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Old 11-21-2003, 10:52 PM
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Re: To Be Continued - Based on a True Story

Hey Merc, I've been wondering about this for a while, and I wanna know, how do you have those convos with your friends? Do you have them saved somewhere so you can just copy and paste them onto a post, or have you just remembered what was said perfectly or something?

I'm a bit bamboozeled.....
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Old 11-21-2003, 10:57 PM
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Re: To Be Continued - Based on a True Story

I wish I did still have the logs saved. I still talk to those friends over the phone, and through MSN so I ask them about what we said if I can't remember it 100%. Mimi is also my consultant on this story *lol*

I should have a new chapter up later today. ^^
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Old 11-21-2003, 11:01 PM
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Heh, that's cool Merc, like writin' your autobiography with the help of people who lived it with you. Man I'd never be able to remember conversations from that long ago! ^_^

Can't wait for the new chapter!! ^_^
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Old 12-05-2003, 04:14 PM
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Re: To Be Continued - Based on a True Story

Chapter Eight: Addicted to You

As much as I would've liked avoiding it that day, I found myself at school, although running late once again. Mimi, however, was strangely absent for the morning... and by break, I think I was actually starting to worry a bit.

"Gun!" I called out to Gun as he walked away from me, he quickly turned around to face me.

"Why the yelling? What's up?"

"Where's Mimi today...?"

"Teekay, you completely turned her down, she's probably heart broken at home."

"No, but I left her last night, alone, anything could have happened to her!"

"Wow, wow, wow! Calm down! She's probably fine!"

"Yeah... you're right. I'll have to visit her after school..."

The day went on as usual, the same classes I was used to, the same boring work. After classes, I ran out and headed towards Mimi's house, skipping the after school "clubs".

I knocked on Mimi's front door, waiting for an answer. After about a minute it opened and her father looked at me.

"Sorry Teekay, she's a bit busy right now."

"Oh... alright. Thanks anyway I guess."

I slumped off, I needed to see her! Then I remembered the window around in her room, I could easily climb through it. I hauled myself up and through the window, dusting myself off as I got through. I stood up straight and saw her sitting on her bed. Her hands cupping her face. She slowly lowered them and looked towards me.

"Teekay..."
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Old 12-05-2003, 09:16 PM
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Re: To Be Continued - Based on a True Story

This is a really good story so far. The only thing you could improve on is making the chapters longer. But I'm sure its hard to remember details.
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Old 12-05-2003, 09:52 PM
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Re: To Be Continued - Based on a True Story

Yay! nice chapter... and the ending just let us craving for more! Great one.

Keep up the good work.
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Old 12-06-2003, 07:51 PM
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Re: To Be Continued - Based on a True Story

Good work merc, your life is pretty interesting. By the way, what's the 20% of untrue things?
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Old 12-09-2003, 04:33 PM
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Filler Chapter One: Blah!

I sat at my computer and brushed my hair back from my face, glancing at my watch.

"8:25am..." I whispered as I tapped the watch face and yawned, moving my eyes back to the computer screen.

"Mimi's still asleep... and my memory of that is pretty sketchy... wouldn't wanna get anything wrong." Yeah, I really was talking to myself.

I logged into IRC and soon entered the ZU chat room, maybe something there would bring back memories... nope.

Yes, this is a short chapter... shorter than most probably... and yes it has little to nothing to do with what was going on in the previous chapter, but hey, I think I left that at a good cliffhanger... so I'm gonna just leave you hanging there for a little bit longer!
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Old 12-09-2003, 05:30 PM
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>< NO! *goes crazy from not knowing* can you atleast tell if that chapter leads to anything?
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Old 12-11-2003, 09:46 PM
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Yes, Merc, what a cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!
I guess this is because your new award just kidding.
Please get us out of this...
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Old 01-04-2004, 01:59 AM
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Re: To Be Continued - Based on a True Story

A little too long maybe? Sorry to bump this, but its been almost a month! Cant you remember much more? not inspired anymore? or did you just forget?
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Old 01-04-2004, 02:12 AM
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I've actually been away for most of that time. I just got back today. I'm too tired to update right now, sorry.
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Old 01-04-2004, 02:35 AM
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Ah ok, good excuse I suppose, ah well, go your own pace
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