Aiko Yoshida

Name: Aiko Yoshida (Aiko means +/- Lovely Child and Yoshida lucky ricefield)

Age: 13 years old

Race: Human

Sex: Female

Hair: Brown, for her hairstyle check her picture in the end

Eyes: Originally light brown, but depending on the demon that's next to her her eyes can change. She's most of the time accompanied by Hibiki so her eyes are blue when he's close.

Weight: 50 kg

Height: 157 cm (1 meter and 57 centimeters / 61.8 in)

Weapon: Aiko doesn't really have any weapon, but if she really needs to fight one of the demons that follow her will give her something to help in the fight. If that's the case she usually use a small club.

Armor: the only special thing is her red scarf, it keep spirits that wish her illness away. The rest of her clothing is basically a light blue coat, a dark blue mini skirt, long dark blue socks and black shoes (but she can change her clothes if needed [duh...])

Strengths: She's good at crying for help. She doesn't have any strength at all, she's a weak orphan little girl that doesn't have anyone, but the demon legion. What could be considered a strength would be the loyalty of her servants.

There is also this thing inside her (nobody knows what it is, maybe it is just Aiko's soul) that don't let the legion fully posses her (nowadays the legion don't even think on doing that), but it's unknown to her; and loosing this "power" won't change a thing, since the legion became "friends" with her.

Weaknesses: Anything can hurt her badly, after all she's a slim little girl. Except the obvious she really get scared easily when the subject are ghosts (even though she's accompanied by demons)

Skills/Magic: Aiko doesn't really have any skill, all she can do is call the name of her demon servants and they simply appear next to her, to help her out. She's accompanied by a horde of demons, but she usually call just some of them (her main skill, the other demons are just used for great battles), and the most used demons are:

Hibiki:Aiko's most loyal servant. Hibiki means echo, this name was given to him cause of his thunder-like voice.

Age: Unknown. But Hibiki commented that he has been on the legion for over 800 years.

Race: demon

Sex: Male (muy macho man lol)

Hair: ???

Eyes: Burning orange eyes

Weight: 100 kg

Height: 2 meters

Weapon: A demonic bastard sword, it glows with a shinning orange light, but it doesn't have any kind of special powers, it just a normal sword.

Armor: A horned skull mask (helm), bone spaulders used on his right shoulder, a bone right glove and leather left glove, a bone belt and 2 bone boots. All of the refereed items have some parts covered with iron.

Strengths: Hibiki is very muscular and to the fact that he doesn't fear anything (even if he knows he'll loose he'll fight till the end) make him the physically strongest demon working for Aiko, his burning eyes can fear weak minded foes, and his thunder voice can disencourage any person that thought on hurting Aiko. Also it seems Hibiki is very resistant on falling from hight places.

Weaknesses: Even though Hibiki is a demon, he has the same weaknesses any human would have. But his more particular weaknesses would be Hibiki feeling that he must protect his mistress even with his life if needed. Any repetitive weapon attacks can "kill" him easily.

Skills: His most notable skills would be his ability to raise the morale of the legion with his battle cries, and his ability to go back to Aiko's body if needed, or requested by her.

Appearance: Hibiki is a huge muscular tan skinned demon with a body that looks like one of a human, that's the only description that can be made since he wears his bone mask ALL the time

Personality: Hibiki has a great sense of justice, he won't kill fragile people, only those that try to hurt his mistress. All that he really wants is to see Aiko happy, even if that means fighting his friends, or the entire legion, when not in battle, he is most of the time seen admiring the human world. Yuu said that he saw Hibiki crying the death of a small bird once. His tears are like burning sparks. Hibiki doesn't like anyone in the legion at all, all he cares and live for is his mistress, Aiko.

Biography: his complete story is unknown, but it's known that in some point Hibiki had a family in the demon realm, but a Demon Prince attacked the lands where he used live, killing his wife and son, after that Hibiki decided to join the legion so he could take revenge, but his life in the legion was all about killing people to rise the legion's numbers, and that have been happening for over 800 years now.

Yuu: He's a demon clothier. His name means distant superiority or gentleness, both translations describe him perfectly.

Age: ???

Race: demon

Sex: Male

Hair: He has an emo dark hair that covers completely his left eye.

Eyes: He has asian eyes, but his pupil and iris have the same bloody red color.

Weight: 67 kg

Height: 180 cm

Weapons: Yuu is a master in the demonic martial art yoriu, so he doesn't need a weapon at all, but he is good with japanese swords.

Armor: None but his clothes.

Strengths: He can see the bad of anyone, and cause of that he knows when someone is lying or hiding something from him, also Yuu can be considered the smartest "person" in the "group", so advice he gives are more than welcome by anyone, even Yori. And thanks for the martial art yoriu he became way faster than any demon in the legion (only beat by the demons with beast bodies).

Weakness: Since he is very slim, he's very very fragile, and any punch can make him faint, because of this characteristic he doesn't really fight, he prefer to insult his enemies from a safe distance and let other demons fight his foe. (In other words, when fighting him, it won't be a long battle, he'll certainly loose, unless you want him to win)

Skills: His the best clothier in the Demon Realm, not even the clothier of the 4 great demon kings are as good as Yuu is. Yuu knows how to make some seals to enchant his works with people souls, but an enchantment can only work with a pure soul, and that is hardly found, the last enchanted item he made was given to Aiko, her red scarf.

Appearance: Yuu is very slim, and this added to his height make him look much more thin than he actually is. He looks like a normal human, except for his red eyes and extreme pale skin. Yori once described Yuu as "a hime with the body of a man, except for his hands, Yuu has the most beautiful hands I've ever seen, these hands are indeed, hands of a hime, Yuu is our legion little treasure".

Personality: Since Yuu is the best clothier in the Demon Realm, he believes that the demons in the legion must humiliate themselves in front of him so he won't quit the legion (what he doesn't notice is that thanks to Aiko he can't quit the legion anymore). He is cruel with the demons in the legion except for Yori and Hibiki, he respect Yori and like to taunt Hibiki. Some can say he cares about his new mistress, but that's a wrong affirmation, Yuu actually cares about what Aiko is dressing, and nothing more, he believes that demons shouldn't work for such inferior race as humans.

Biography: Yuu was born in the northern kingdom in the Demon Realm, there aren't much information about how was his life before he became the famous demon clothier, he joined the legion just for the chance to find some pure souls in the Human Realm, so he could make enchanted items and sell them for extreme high prices in the Demon Realm.

Tarou: Tarou means Big Son

Age: ???

Race: Demon

Sex: Male

Hair: Bald

Eyes: Shinning Green eyes, they look like jewels.

Weight: ??? (He is very fat, but can't say for sure his weight)

Height: 250 cm

Weapons: none

Armor: His white pants.

Strengths: He is VERY strong and resistant, he is like a moving mountain.

Weakness: He hates fighting, and he is slower than a normal human, he also seems to lack a bit of intelligence. (he is just like Yuu, he won't fight, he is actually a helping "NPC")

Skills/Magic: none

Appearance: He is a huge demon, he looks like a sumo fighter, but with less fats and more muscles, he has white tattoos all around his body, they are actually seals that remove from him his wish for killing. Tarou has 2 medium sized horns that come from his forehead.

Personality: The best description would be, he hates fighting, he prefers to let his enemies attack him and don't fight back, hardly any enemy can take him down, so he doesn't really care if someone is attacking him. Tarou consider Yori as something like a father, and he is capable of even attacking Aiko for Yori. Except for this things, one can consider him with having no brain at all.

Biography: his story is unknown since he is directly connected to Yori, and Yori doesn't tell his story to anyone. Nowadays Tarou is Aiko's "mount" and is used to carry the mistress in long travels.

Yori: Yori means trust

Age: ???

Race: Demon

Sex: Male (or at least everybody refers to Yori as "he")

Hair: He has feathers lol.

Eyes: The most disturbing eyes anyone can see, they are a shinning red that keeps shinning in your head even if aren't looking at them anymore.

Weight: ???

Height: ???

Weapons/Armor: none

Strengths: He can fly and see VERY far away, he can actually see the past and the probables futures.

Weakness: He doesn't really have any weakness, but he never take part in battles, preferring to go back to Aiko's body when a battle start. His biggest weakness would be being imprisoned in Aiko's body.

Skills: He is a master in the art of seals, he is also able to see the strings of time and destiny, he can hypnotize anyone or even make someone get crazy with his shinning red eyes, but for some motive he doesn't care about Aiko, and won't use any of his skills to protect her.

Appearance: He is a small dark, but really dark, crow, except for his eyes, you can't see the division of his tiny body parts.

Personality: Since he can't talk you can't describe his personality with accuracy, he is a demon lord and want to treated as one, nobody knows the legion ranks for sure, but Yori occupies one of the highest ranks in it. Yori seems to not like the Human Realm at all, he just go outside Aiko's body when she needs his help, and after he make what she needed he goes back to her body.

Biography: ??? All that's known is that at some point he created a legion to take over the southern kingdom of the Demon Realm, but he was stopped when he was imprisoned inside Aiko's body.

the rest of the demons are just normal thugs and are almost never used, and if used, they act like a meat shield for Hibiki.

Appearance: Aiko has the most intriguing eyes, they are big and always look like she's confused or scared, her nose is very small and delicated making almost any shadow on her little pink lips. She is short and slim, but her clothes make her look a little fat. I think it's better for you to see her picture
She has a flat-chest. (lol I really don't know what more can I describe about her)

Personality: Seeing her parents get burnt alive left to Aiko an unrepairable trauma, since this tragic incident Aiko became a quiet depressive girl, she barely talks, and when she does are very short sentences.

But deep inside her lives a kind girl, that are only shown to the world when one of her "friends" are hurt, if that happens Aiko will grab anything that's close to her and run to attack whoever hurt her "friends", in this moments she doesn't think on the consequences of her actions.

When she's alone (physically, since the legion is inside her), you can easily find her crying alone remembering her parents and her childhood life; but such sadness is easily left aside when Hibiki appears to show her something new, in this moments Aiko only gives a gentle smile and then start walking again to her unknown adventure.

Biography: Aiko was born in a ricefield farm where she lived with only her father and mother, the only contact she had with the outside world was only once when she saw a wagon passing next to her father farm. Even with the melancholic life she had she was happy.

But one night her mother, who was very depressive, decided to make something fun, like burning her house : D, Aiko was sleeping when her mother set her house on fire, when she woke up, she could only see her father punching her mother and trying to stop the fire; but Aiko could see something more, there were some dark silhouettes next to her mother. Aiko knew what they were, demons, she tried to get on her feet and run to her father to tell him and ask what was going on, but on the moment she got up from her bed, the part of the house where her mother and father (and the demons) were collapsed, killing both her father and mother, when Aiko saw that she was shocked, the only thing she could do was scream (there wasn't any house near her farm, so she was alone there), and in her heart something she never felt before grew, hate, she hated the demons that tormented her mother with every single part of her little body, and such hate attracted the attention of Yori, a demon lord that commanded the attack on Aiko's mother body, Yori disguised himself and his legion between the smoke of the fire and entered Aiko's body. Aiko fainted.

When she woke up she was in a dark place that her little brain couldn't describe to herself, there Yori was waiting for her, the moment Aiko looked his eyes, she understand everything, Yori tried to kill her, like he did to her mother, but something in Aiko made all the demon legion become her slaves, instead of them becoming the slavers. But Aiko understood something else, the demons only killed her mother, cause that is their nature (may sound weird, but all I can say is "Yori's eyes are VERY convincing". After all that knowledge came to Aiko's mind she noticed she wasn't in the dark place anymore, but in a immense grassland. Aiko needed to look for something that she doesn't know what.
(Weirdly Aiko knows the name of every single demon serving her, this information was probably given to her when she looked at Yori's eyes)


PS. Except for the mentioned demons, whoever that is fighting Aiko can freely kill any demon xD

Alrighty then, before we begin, I have to tell you now that several people call one of our resident moderators 'Aiko', so it may get just a tad confusing. No, you don't need to change your character's name. =P

Speaking of your character, you might want to add some more detail to the Strengths, Personality, and maybe a little bit more to the appearance. Also, he height is confusing. Do you mean 157 cm, or 1.57 cm? If the latter, that is ridiculously small since may characters here could defeat her by simply stepping in the wrong place. xD

Moreover, try to clean up your profile by seperating sections with a space, and creating paragraphs ever three (3) to five (5) sentances. It makes it much more bearable for someone to read, as opposed to a wall of text.

Originally Posted by Ciroton

Alrighty then, before we begin, I have to tell you now that several people call one of our resident moderators 'Aiko', so it may get just a tad confusing. No, you don't need to change your character's name. =P

Speaking of your character, you might want to add some more detail to the Strengths, Personality, and maybe a little bit more to the appearance. Also, he height is confusing. Do you mean 157 cm, or 1.57 cm? If the latter, that is ridiculously small since may characters here could defeat her by simply stepping in the wrong place. xD

Moreover, try to clean up your profile by seperating sections with a space, and creating paragraphs ever three (3) to five (5) sentances. It makes it much more bearable for someone to read, as opposed to a wall of text.

the problem is, she doesn't have any strength, but the loyalty of the legion.
k, I tried a little harder this time on describing her personality :3
I really don't know what else I can describe about her appearance D: probably her face shape and the size of her hands/feet, but I think this is useless information since anyone can imagine her hands size by her height :3
and height thing, sorry, around here we use 1,57 cm to say 1 meter 57 cm, but I changed it on the profile

You might want to put a space between your paragrahps like this:

... blah, blah, blah, blah. (End Paragraph)

Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. (New Paragraph)

Aide from that, eveything's good... with one exception.

What powers do each demons possess? Please, be as specific as possible. As well, what are their weaknesses and strenghts? Think of each demon, or familiar as having their own mini profile. Although, you can leave out some trivial facts like a Bio, or in-depth personality.

Edit: If you need an example, click the link in my signature and look for 'Vaskalen: The Hellfire Sword' At the bottom, you'll see what I mean, except I decided to add a small bio and other stuff like that. You don't need to go to that deail, but detail doesn't hurt, savvy?

Originally Posted by Ciroton

You might want to put a space between your paragrahps like this:

... blah, blah, blah, blah. (End Paragraph)

Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah. (New Paragraph)

Aide from that, eveything's good... with one exception.

What powers do each demons possess? Please, be as specific as possible. As well, what are their weaknesses and strenghts? Think of each demon, or familiar as having their own mini profile. Although, you can leave out some trivial facts like a Bio, or in-depth personality.

Edit: If you need an example, click the link in my signature and look for 'Vaskalen: The Hellfire Sword' At the bottom, you'll see what I mean, except I decided to add a small bio and other stuff like that. You don't need to go to that deail, but detail doesn't hurt, savvy?

can you tell me if I'm doing it right? check the first demon profile please

Originally Posted by Aishimisu

can you tell me if I'm doing it right? check the first demon profile please

Yeah, sure, that's fine if you really want all those sections. GO ahead and change the other demons and I'll take another look. =P

Originally Posted by Ciroton

Yeah, sure, that's fine if you really want all those sections. GO ahead and change the other demons and I'll take another look. =P

k, finished editing them all .__.

Okay that bird's power to hypniotize and/or kill anyone is to overpowered for a beginning character. At most, it should only be able to hypnotize some people. As for killing, killing by sight should only be reserved for NPCs, otherwise it wouldn't be a very exciting battle.

Fix the birdy and I'll give her yet another look.

Originally Posted by Ciroton

Okay that bird's power to hypniotize and/or kill anyone is to overpowered for a beginning character. At most, it should only be able to hypnotize some people. As for killing, killing by sight should only be reserved for NPCs, otherwise it wouldn't be a very exciting battle.

Fix the birdy and I'll give her yet another look.

the only fighting demon would be Hibiki, the other ones are just to help in the story. I wasn't planning to use the kill ability on anyone, just for some NPCs and to tell his story throughout my battles/rp. The bird will only be used to see things from above :3
(I changed to make people crazy)
:3
please tell me if I need to change anything else, and thanks for the attention you are giving to my character :3

Alrigth then, I'm holding you to that.

Overall, very nice for a first character. Welcome to the Escpaists' Haven.

~*Approved*~

Feel free to introduce yourself in the Out of Character (OoC) thread and get aquainted. Also, if you feel like improving your writing skills, try tutilidge in the dome. =3

ye, I was planning to go to the dome after getting a character approved, thank you very much ^^