[ZGen] Battle for the Triforce (T)

thanks. i'm halfway through the chapter. i dont think *spoiler alert!* that any of the pirates have seen a shotgun before...funny though. i need to have Chester yelling swine flu somewhere...

Got Chpt 5 up!

Heh heh, the rivalry between Midna and Linebeck is going to be sweet!

rofl. sorry, but i'm an insane grammar nazi. i noticed you said "the" instead of "they" at one or two points. it's really OCD-ish for me. if i see something grammatically wrong, i have to correct it. now, review for chapter five: funny. i did'nt even know Midna knew Linebeck. well, i guess he's stolen from everyone at least once. i'll be looking for chapter 6 soon. i will also have chapter 3 up soon.

I'll edit that later...(stupid word program!)

In later chapters, I'll explain why Linebeck and Midna know each other.
I'll have chpt 6 up in awhile.
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GAH! the grammar nazi's taking over (sorry!)
-in poisonous gas, Midna says "Take took you two a while." (is it supposed to be "That took you two a while?")
-in the forest temple-Midna ran into the room and.....and what? it's at the end of a paragraph.

it's funny how linebeck thought the flower was a gem.
i like this chapter(s)(?) more.
i finished with chapter 4 on mine, so it might be up later.

Dang, I guess word's getting jacked up now...
I highlighted the **** whole thing and...*acts like skull kid when beaten in TP*
Okay, I'll fix it up in a sec. AFTER I KILL WORD!!!

Phew...much better.
That was fun, almost broke the computer (not really), but at least it's working like it should.

heheh. you should try stabbing something. if i get mad, i pull box out of my closet and stab it. it's fun. it also works for therapy, you should try it.

Actually, the whole thing was a joke, except I did fixed up word.
Besides, every time I try to stab something it doesn't work. I usually chew on a piece of hard food and crunch it [sorry, I watched too much dog/wolf anime (I'm weird)].
But since I got braces....
I listen to certain songs or watch vids to calm me down.

meh. i gotta go for braces sometime this summer. dont remind me. but yeah, stabbing things is fun.
my music varies when it comes to moods. most of the time, when i'm writing or drawing, it's something ambient, techno, or sometimes sum 41 or disturbed. i dunno.
another thing that calms me down is playing the original Halo for the xbox, shutting the door to the room, and cussing out the game. i actually have videos on youtube of that. they're rather eventful...