comes after this. Anyway, I better go get started on chapter seventeen.

I was kind of kidding, but it couldn't be too bad. As long as nothing is like graphic hardcore stuff then it should be ok. You seem too refined and too good of a writer to do that though.

In a sequel or a prequel? I'm not asking for it but it kinda fits in with this story. You already had one couple have sex, we all know Zelda and Link are on the way. Khaz and Malon will be there soon. **Grumbles** In the end Tila will be warming up to Blaze.

Yeah and after the war it'll be Rontu and Leita or something.

And then you should make Ren try something on Trisa and get caught by Blaze and make a funny scene . But then again maybe not

I forgot about Leita and Rontu. It wouldn't be funny if Ren tried something on Trisa. First their not that old, second Blaze wouldn't laugh, he would kill Ren. Well Shrub if the story goes like that you should make sure Ren gets a funeral. I'll be mad if he doesnt.

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

How many chapters are you planning on making?

You know, I'm not a 100% sure about that, because ten pages gets filled up real fast (ten pages is my limit for each chapter, except for chapter 8). So I end up having to put events I had planned for one chapter over into another one and they start piling up like that. But I know for sure this is going to have over 20 chapters.

Originally Posted by The Dark Side

I was kind of kidding, but it couldn't be too bad. As long as nothing is like graphic hardcore stuff then it should be ok. You seem too refined and too good of a writer to do that though.

Yes, of course. If I am going to do lemons I will only do them tasefully. No kinky ****.

Originally Posted by Dark Sesshomaru

In a sequel or a prequel? I'm not asking for it but it kinda fits in with this story. You already had one couple have sex, we all know Zelda and Link are on the way. Khaz and Malon will be there soon. **Grumbles** In the end Tila will be warming up to Blaze.

lol, no, no. Zelda and Link won't be doing that for a very very long time. Sorry, but I got to build up the tension. The same goes for Khaz and Malon, and Blaze and Tila.

Originally Posted by onilinkc4

Yeah and after the war it'll be Rontu and Leita or something.

Again, no. See that's were my sequel comes in. The sequel is about their relationships after the war, about a year after it. By then Rontu and Leita will be having some ... relationship troubles. That's all I'm going to say .

Originally Posted by Dark Sesshomaru

I forgot about Leita and Rontu. It wouldn't be funny if Ren tried something on Trisa. First their not that old, second Blaze wouldn't laugh, he would kill Ren. Well Shrub if the story goes like that you should make sure Ren gets a funeral. I'll be mad if he doesnt.

Ok, what's wrong with Ren ? He's a good guy now. But I do agree, Ren and Trisa aren't old enough for that stuff. And yes, Blaze wouldn't want that for his stepsister.

I was about to say something along those lines to Dark Sesshomaru, I think he's taking the current situation for granted. And you must also realize that things are going to change if this war is going to end. I could definately see how some problems would arise, but I'm almost postitive that anything you write is never some thing I could imagine.

I could see Rontu all like, "get in the kitchen and make me some pie woman!" and Leita starts to cry and then he goes all soft on her... and she strikes back with awesome tornado (like what owned Link) magic... and then they make up over a dinner with fresh fruit (like lemons ).

Screw the sequel, how about this one, we need to finish this story and watch a whole lot of bad or good guys get owned so something happens with this war. I'm putting 200 rupees on the good side to win, any takers? But seriously, update soon or I will begin to elbow obnoxiously.

I agree things may change, for some reason I never thought of it. I never said there was anything wrong with Ren. I just said if he does get killed which won't happen he better get a funeral as a sign of respect. Also Rontu and Leita already seem to be having relationship problems and I still think Khaz needs to die. He doesn't even deserve a funeral. Please forgive my cruelty. To respond to The Dark Side, Rontu wouldn't do that to Leita. The story would also be kind of pointless if Nottuu wins.

no no no no no, that's not what I meant. I meant like Ren start kissing Trisa very passionatly, and have Blaze walk in and be a pissed, and him being really angry is what I mean by funny: Blaze losing his mind

Either way Blaze would still kill him. You read what he was like when she fell asleep on him. Blaze almost murdered him. He would have if nobody else was around.

Yeah, I guess you're right.

To respond to The Dark Side, Rontu wouldn't do that to Leita. The story would also be kind of pointless if Nottuu wins.

Wow, it was a joke dude... a joke. Someone needs to regulate in here *coughsrhubcough* and set us kids straight.

Originally Posted by Dark Sesshomaru

The story would also be kind of pointless if Nottuu wins.

Yeah, but if you think about it the story is pointless if the rebellion wins. Cause we all know they will win. So what's the point?

Well in that case all games and stories are kinda pointless. I was incorrect it might not be pointless the good guys always win and when they don't it could still be a good story. I think the content is all that matters.

Originally Posted by Dark Sesshomaru

I think the content is all that matters.

Yeah, I think so too