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This is a rough sketch of a short story idea I had way back when that is set within the Star Wars universe. I'm in the mood this week, taking a slight reprieve from working on my novel, so this is what I'm looking at currently. I know this isn't much, just a quick intro to the setting, but more will be on the way somewhere down the line. ![]() ![]() Co-Written by Jake and Tiffany McBride Echo Base. Fifty-four years ago. I was only eighteen, barely able to see over the trenches. I remember cold. A deep, freezing cold that settled deep in your bones, corroded the lungs, turned rifles into twigs, snapped unprotected digits clean off. Sweeping tundras of white, laced with icy outcrops, bored out by rampant wampas.
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Chapter One
The winds of Hoth sent old, familiar chills under my upturned collar like ghostly fingers. Ice fragments chewed at my nose and eyelids until they burned. I wondered why I thought that scouring this hellish planet for tales of a long-forgotten rebellion seemed like such a good idea yesterday before we left Bespin.
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Chapter Two
I shoved my sled into the protective embrace of my temporary shelter, pulling the cold-resistant fabric over it to protect Beryl’s sensitive gear from the icy wind. The thermal packs that we had stuffed into the sleds and our parkas had begun to run out of power and die, the true cold now beginning to settle in.
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Chapter Three
The last blast Janus released on the epidermis of the planet left a pock scar the size of Coruscant’s ninth district, and was nearly as ugly. Or maybe ugly just came from the idea of the return back to fragging manual labor.
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Chapter Four
The tightly sealed doors hissed as they opened and the suction from the vacuum between the two rooms made a hollow thump sound. Whatever this room contained, it was beyond my expertise. We were all standing there staring into the now-open doorway, each breathing in minimal stutters. It looked and smelled like a med lab with draping hoses, examination tables, and an endless array of clear liquid filled vats of some unknown substance. ![]()
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Chapter Five
My vision blurred. I wondered of death and its smoky cirrus, and the many times I had evaded its grasp. It didn’t feel like dying. Then I could see again. I stood there, disoriented as I watched Janus hauling the last of the equipment out of the lab.
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Chapter Six
The shearing cold of flying ice shredded against my face and goggles, no doubt tearing the exposed skin open, though it was so numb that there was no way I could tell. At these temperatures, blood coagulated on the spot, both a blessing and a curse. The storm had set in upon us just as we left the confines of Echo Base, a fury that I don’t think I had ever witnessed. I had seen elemental storms of lightning and sand before, but nothing like this.
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Chapter Seven
The sweat from my brow froze upon my cheeks, painfully making my wrinkled skin pinch together. I tried my best to ignore it – at least I was staying warm. The two girls up top watched intently, them being perfectly toasty with the weather blankets...at least for now. Both were warming up to a couple of cups of stimcaf, to my ire.
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Chapter Eight
What day was it? Atunda? Katunda? I had no idea anymore. Everything was just a blur, a myriad of circumstance and consequence that had led up to this point. This was supposed to be an archaeological dig, tomb raiding, to be more precise, though it had twisted into more of a nightmare than I had anticipated.
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Chapter Nine
“You could have gained so much.” I nearly died of anxiety, Beryl’s monologue continuing. “Think of all the power to be had, Devon. The Empire has always rewarded the faithful grandly, and those who have served their purpose. Starships, wealth, protection; the life of a king to be had. All you have to do is what you are asked.”
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Epilogue
Sheena’s tear-streaked face broke forth from her enclosure, she having to push with all her strength to move Devon’s body. He had given his life to save hers, supplying her body with warmth, buying her time as the storm slowly capitulated. The sun was rising, heat, be it sparse, coming to her skin. Breaking forth from above the high mountain that was Echo Base, it shone like a goddess, bathing everything in a brilliant white. The pilot stared into the blazing inferno, her mind empty and thoughtless. All that was left was her, the planet, and it’s primary, burning in the distance. Everyone else was gone, and what little semblance of reality that had dug into her mind had released it’s talons, letting her alone for a time. ![]() ~ Original Story ~ Jake and Tiffany McBride ~ Characters ~ Tiffany ~ Graphic Art ~ Jake ~ R&D ~ Jake ![]() ~ Special Thanks ~ George Lucas Mountain Dew Wookieepedia Wikipedia Within Temptation Zelda Universe YouTube Winter Dawn The Ghosts of Hoth is a work of fiction -- any resemblance to any person living or dead is purely coincidental. This work, although copyright of the author(s), is non-canonical fan fiction -- all Star Wars related material, including, but not limited to, locations, technology, terminology, language, characters, etc etc, is the sole property and copyright of Lucasfilm Ltd. Music courtesy of Within Temptation and YouTube. ©2009
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EDIT: After posting the above, I finished the story, and I must say, what a wonderful story it was. I would do a rubric or something, but it's 3:00 in the morning and i must sleep. Good work as always, Doran. |

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Re: The Ghosts of Hoth: A Star Wars Fan Fiction (T)
Thanks -- I was beginning to wonder if anyone was going to comment!
And yea, I must admit that the story originally started in third person, but then it changed when it became a co-op work, as per the request of my compatriot. That stuff drives me nuts, so I'm off to fix it right now! ![]()
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