[Fan] (Remake) The Legend of Zelda: The Wind Waker

(This story is a remake from the origenal WW story. i know most zelda fans like it for the way it is but i want to go creative with it. dont get me wrong i LOVE WW and i have no problems with it, all what im going to do is make the story more darker and not childish. i am going to add some made up characters in it but ill try not to throw to many crazy things into it. what im really trying to go for is to add steampunk into zelda (since they are in a new era). this story took me forever to make, reasurching different zelda stories and combine them. i hope you guys like it and please comment ^^' thanx and i hope you enjoy!)

CHAPTER 1
THE LEGEND OF HYRULE

A legend has being handed down from generation to generation…

The past we must understand and respect, but it is in the future that we shall find our greatness. There echoes a legend, it speaks of a kingdom and of the lad who once saved it from the brink of destruction…

Long ago, before life began, before the world had formed. Three mythical goddesses descended upon the chaotic land of Hyrule. Din, the Goddess of Power, dyed the mountains red with fire and created land. Nayru, the Goddess of Wisdom, created science and wizardry and brought order to nature. And Farore, the Goddess of Courage, through justice and vigor, created life—the animals that crawl the land and the birds that soar in the sky. For it were the greatest land and most prosperous land of its time.
After the gods had finished their work, they left the world and entered the heavens, but not before creating a symbol of their strength. They left behind three mystical golden triangles. Together, these three triangles came to be known as the holy Triforce—a small but powerful portion of the essence of the gods was held in this mighty artifact, which was to guide the intelligent life on the world of Hyrule. Although it was an inanimate object, the Triforce had the power to bestow three titles, which gave the person who received them great powers: "The Forger of Strength", "The Keeper of Knowledge", and "The Junior of Courage". The Triforce, though able to grant extremely powerful magic and one wish to whoever touches it, was infinitely delicate: if one who did not hold all three aspects of the Triforce—power, wisdom and courage—within perfect balance, the Triforce would split into its three aspects and the person who first touched the Triforce would be left and only one force would remain in his hand: the force which he most believed in. The remaining two aspects would take refuge within the hearts and minds of two whom best personified the remaining aspects of the Triforce.

Where the Triforce stood became sacred land. From its hiding place in the so-called Golden Land where the Gods placed it, beyond the reach of men, the Triforce beckoned people from the outside world to seek it in the hope that someone worthy of these titles would find it. But Triforce holds a dark power that can corrupt the minds of friends and make them foes. If one with a pure heart obtains the Triforce, Hyrule would be led into a new age of peace and prosperity. But if an evil heart obtained the Triforce, then he would begin a Great Cataclysm.

Many aggressively searched for the wish-granting Triforce, but no one was sure of its location. That yearning for the Triforce soon turned to lust for power, which in turn led to the spilling of blood. Soon the only motive left among those searching for the Triforce was pure greed. And so it was that many went in search of the power of the gods...

One day, an evil man, a leader of a gang of thieves skilled in the black arts invaded Hyrule in the hopes of establishing dominion over the Sacred Realm. The evil man and his followers soon found the entrance to the Golden Land. Upon entering the dimension of immense power, the Triforce began to show itself to the world in its glory, hoping to claim the golden power, the people of the land quarrel and fight. The evil man murdered his followers and grasps the Triforce with bloody-stained hands. But he did not, however, have all three essences in balance; the evil man valued power far more than wisdom or courage so the Triforce split; he could only claim the Triforce of Power but the other remaining two pieces of the Triforce scattered and infused themselves within two beings that best represented the respected essences. But his abiding hatred and lust for power turned to purest malice.

Once the evil man got a hold of the Triforce, his black heart and its power combined made the world change utterly. The man's wish was to conquer Hyrule. The Golden Land withered and died and became a place of darkness and evil, it became the Dark World, a corrupt version of the Golden Land, a reflection of Hyrule that was meant to serve the man's wish of conquest. But the man was not satisfied, and plotted to take over the Realm of Light, to make his wish come completely true.

In time, an evil power flowed from the Golden Land and greedy men were drawn to become members of the man's army. Black clouds permanently darkened the sky, and many disasters beset Hyrule. The evil man used his piece of the Triforce to summon creatures of shadow to the Golden Land and transform his followers into reflections of their own hearts as monsters for a stronger army. His army attacks the land of Hyrule until the seven sages and the Knights of Hyrule combined forces to wage war on this evil horde. The Knights took the full brunt of the fierce attack, and although they fought courageously, many brave souls were lost. However, their lives were not lost in vain; for they bought precious time for the Seven Wise Men to combine their power to subdue the man and bring him to justice.

The man was ritually chained to a giant rock and impaled by a Blade. But the Triforce of Power gave him power to survive execution and break free from his bonds. He slays a sage with the Blade the man impaled him with, and while he charged at the others, the sages quickly sealed him into the Dark Realm which he had created and reducing him to energy matter. All of Hyrule rejoiced that upheld peace and order over the evil man's evil and chaos. The Six Sages then erected a barrier to seal the Dark World away, preventing any from entering. But the evil man quickly sent a portion of his spirit across the barrier before it was completely sealed.

Ages later, the portion from the evil man took the form of a wizard to fulfill his agenda in the Realm of Light—Hyrule. In this form, he uses deception to gain a position within the Castle. When the time was right, he overthrew the King, captured the Princess that was blessed with the power chosen by the gods—the Triforce of Wisdom, and seized control of the castle, and ritually succeeded breaking the seal.

The evil man returned to Hyrule, posed as a god with his newfound power and army, and carried the Triforce of Power and Wisdom, searching for the last piece of the Triforce—Courage. He promptly laid waste to all resistance in Hyrule and cast down the Royal Family so that he may set himself up as the King of Evil. Using the Triforce of Power and Wisdom, there was no one who could stand in his way.

An evil shadow began to stretch from the heart of Hyrule to its peaceful borderlands, merging the Dark Realm and the Realm of Light to make them into one land of darkness. These events began to keep Hyrule in a grip of fear as the skies became cluttered with dark clouds that filled those who saw them with fear. The evil man's shadow army swarmed from the Dark Realm into Hyrule and attacked the castle. The evil man's power was so great, thanks to the power of the Triforce; the entire kingdom was at his mercy. It fell quickly into his bloody hands…

But then, when all hope had died, and the hour of doom seemed at hand, a young boy clothed in green had evidently been blessed with the power by the gods—Triforce of Courage, appeared as if from nowhere. Wielding the Blade of Evils Bane, he beat the Evil King, and gave the land light. However, the evil man had survived the attacks due to the Triforce’s power. This boy, who traveled through time to save the land, was known as the Hero of Time. Peace was brought back to Hyrule by helping the newly formed Sages Council imprison the evil man within the Sacred Realm, a forgotten realm, a place of loneliness and solitude where he would remain for eternity—or so they hoped.

The evil man, however, still bears the Triforce of Power and made a vow to wreak a thousand-fold vengeance upon the descendants of the Hero of Time, the Princess and the Sages as long as he carries the Triforce. There was little else to do; the six Sages could only remain in the Sacred Realm, while the Hero of Time and the Princess was returned to Hyrule. This war, which had claimed many lives, became known as the Imprisoning War. All that which he accomplished could not have been done without the Blade of Evils Bane, for by its power alone could the Evil King have been defeated. After this was accomplished, the Hero of Time returned the sword to its hidden place until it would be needed once more…

With his great and violent quest at an end, the boy disappeared into obscurity and his fate is left unknown to this day. Yet the stories of his and his valor lived on afterwards. Many centuries have passed since the Imprisoning War. The land of Hyrule healed its wounds and the people lived in peace for a long while. But, when these events were obscured by the mists of time and became legend, memories of the vicious Imprisoning War faded over the generations. While Hyrule remained at peace, this was clearly not a problem, but until one day, a day came when a fall malevolent wind began to blow across the kingdom. And with a shake of the earth, pestilence and drought, uncontrollable even by magic, ravaged the land. The great evil that all thought had been forever sealed away by the hero managed to break free of his bonds and escape the Sacred Realm from a portal he created, once again crept forth from the depths of the earth, eager to resume its dark designs, wanting revenge.

After the evil man appeared as if from nowhere, it is no surprise that no one was prepared for the new disasters that have recently struck Hyrule, the people of the land began to panic. He then began his new siege upon the Kingdom…

In desperation, the people believed that their Hero would come and fight for their salvation, and were anxiously waiting for him to return and save them. But the Hero did not appear...

In the absence of the Hero, Determined not to let the evil man conquer Hyrule as he had did once more, the King of the kingdom of Hyrule attempted to take full responsibility in saving his people from the evil man. He threw all his armies of the civilized races of Hyrule towards battling the shadows that crawled swiftly across the land. Despite all his efforts, even the great king could not stop the onslaught that faced him and his people and he was forced to watch his kingdom burn.

The evil man wrought havoc in the kingdom and its people. He even went so far as to find the sages in their respective temples and killed them. He invaded the long-hidden Temples of Earth and Wind where the prayers of the Sages and personally stained the prayer chambers of each with the blood of their keepers. The evil man wanted to find the Blade of Evils Bane and destroy it once and for all, but it was too well hidden for even for the king, so he waited for the one of courage who would come to stop him, for he knew that as long as that blade remained where it was, the hero would be reborn to take the key and attempt to smite him down. However, like in times long gone, the blade was doomed to be awoken by the machinations of the Evil King, and the attempts of a heroic lad to defeat him.

Meanwhile, in the confusion and terror that ensued, faced by an onslaught of evil, blood ran thick around them, as monsters ripped flesh from bone and slaughtered all who opposed them, as darkness began to flow through the land, the people turned to the goddesses and prayed for some kind of divine help, but yet victory for the allies of darkness seemed close at hand. In their last hour, as doom drew near into the night, they left their future in the hands of fate. And it appeared that the goddesses heard their prayers and a mysterious event occurred. It is said the goddesses appeared and created a path towards salvation, thus saving the kingdom. Yet the kingdom mysteriously disappeared. What became of that Kingdom? None remain who know of its true fate…

The memory of the kingdom vanished, but its legend survived on the wind’s breath. The last remains of this kingdom lie in the identity of the young boy who once, despite all odds, broke the darkness of night and led his people to the light of peace.

The boy’s tale was passed down through generations until it became legend. Because of this, it became customary to garb boys in green when they came of age. Clothed in the green of fields, they aspired to find heroic blades and cast down evil. The elders wished only for the youths to know courage like the hero of legend. It is also said that, one day, the hero of legend shall return and reveal the path to the Kingdom that disappeared so long ago…

CHAPTER 2
TETRA’S MISSION


Centuries have passed since that horrific day and the land of Hyrule still remains a mystery. Sailing across the vast ocean, a fearless captain and her crew of pirate’s searches for great treasure. The ocean they sail is endless. Only small islands dot the landscape. In this world, the people live as one with the water, for it is the only thing that is constant in their lives. The unlikely captain of this particular band of pirates is Tetra, a girl whose knowledge of the ocean is as wide as the horizon. Her ambition is to become as great pirate as her own mother was, who died when she was young. Tetra has inherited her mother’s ship and crew along with her family’s necklace with a crystal tide to it but her mother told her before she died to guard it with her life. Tetras family has kept it safe for generations without telling her why, from what or whom? She continues her mother’s quest for the legendary treasure hidden beneath the Great Sea’s surface. At Tetras command, the pirates travel towards their next destination, hoping to discover new treasure…

"We’re almost there! It’s as if I can sense the treasure!” said Tetra as the ocean breeze blew gently across her face and hair as she gazes out into the ocean. She smirked and said, "What can you see, Zuko?!" yelled Tetra as she looks up at the look out. Zuko’s keen eyes made him the ships watchman, but no one could understand his speech, so they weren’t ever sure what he saw. "Teh Ialsnd si comnig uop! Teh wai lokos caler!" yells Zuko as he gazes into his telescope. "Could someone PLEASE tell me what he just said to me?" said Tetra as she rolls her eyes back. There was much pushing and tripping as her three biggest pirates came in front of her, fighting for speech. "I'll say it! He said he sees an island and it looks clear!" said Senza. Senza keeps the ship shipshape. He’s also a persuasive speaker and can be able to understand Zuko because, back then, before they were pirates, they where best buddies so they got used to each other. "Miss Tetra, why can’t we go find some of that nice, safe treasure in the north?" asked Gonzo, the though-guy leader of the pirates. But he’s been known to cry at the drop of a hat and was also a tall man, at least to Tetra. "Because, that nice… safe…(Tetra quotes with her fingers) treasure is worthless! Its not good treasure if you don’t work for it." Tetra told him. "But look, Miss Tetra, if we go northeast of here there’s this really nice island that might have treasure. And if there isn’t any I know a great place there that has really good pie!” complained Gonzo. "Enough about your stomach! Don’t tell me you’re afraid of a few squids?" asked Tetra. "Squids?! Where?!" yells Gonzo as he jumped into Tetra's arms like a frightened puppy. "Stop jumping around like an idiot!" yells Tetra, "AND DON'T TOUCH ME! When we get this treasure you’ll be able to eat as many of those stupid pies as you want." She said as she drops Gonzo to the ground.

Tetra points at the island. "In that cave ahead there is supposed to be a real valuable artifact. Some dumb scientists on Windfall have been trying to locate it for years! If we get it, well be able to give it to them if they meet our price." smirks Tetra. "What kind of artifact is it?" asked Gonzo, "Ooh! Is it one of those cute lil’ cucco statues?" he said keenly. "How should I know? Do I look like a freakin’ scientist?" said Tetra. "No, but I thought you knew everything, Miss Tetra?" "You’re about to know my foot if you don’t shut up!" yells Tetra.
"Yes, Miss Tetra…"

Sailing around the island, the young pirate woman managed to spy what looked like a craggy opening on the island.

"There’s the cave!" said Tetra. "Get the lifeboats ready and-“

“What!? Captain, look there in the water!" Niko, Tetra’s bodyguard, yelled, cutting her off. Everyone on board ran to see what’s going on in the water. In front of the cave the water was a big shadow.

"Its the squid! It’s coming to get us!" yells Gonzo as he shaken with fear. “What makes you think it could be a squid?” asked Senza. The aquatic beast cries and slowly began to emerge from the water from the center of the whirlpool as it swirls angry.
“It will crush us whole!” cried Senza.
“Would you go man the cannons already?!” yelled Tetra as the ship began to twirl around the giant squid.
“He’s a big one, but we’ll manage! Aim for his eyes on its body! Hit those!” yells Tetra. As crew loads the cannons, the squid got closer. As the cannons were ready to fire Gonzo was stalling, "Wait for it...wait for it..."
"Just go already! He’ll kill us all if you don’t!” cried Tetra. As the squid lifted up his tentacle to strike down the ship, Gonzo fired the cannon at the squid’s eye.

Ka-Boom!!! “Hit them all!” yells Tetra. Tetra’s crew kept shooting off the cannons and disarming the squid, one eye at a time.

Then the beast of the sea cries and dove underwater and retreated. “Haha! Got him! Stupid squid, next time bet you’d think twice before messing wit me again!” laughed Tetra. “I’m relieved…” sighs Gonzo. “No time to waste, boys! Time to get that treasure…”

Tetra’s crew began to get the steam lifeboats ready. As Senza and Zuko began to lower Tetra, Gonzo and Niko slowly down into the water Senza begins to doze off. “Hmm… as soon as Miss Tetra gets the treasure well be so rich maybe we can buy our selves some endless supplies of pie!” Their lifeboat was starting being lowered in an angle. “YOU IDIOTS, WHAT ARE YOU GUYS DOING?!” yells Tetra. Senza flinches and snaps back from his reverie. “Huh? Oops, SORRY!” cries Senza as he tries to fix it. The ropes got all tangled and the lifeboat fell in to the water.


Splash!

“Oops… s..sorry Miss T..Tetra.” said Senza as he shakes with fear not knowing what Tetra is going to do or say to him. Tetra looks up at him from the lifeboat and gave him a glare and then puts her hand on her face and shakes her head. “Let’s just go PLEASE...”

Gonzo starts pulling the string from the motor to get the boat started but the motor wasn’t turning on. “Wutz taking so long?!” asked Tetra. “this is ‘de 3rd time this week, we need a new one.” said Niko. “Hang on al...most…there…” Gonzo pounded on the motor and it started to run. “YES!” said Gonzo with excitement. “Treasure here we come…” said Tetra quietly to her self. As the boat slowly heads towards the dark cave, Gonzo looks around nervously. “It s..sure looks dark in th..there Miss Tetra.” He says quietly, shaking.

“This is no time to develop fear of the dark!” said Tetra. They enter the dark cave and Tetra lights a torch, looking around to see where they’re going and soon they discovered a ruin temple. “Will you look at that…” Niko said as he looks up amazed at the structure. “Lets dock over there.” Tetra said as she points over to the rocks. As they enter the temple and look around for treasure in the dark cave, “How do you know where to go, Miss Tetra?” Gonzo asks, his voice breaking the dark silence. “We don’t even have a map for this cave we could get lost.” said Niko. As they where walking Tetra saw strange markings on the wall. “These markings… I’ve seen them before…” Tetra reads the ancient markings with sharp eyes and then turns to Gonzo and Niko.
“This way; follow me and don’t get lost.” Tetra and her crew walks through the dark and ended up finding a chest. “WOW, Miss Tetra! How did you know where to find it?” asked Gonzo. “What does it matter? I found it didn’t I?” They begin to gaze at the chest before they open it. “This is it boys. This is what we came to find.”
“Quick, let’s open it to make sure its no dud!” said Niko. They then broke the lock and slowly started to open the chest but then there was aloud bang outside of the cave and the room begun to shake.
“Wah… what’s going on?!” asked Gonzo as he trembles in fear.
“That sounded like one of our cannons. Something is not right, lets check it out!” yelled Tetra as she and her group ran out of the cave to find their ship is being attack by a giant bird.

“What the heck?? Get to the ship hurry!” yelled tetra. The steam boat drove as fast as it can to the ship and made it. Tetra climbs up a robe ladder on the side of the ship and makes it on bored. “What happen?!” yell Tetra. “We don’t know, this bird came out of no where and attacked us!” Senza explained while he was loading the cannon. Tetra looks up at the bird as it fly’s around them then glares and grabs a rifle then climbs up the sails to get a better view. “MISS TETRA WHAT ARE U DOING?? GET DOWN FROM THERE!” cried Gonzo as he climbs up a bored the ship. Tetra made it up to the crows nest and try’s to aim the rifle at the bird trying to go for a lucky shot. The giant bird swoops down and dives at Tetra from the sky. Tetra carefully aims and exhales slowly as she gently pulls the trigger.

POW!!!

Everyone looks up at the crows nest and to see it shatter as the bird snatched Tetra and fly’s off.

“MISS TETRA!!!”

why wouldnt anyone read or comment? i didnt really messup the wind waker story that bad did i? i kept it as close to the origenal so it wouldnt sound weird

no no no you didn't mess up please keep going.. I was waiting so long for something like this.. GOOD JOB BTW

thank you so much for the comment! im glad you like it, im still working on chapter 3 as we speak.