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07-10-2005, 09:57 AM
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(Zgen) The Dawn of Dissaster (T)
Delleted from lack of intrest in me and others.
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Raid my ba char- http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...770#post643770 Kai my BA char http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...ad.php?t=50528 Friends: Andross and Sora. So what if I only have two friends? Last edited by Link_Twin; 07-10-2005 at 08:18 PM. 
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Re: (Zgen) The Dawn of Dissaster (T Light Vilolence)
It has a pretty okay, if a little generic plot. Try to imrpove the spacing though, it's pretty hard to read like that. You should learn the standard dialogue template and stuff like that. Be a little more descriptive rather than just having Link go places and such. Write about how feels and thinks about everything. And maybe inquire about words with a handy theasurarus(sp?). That's about it.
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