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Chapter Six - "Time's Scar"
Nestled in a quiet, secluded cove of coral and dark rock, Princess Reyla ran her orange fingers across her pendant, feeling the finely-cut circular red stones. She thought it a strange piece of jewelry, as red gems were quite uncommon and generally passed over in favor of blue sapphires and black pearls. The trident that split the trio of precious stones was another weird symbol and extremely rare. Reyla remembered only ever seeing one before, on the sacrificial wall engraved in one of the corners, nearly unnoticeable unless you were looking specifically for it.
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Chapter Six - “Unseen Memory”
Link’s consciousness stirred, faint colors and indiscernible images beginning to flash before his mind. At first all he felt was warmth, like bathing in a hot spring, enveloping his body entirely. He felt safe, secure, slumbering peacefully. He wondered who he was, where this place lie, and what futures may come to bear.
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
Oh... my... Din! Che cazzo? What in Sam's Hell is going on here? Actual fan-fiction, in the form of a dream? The chamberlain, alive? Or dead... is Link in heaven? And for the love of all that is good in the world, why do I keep asking rhetorical questions?
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
Question One: is there a correct answer to any of your questions?
Question Two: if there are answers, do I know them? Question Three: is it not possible for me to write without leaving questions? I actually was planning on wrapping up some of the loose threads with this chapter, or at least somewhat. This little...digression was a spur of the moment thing, though it's importance will come around...eventually. ![]()
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
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P.S. By the way, I like the addition of the OoT dream.
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
Yes...yes, I know.
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That aspect of the story was not intended nor even imagined until I was sitting there, typing away, trying to skillfully (?) wrap my mind around the hole I had dug myself into. I needed something nostalgic yet distant, relative yet unexplored, to tie into the work, lest it become so intangible to the game canon that it loses it's luster. Expect more dawdling into Link's forgotten past, as well as the continuation of the Zora thread. Multiple storylines at once? OMG! ![]() P.S. CTL: OoT/MM - TP - ? ATL: OoT/EB - WW/PH - EB - CotZ - LoZ/AoL - OoS/OoA - TMC - FS/FSA - ALttP/?/LA - ?. Tower of Hera. That is all. ![]()
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
Not unless the last post was a month ago... which it wasn't.
And Doran: good use of rhetoric. I never have fully understood it, but that's obviously an example. And your timeline makes sense enough. What's with the question marks, though? |

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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
Question marks are self-explanatory, dear sir, else they would not be.
![]() Yea, sorry for the long drought between posts. The next chapter for CotZ is mostly finished, but I haven't really had the extra time to wrap it up and polish it. Between work, my book, and a certain side project that will be posted soon, I'm swamped. ![]()
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Chapter Eight - “Yearlings”
After possibly the longest hiatus I have ever had between chapters before, here is the next chapter for the novella. Apologies to all, especially to those who were eagerly awaiting the next roundabout. Things just got swept under the rug for the past month (as the first line of the chapter will no doubt portray
). So, with no further delay, please enjoy the next segment, though I am sure there will be a few of you who will shake your fists in ire and contempt for my person. ![]() Seemingly an age since he last drew breath, Link’s eyes opened, a flurry of color brandishing before him. He gently smiled, feeling more alive than ever, taking in slow, sweet breaths time and time again. He sat up, rubbed the sleep away from his face, and glanced around.
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
You know, I just realized Cale makes a cameo in your novel. You really need to stop plagiarizing yourself.
Anywho, great chapter. I would do a rubric but my head hurts like heck so... maybe later. That's very interesting, although we still don't know how the Chamberlain is alive. Hey, I managed to post without an unanswerable question this time! Yay me! ![]() |

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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
There are many things that lend to each endeavor, names and characters notwithstanding. That is just the way I write. There are reasonings for it, and I can assure you that laziness is not one of them.
Things change, evolve, and undoubtedly adapt. It is a slow and occasionally painful process, but one that continues on, regardless of the changing scales. It is the threads that bind, hidden ever so subtly, that truly speak of where you are, who you are, and where in the grand scheme you truly lay. Now...I hope that made no sense whatsoever. But enough of my philosophical rhetoric; there are dark things afoot that I must attend to....
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
Okay, that post definitely did not help my head.
![]() RUBRIC TIME!!! This will be on the past eight chapters and the prologue. Firstly, let me find an example of a rubric here. Ok, so I couldn't find a good one, but...Creativity(for a fanfic)- 5/5 This is about as far from the main Zelda plot as it gets. I like it. Grammar- 5/5 You don't oft make a grammatical error, and when you do, I usually Grammar Nazi it. I mean, come on, look at post 7. ![]() Interest- 5/5 With all those darn cliffhangers, how could it not be interesting. TOTAL: 15/15 And it's not just because we're friends, either. It's because you write awesomely. You know, looking back, your post begins to make sense. at least the first paragraph. And speaking of Grammar Nazis, Xeno made a social group for them. I r is joined tehm. ![]()
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Chapter Nine - "Revelation"
After a full meal of oceanic variety, his internal organs stressing, as they had never been used before, Link took in all the stories that Cale and Mara had to tell. Of their coming, what they had been doing the past few days, and what they knew of the spire and the ocean Zoras.
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Re: Evil's Bane II: Curse of the Zora [T]
Ok, minor mistake up there-
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Otherwise, as always, great chapter. But those darn cliffhangers... always a plus. |

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