[Com] A Hyrule Halloween (T)

Link: WAAAAAAAAAWHOOOOO!!! Its Hellween baby!! hmm What should i be? I could be a hmm....I GOT IT!! A DEKU NUT!! OR MAYBE EVEN A..

Mido: dumb fish!!

Ruto: FISH ARE NOT DUMB!!!!

Mido: are tooo!! You have to be in order to like Link!!

Saira: Stop being a meany pants Mido and say your sorry! or else we wont take u trick or treating with us!!

Mido: *Sigh* O all right fine. Im Florry.

Saira: MIDO I mean it!

Mido: Sorry for calling you a dumb fish. I am going to go change into my costum

Malon shows up

Malon: Hey every one guess what I am going to be!!

Saira: A pumpkin?

Malon: Nope

Link: a Coccon?
Link trembles in fear

Malon: Nope

Ruto: A horse?

Malon: Nope its even scaryer then that!!!

Link: oooo tell me tell me tell me please!!

Malon: I am going to be Mido!!! DUN DUN DUNNNN

Every one cracks up laughing!!

Malon: I am going to be the scare the clothes off of ever1's back!!

Link: ooo man thats a gud one whe didnt i think of that.

Saira: cuz u were to busy thinking about being a stinkin deku nut ya ding dong.

Ruto: guess what I am going to bee!! come one guess! o ill just tell you! I am going to be Zomby Zelda!!! muhhwwaaaahhha! Scarry right?? huh!

Saira: umm Yea....
its dead quiet and nuthing is hurd but a cricket.

Link: Zomby Zelda? now thats a silly idea.

somthing shakes the bushes they all look and stair. They here a dark chuckle. Har har Har. dark red eyes peak out of the bushes. Then out comes Ganandorf!!! They all just sit and stair. Except for link he runs and hides behind malon.

Ruto: Link thats not Ganon its just mido trying to scare us.

Ganon/Mido: i am to ganondorf!! pay no attention to the zipper in the back its umm my umm zip for um surgery. umm yea...

Link: waaaawhweee get em away wee woonooooo!!!
Saira walks over and pulls the mask off

Mido: OO WHy DiD you Do THAt? Missey I have had it with you!! I am going to get you back later tonight!! i know your fear!! you will see! you just wait!!!

Saira: You wouldnt!!!!

Malon: you better not mess with us or else i will cafe rope u faster then a rabbit being chased by a fox!

Mido: Shut up country slob.You wait!! and see.....just wait.

Link will get you first! u two faced butt head!!
to be continued

What will link be for halloween. Will Mido scare Saira with her worst nightmear. Will the gang ( Ruto, Malon, Saira, Link) get mido first? Will ruto change her mind about bing zomby zelda? Find out in the next chapter!!

Remember, your story title has to have a genre and a rating as per the Creativity Corner Rules:

http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...nter-here.html

I'm just going to edit it to [Com] (PG). If you feel it should be different, just send me a PM.

Now, on to the story, something you should do is spell everything out correctly instead of being in an abbreviated form. Abbreviations such as 'ever1' and 'u' are really annoying to read in any medium, but especially so in a story or script.

i like it. i'm not gonna kall you sir, cuz you're not a guy...
but other than that. i think it's pretty good. i also like how you put it into script format.