Wise Man

Name:Wise Man

Age:Old

Race:Wise....

Sex: Yes he's had much of it in his lifetime.

Hair: Long and white

Eyes: Asian

Weight: Feather like

Height: 4 feet

Weapon: Magical string, and magical boom box

Strengths: Being wise....

Weaknesses: Rap music and non asian people disturb him to the point of flaw.

Skill/Magic: He can conjure anything his mind desires.

Appearance:YouTube - Wise Man Begins

Personality:Eternally wise and never lacking knowledge, he doesn't speak much, and when he does his voice is so pure you cant even hear it.

Bio: He was always here, never born, he was one with the universe. He wanders the world in search of an entity called the mouse king. Years ago he battled this fearsome creature, and his legions of raaaaaaaaaats. The Mouse king escaped but the Wise man remains vigilant in hopes that one day he will find this foul creature.

No...just...no

I would like you to tell me what I could do to improve the character, instead of just saying no. I would like an opportunity to better this character instead of you just spitting mindless criticism. You gave me no idea to what is wrong with him.

That is all....

This character is obviously a Joke, I feel no need to waste my pointing out everything that is wrong with him.

Wow your ignorant comment,proves that you shouldn't be in the BA.We dont know your capabilities as a writer, but if you had any talent you would share your "knowledge" with us. We do not take to kindly to people calling an idea I worked hard on as a joke. If there are any semi competent BA members that would like to tell me what I could do to improve the character then by all means give me some advice.

That is all.....

*Sigh* I really don't have the patience for this right now.

Fine then expand everything, and I do mean everything. If you need a reference check my characters.

That is all.....