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LoZ WW fan fiction: From Our World to Theirs! (T)
story is below sir calibur's post.
hey guys, i recently started a story consisting of the Wind Waker world. it's about three guys: Chester, Gavin, and Kore. (considering this is Zelda Universe, i dont know why they still say Hyrule is spelled wrong XD) ![]() Chapter 1 LOL in the lunchroom The loud voices and the clattering of silverware echoed throughout the almost empty cafeteria at Ridgefield High School during the third lunch period. Due to the large room and lack of occupants, one sitting in a corner could hear conversation of a group at the other side. Three sophomores sat in this corner; all three had delved into a conversation about the randomness of one another. Chester a short yet smart kid, cursed with red hair and pale skin was one of these three. He often called himself the “White Plague” because of his ability to pop out of nowhere and annoy people. Chester was seated at the lunch table across from Gavin and Kore. Gavin was a taller black haired kid who was renowned throughout the school for his wit, sarcasm, and ability to annoy teachers with his randomness. He had awarded himself a large bruise on his forehead for smashing his own head on a desk due to boredom earlier that morning. Gavin was seated next to Kore, who was leaning on the wall toying idly with the end of his t shirt. Kore was somewhat feared among the freshmen because of his fearsome outward appearance, but on the inside, he was as random as either Chester or Gavin. He had given a 9th grader on the stairs a jab to the chest because he was annoying him. Kore had short blonde hair and always wore some form of a t shirt, no matter what the weather. “Bob Saget!” Gavin yelled while flicking the hair out of his eyes. “what’d you do now?” Kore asked, leaning away from Gavin. “I dropped my corn in mah milk!” Gavin exclaimed while trying to fish out the corn from his drink with a spoon. Kore sighed, and Chester said, “Oh yeah, well I dropped my hot dog in my tea!” He quickly upended his hot dog bun so the wiener fell out, grabbed it and shoved it in his tea bottle. Due to the wiener’s size, half of it protruded from the top of the bottle. “Funny,” Kore remarked, “Betcha can’t fit two in there.” “That’s what she said!” Chester proclaimed. Gavin laughed and said, “Hey Chester, I’ll give you ten bucks if you walk over the other table.” Kore snickered and said “I’d do that for free.” “Show me the money first!” Chester said. Gavin pulled two five dollar bills from his pocket and waved them in front of him. Chester proceeded to rise from his seat and march across the cafeteria. When he got within five feet of the other table, he broke into a sprint and vaulted over one of the boys’ heads’ and landed on the table. Many loud remarks were heard from the other table as Chester blurted out his “Askooz me!”’s and “Comin’ through!”’s. Kore and Gavin were now pounding their own table top in fits of laughter, tears streaming down their faces. They heard one of the kids yell “what the hell are you doing?!”, others were yelling about their food. Chester jumped off the table, thanked them for their time, and waltzed back over to his own seat. Gavin tossed the two fives across the table but missed Chester due to the fact that he and Kore were still cracking up. “Aw God that was good,” Kore remarked, “I love how you thanked ‘em too.” Chester nodded in agreement, still unable to speak, his hoots of laughter still echoing throughout the cafeteria. “Aw,” Chester said, “I cant get the wiener out of my tea now!” He followed this statement by holding the protruding wiener with his thumb and fore finger, shaking it rapidly. The middle of the wiener was stuck in the bottle still, so the remaining tea was sloshing around as he shook it. “Here,” Kore offered, “you hold the bottle and I’ll pull the wiener out.” “Hold on!” Gavin said excitedly, “let me record this on mah phone!” Gavin rummaged around in his cargo pants pockets, pulled out his phone which he proceeded to flip open. A beep was heard as Gavin began recording. Kore and Chester immediately began pulling at their designated ends. Reaching across the table, both boys pulled the wiener and bottle at forces which made the three think, why hasn’t it broken yet? The wiener came free with a loud “Ploob!” Kore flew backwards, the hot dog in his hand, hitting the wall behind him. Chester was also thrown back by the sudden divorce of the wiener from his tea bottle. He flew backward off his chair, the remaining tea propelling from his beverage bottle. Kore and Gavin started laughing at the hilarity of the event, pointing at the tea drenched table, and became even more entertained when they saw Chester, who was lying flat on his back covered in tea. “Oh no!” Chester cried, peering down his now empty bottle, “now I don’t have anything to drink!” This remark fueled the laughter of all three, who began pounding the table in fits of laughter, Chester hitting the floor next to him. Kore began gasping for breath, Gavin thumped him on the back, all the occupants of the table still laughing. Gavin clicked a button on his phone and put it away. “Dude, I just gave you ten bucks! Go get another tea! And maybe another wiener.” Gavin said, wiping his eyes. “He can get another tea, but we don’t have time for another hot dog,” Kore wheezed, “It’s twelve twenty four; we gotta leave in a minute.” “Gah!” Gavin exclaimed, “Must have tea!” And with that comment, he stood up and sprinted toward a vending machine. He failed to stop however, colliding with the machine. He stood up quickly and fed one of the fives into the machine, selecting teas of different types. He walked back to the table, holding five different types of tea in his arms. “How much tea does one man need?” Kore asked. “hey, he gave me a five and the thing wouldn’t give me change, so I got five teas. They were only a buck each.” Chester explained, stuffing all five bottles of tea into his backpack. However, as in the same situation as the wiener, all five tea bottle tops peered out of the top of his pack. The bell rang and all three boys picked up their bags to head off to their next period. However, they were stopped by the principal. “I’ve heard you three are creating something of a disruption down here. Is that true?” the principal asked menacingly. “Nope.” Chester said proudly. “and I’m guessing that tea didn’t spill itself huh?” he responded. “well, ya see, it’s a long story it involved-“ Chester was cut off. “all three of you are expected in detention this afternoon. Have a nice day.” And with that, the principal walked off. All three boys stood in silence for a minute or two, pondering what had just happened. Kore broke the silence. “well, it was fun while it lasted,” Kore said, “you guys should walk home with me this afternoon, I made two new fencing swords. Now we can all duel!” Gavin and Chester both cheered, raised their arms above their heads, and agreed they would walk back to Kore’s after detention. A minute or so after, each boy said see ya to one another and walked off towards their afternoon classes. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2: the weirdest thing happened today… Fifteen minutes after the school bell rang to announce the ending of classes, detention began. It consisted of doing nothing for an hour while being completely and utterly quiet. Three unhappy sophomores entered this room at the far end of their high school thinking daggers and thoughts of hatred against the principal, along with the occasional thought about tea and other objects. Chester’s backpack now had four empty tea bottles in it, along with a mostly full green tea he had gotten from the vending machine at lunch. Gavin carried his hip-side sling pack on his right hip and was carrying his sweater. He walked into the room and flicked the hair out of his eyes. Kore entered the detention room last carrying nothing except for a pen, which he intended to chew on assuming he stayed awake. As they entered, they each took their seats designated to them by the supervisor of today’s attention. Unfortunately, Gavin thought to himself, they were thinking when they planned these seats. They put Chester by the teacher’s desk, me by the corner, and Kore by the door. Heh heh. Kore, door, I rhymed. This is gonna be really boring! Kore sat his head down on the desk and closed his eyes. Might as well get comfy, he thought, I’ll be here a while. He chuckled. Chester’s already asleep! Chester, who was already fast asleep, drooling on the desk, had been extremely bored and tired in the last class due to a lecture on dinosaurs of all things. Yet, incredibly, the only things that went through his head as he slept were hot dogs and tea bottles. No dinosaurs. The two remaining conscious boys considered themselves lucky because there were no other students in the detention room and the supervisor, who was partially deaf, had begun playing internet games undoubtedly for the entire hour. Gavin quietly took out his drawing and composition notebook out of his sling bag and began to doodle. A series of innocent characters slowly evolved into sword bearing heroes. He had often dreamed of being the one with the sword braving the dungeons to save the world. He had given up on this dream as he lost his imagination, this was because he had needed to focus more on school and had to give up his two hour drawing sessions. The minutes flew by as he drew, Kore slept, and Chester drooled and slept. All three boys jerked their heads up as a timer, signaling the end of their confinement, rang. Kore stretched and got out of his seat while Gavin slid his notebook back into his bag and slung it around his shoulder. Chester realized that he had been drooling and hastily tried to wipe it up with the sleeve of the hoodie he was wearing. As he finished, the desk now with a slick and shiny look, he wiped the rest of the saliva off of his cheek with his other sleeve. “I don’t want to see you three in here again okay?” the Supervisor said. “let’s hope,” Chester muttered, and began walking for the door. Kore and Gavin followed him as he opened it and walked out into the hall. Kore broke the silence in the emptiness of the hallway. “You guys still comin’ over? It’s Friday!” Kore asked, a hint of hope in his voice. “Yep,” Chester said, shaking his sleeves trying to dry them off, “we still dueling?” “Hopefully,” Gavin also said, “’Cus I’m coming too!” “Kewl,” Kore said happily, making the colon three face in the process (:3) “That’s nothin’. I can do the awesome face!” Chester proclaimed, looking up at the ceiling, making his happy face. All three guys laughed, making texting faces all the way back to Kore’s house they had all agreed that Gavin’s carat underscore carat face was the funniest. When they arrived at Kore’s home, he opened the door, told Chester and Gavin to drop their stuff on the stairs, and called to his mother that they’d be out back. Due to the fact that Kore’s family lived in front of a forest, they owned about two acres of land. Chester jumped over the fence to the backyard catching his pants on the tips in the process. He fell face flat on the ground and stared at Gavin and Kore as they laughed and walked through the gate. He muttered something about knowing that and stood up to brush his jeans off. Kore walked over to a shed which he opened and pulled out three wooden long swords. He turned around to see Chester sitting in the grass pulling out clumps of it and Gavin climbing a tree. “Guys! Swords!” He yelled, shaking one of the wooden swords in the air, tossing the other two on the ground. Gavin leaped down from his tree, Chester stood up from his grass-pulling session and both ran over to Kore, who was now twirling his sword in circles. As they picked up their sparring weapons, Kore explained the safety rules. “these edges are dull, so the chances of dismembering someone are rather low. Even though the points are dull, you can still get impaled if one thrusts hard enough, so I’d avoid thrusting.” Kore explained. “Lol,” Chester said, “Cock joke” “Unless anyone else has an insightful comment, let’s begin.” Kore said and immediately rapped Chester on the shin, who fell over dazed. After an hour or so of tireless, yet entertaining dueling between the three, they got tired. So they set down their swords and sat down on the cool grass. Kore walked inside to get them some water while Gavin began talking to Chester. “That’s always fun,” He said. “I think I cracked his sword though,” Chester noted, “’Cus your head’s so hard” “Ha Ha. Funny,” Gavin replied unenthusiastically, “There’s gonna be a huge-ass bruise there in an hour or so.” He reached his hand up to the back of his head, which Chester had thwacked. “Oh hey, Kore’s back. With water!” Chester exclaimed. Both boys stood up to receive their water from Kore who was carrying all three cups in one hand. “it’s tap water,” Kore told them. “Yum yum,” Chester said, “I love my minerals!” “Chester, it’s tap water. It probably only has fluoride in it.” Gavin told him. “That’s a mineral isn’t it?” Chester shot back, taking entire mouthfuls of water from his cup. Gavin was scanning Kore’s backyard while drinking and noticed something out of the ordinary. He raised his eyebrow and walked over to a section of the grass that looked almost like a ditch. “Hey Kore!” He called, “Do you have a sinkhole over here?” Kore set his cup down on the ground and walked over to the spot where Gavin was standing, Chester followed him. “That’s weird,” Kore said, kicking dirt into the hole, “That wasn’t here yesterday.” Chester jumped into the foot deep ditch and began to jump up and down. “Are you retarded?! You’ll probably collapse it and fall into a cave or something!” Kore exclaimed angrily. “But it’s fun!” Chester protested. “Out.” Kore demanded. “Doh.” Chester said and began to step out of the ditch. His left foot caught on a root near the rim and fell flat on his face again. Gavin’s hair fell back down over his eyes as he laughed. As Chester stood up and brushed the dirt out of his clothes and red hair, a loud crunching noise was heard. “What’d you do?!” Kore yelled, over the earsplitting crunching coming from the ditch. As they watched, staring incredulously as the dirt from the ditch fell down what appeared to be a few feet. Light now illuminated the hole and smelled strangely of salt water. “Kewl. I’m going in,” Chester said. “You’re insane. We don’t even know where it goes to.” Gavin told him. “Gavin’s right,” Kore said, “You ARE insane.” “Well, I’m going whether you two like it or not.” Chester proclaimed as he retrieved his wooden long sword from the ground. “You guys know I can swing a sword. C’mon, it’ll be fun!” “Let me stick my head down there. I’ll see what we’re facing.” Gavin said. He knelt down and almost went into a headstand as he slipped into the hole. Kore and Chester were fast enough to grab his legs before he could completely fall through. His hair was now hanging below his head, swaying back and forth in the apparent breeze. “What do you see?” Kore asked. “Guys, you’re not gonna believe this but…” Gavin trailed off. “But what?” Chester asked impatiently. They pulled Gavin back up and he told them what he’d seen. “Outset Island.” ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3-That’s a Game Isnt it? Kore and Chester stood in disbelief at what Gavin had just said. “Outset Island.” Gain repeated. “you have to be ♥♥♥♥ting me,” Kore said in utter disbelief, “That’s from Wind Waker. I don’t have Hyrule buried in my backyard!” “Yeah,” Chester said, “what Kore said.” “I'm serious. That’s what I saw. From the ocean to the cartoon atmosphere!” Gabin told them, now sitting on the ground next to their newfound ditch to wonderland. Kore scratched his head, thinking in intense thought, then said, “I tend to believe you mainly because you don’t lie often and you wouldn’t ♥♥♥♥ around with something this serious.” He explained, “But…now I wanna go.” Both Kore and Gavin turned to Chester and asked in unison: “Do you wanna come?” “number 1. This is probably going to be the only time in my life that I find a portal that leads to a game world. so I’m gonna have to say OF COURSE!” Chester replied enthusiastically. He began to walk towards the hole, but Kore barred his way. “Provisions. We need provisions and weapons. We don’t know how long we’re going to be gone for, so we need supplies. We also need guns because I don’t wanna get into a melee fight with a moblin.” Kore told Gavin and Chester, “Assuming I haven’t forgotten the combination, we can have some hunting weapons too.” “Woot!” Gavin yelled, “Chester and I will take a hike over to the grocery store and get some food and drinks.” “Yeah, I think I have some money,” Chester said, rooting through his numerous pockets, “you just get our guns mister hunter.” Gavin and Chester both exited from the gate as Kore walked inside his house. Fifteen minutes later, the two food foragers returned to Kore’s backyard where they saw him sitting in the grass, sorting through what they assumed were packs of ammo. He took the pile of clips and placed them in one duffel bag, while placing the shotgun shells in the other. He was wearing a crossbow slung across his back. “Hey Kore! We got some subs and a few Gatorades. There’s an extra quarter, you want?” Chester said, setting down the food and flipping his spare quarter in the air. “No. we have no use for money at this point in time. I have the guns.” Kore told them, while indicating the two bags with his hand, “that one is a .22 rifle and the other one is a shotgun. I forgot what gauge. I also brought three gas masks. Ya never know, we could be stuck in…gas.” Chester picked up the bag containing the .22 and unzipped it to take the rifle out. He pulled back the lever to see if there was anything inside and a live bullet jumped out. He eyed Kore suspiciously. “You tryin’ to kill me?” he asked. “Sorry, I forgot about that. I haven’t used it in a while. Gavin, you might wanna check your shotgun.” Kore said, indicating the other bag which Gavin picked up and opened. As he pulled the shotgun out, he pumped it and pulled the trigger. Nothing happened. “nope, nothing in here.” He said. All three walked over to the hole, which was now emitting the humidity and light level of a morning. Kore indicated to Gavin and Chester to put on the gas masks. Chester and Gavin shared smirks and Chester piped up. “It’s morning down there!” Gavin protested, “There’s no gas so to speak of!” “Yeah, I know” Kore replied, “But think of the appearance we’ll make.” Chester rolled his eyes and slid the gas mask over his face. He raised his hand and said, “I’ll go first, if it really is Outset, then there’s nothin’ to fear.” And with that, he did a hop-skip and jumped in, duffel bag bouncing across his back. A loud thud was heard inside the hole as Chester landed. They heard Chester’s loud remark over a string of curse words. “You okay?” Gavin called down. No response. “Chester!” Kore called. Still no response. “Gun out.” Kore told Gavin, who nodded in agreement through his gas mask. Kore unslung the crossbow from around his back while Gavin undid the zipper on his bag. He hastily held the shotgun in one hand and loaded a few shells into it with his other hand. He pumped it and nodded to Kore. “Jump at the same time, okay?” Gavin asked to which Kore nodded in agreement. “1…2…3, Jump!” Kore yelled and dove into the hole, right beside Gavin, weapons at the ready. They landed with a dull thud on a wooden surface which they assumed to be a ship. No living thing was seen on the deck that they could see. Their hearts pounding as they stood, back to back, weapons raised as they slowly walked around the deck. “Chester! Chester! Chester!” They called out in unison, but only being responded by the waves hitting the side of the ship and surfacing on the beach of Outset. A voice called out to them: “We have your friend, but first you gotta explain what you three…things are doing Trespassing on the Great Tetra’s ship!” |

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Re: LoZ WW fan fiction: From Our World to Theirs! (T)
As a word of advice, make your first post the first part of your story. People will be more likely to stick around then if you just advertise it.
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Re: LoZ WW fan fiction: From Our World to Theirs! (T)
not a bad start... You might've posted each chapter individually, but I don't mind much. I do hope you'll give a good explanation for the portal hole, though.
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