Old 04-19-2008, 08:27 PM   #1
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Sephenis Musicaz

Name: Sephenis Musicaz

Age: 29

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Short Silver Hair

Eyes: Red

Weight: 182 pounds

Height: 6' 5''

Weapon: A katana with an emblem of a phoenix. The weapon can be infused with holy magic and fire spells when Sepheniz uses a spell, he lets it be still in hes hand and begins to pass it at the blade. The sword when infused with fire, the blade begins to emate fire, when holy, the blade turns completely white and blue and it gets a little more bigger.

Strengths: Sephenis is good at fighting with he's katana Phoenix's Beak. He's a master at magic fighting. With the combine strength of swords fighting and magic infused sword, he's a Knight of honor.

Weakness: Sephenis is weak against any dark magical spell or any fire based melee attack. If hit by dark magic, he becomes blind for several minutes and if shoot by fire, he becomes weak. If Sepheniz is hit on the head, he bows to the ground from the hurting and its vulnerable.

Skills/Magic: Freedom's Wing: A white wing grows on Sephenis left side of his back. With this wing, he can cast the "Cure" spell.

Tyranny's Wing: A black wing grows on Sephenis right side of the back. With this wing, he can reflect any water based attack.

Judgement's Angel: When Sephenis has hes two wings at the same time, he can create a force field that will deflect any kind of damage for 56 seconds and can cast two spells at the same time.

Angel Summon: Calls forth an angel to heal him.

Demon Summon: calls forth a demon to use help him attack, hes not that tough...

Appearance: Black and white coat, a necklace with an angel in it, a white shirt, black armor parts and white skin with long black pants and black shoes. A mad stare, no mustache, no beard and no hair blow he's lips.

Personality: Sephenis isn't the kind of person that likes to talk much. Hes much like of a person that doesn't like to befriend with anyone except heartless people. Sephenis was born with a single bad side. Hes brother was the only one who accepted him in any way. He likes to train alone in places where monsters always lurk. Hes training is like no other, it consist of killing a hoard of monsters in one slice.

Biography: When Sephenis was born, he was implanted with a cell of an angel and a cell of a demon. With this, hes parents rejected him because of being "different" from the others.

When he was a baby, wings began to grew on him. One white, the other black. Hes brother Gistelis accepted him in any way knowing he was "different" from the others.

When he was a kid, hes parents began to try to cut off the wings he had. But hes brother prevented this to happen. Gistelis had but only one thing to say...

"Wings don't represent monstrosity, they represent freedom!"

Since that moment, Sephenis's parents began to think and think. They had a choice, they selected that when Sephenis reaches teenage, he shall be "free".

When Sephenis finally was a teenager, hes wings were quite bigger then. Gistelis offered to accompany Sephenis. Their parents tried to stop Gistelis, but they failed.

Finally, when Sephenis was an adult, he began to fly with hes wings. He traveled with hes brother along at any place in the skies.

BUT, ONE DAY...

Sephenis and Gistelis were peaceful in a beach, suddenly, some strange men with gunblades arrived and grabbed Sephenis. Gistelis was named as a "victim" for the case. The men tried to kill Sephenis but... Gistelis got in the middle and he died. When Sephenis saw how hes brother fell one the ground falling with blood, he let hes rage run wild and killed all the men with one shot.

Since then, Sephenis has been having problems with social life and befriending people by the fear of being "rejected".
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Old 04-23-2008, 03:25 PM   #2
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Weight: 87 pounds

Height: 6' 5''
O_o...That is really REALLY skinny! at 6'5 he should be at least 175.

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Weapon: A katana with an emblem of a phoenix. The weapon can be infused with holy magic and fire spells.
How does the blade get infused, what can it do when it is infused, how does this affect the apperence of the blade?

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Strengths: Sephenis is good at fighting with his katana Phoenix's Beak. Hes a master at magic fighting. With the combine strength of swords fighting and magic infused sword, hes a Knight of honor.
*Ahem* it is He's, not Hes, please fix that for the sack of my eyes. =P

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Weakness: Sephenis is weak against any dark magical spell or any fire based melee attack. If hit by dark magic, he becomes blind for several minutes and if shoot by fire, he becomes weak.
Not all People use mafic, I am going to need at the very least one more weakness that can be explotied, maybe two.

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Skills/Magic: Freedom's Wing: A white wing grows on Sephenis left side of hes back. With this wing, he can heal each 36 seconds.
His back, not hes back. What do you mean 'heal each 36 seconds," that doesn't make any sense.

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Tyranny's Wing: A black wing grows on Sephenis right side of the back. With this wing, he can reflect any magical attack coming toward him.
Any? Put a limit on this because it is way to strong.


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Angel Summon: Calls fort an angel to use Esuna and Cura.

Demon Summon: calls fort a demon to use Fira, Blizzara and Thundara.
Forth, not Fort, a Fort is something completely different. Also this isin't Final Fantasy, please explain each of these spells, and exlain the angel/demon, it might just be a little too powerful either way but that remains to be seen.

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Appearance: Black and white coat, a necklace with an angel in it, a white shirt, black armor parts and white skin with long black pants and black shoes.
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Personality: Sephenis isn't the kind of person that likes to talk much. He's much like of a person that doesn't like to befriend with anyone except heartless people. Sephenis was born with a single bad side. Hes brother was the only one who accepted him in any way.
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Old 04-23-2008, 07:42 PM   #3
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Character edited. Took away the gramal erros and fixed the character's descriptions.
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Old 04-23-2008, 08:18 PM   #4
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Old 04-24-2008, 04:40 PM   #5
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Name: Sepheniz Musicaz

Age: 28

Race: Human

Sex: Male

Hair: Short Silver Spiky Hair

Eyes: Red

Weight: 153

Height: 6' 4''

Weapon: When he was a teenager, Sepheniz had a vision with a Phoenix. This Phoenix told him about a war about social rejection. He told him that he was one to participate in the war. Sepheniz, with questions on hes head, had many doubts on how he could fight. The Phoenix bestowed upon him he's blessing engraved in the form of a sword, with the name of "Blazing Bless". This sword, could manipulate magical spells formed by fire and holy and sacred magic bestowed by the Gods. When the blade of the sword was to be infused with fire spells, it took the form of the beak of a Phoenix and burn anything it touches into crisp. When bestowed by holy spells, it begins to emate a blue and white aura and its covered by angel halos.

Strengths: Sepheniz can handle pretty well he's sword and has some strategies of either ambushing the foe or let it hit him. Sepheniz also is learning how to manipulate spells. With the fused combat of sword and spells, he can be an itching bug when fighting him.

Weakness: Sepheniz's unprotected head can be a bother when battling. If his hit in the head, he can have some chronic headaches and can be hit able when in this state for about 24 seconds. If his hit on the chest, he can lose some breath and hes defense lowers and a massive attack can be landed.

Skills/Magic: When Sepheniz was a child, each day he had a dream with an angel, a demon and some kind of figure with angel and demon wings. He talked and talked for hours in he's dreams with them. When he reached teenage, he finally could have the blessing of the three and could use their abilities any time he desires.

Angel Summon: Sepheniz calls fort an angel to cure him for each 20 seconds for only one minute. Its curing ability is useless when the character is in good shape, but when he is in a bad shape to fight, the angel heals more.

Demon Summon: Sepheniz calls forth a demon to aid him in battle for three minutes. Hes strength is useful when Sepheniz has a bad shape of fighting, but when he has a good shape, its totally useless.

Left Light: Sepheniz uses he's white wing in he's left to reflect only minor strength spells at the opponent. Fails if the spell is pretty powerful. It only lasts four minutes.

Right Darkness: Sepheniz uses he's black wing on the right to power up hes abilities for a mere two minutes.

Duo Twilight: Sepheniz uses he's two wings to float to the air and take in a form of both light and dark for only six minutes. All of he's abilities power up.

Appearance: White skin, black and white coat, white armor garments with a drawing of an angel and a demon, black pants, black shoes, two belts, one black the other white, black and white gloves, black earring on the right ear and white earring in the left ear. No facial hair and a necklace with a Phoenix in it. Not so tall, Has some low muscles and has a white and brown skin. Hes a little fat, but he looks not so skinny.

Personality: Sepheniz spends hes time training in the woods in search for monsters to fight them. He uses hes strategies to train them and make them sharper. He also likes to keep hes appearance quite clear and good looking. He also spends hes time traveling and looking for treasures to keep he's economy secure.

Biography: Before Sepheniz was born and was still on the fetus, her mother had a belly ache. Hes dad quite worried, he called for Dr. Lugan. When the doctor arrived, he only had a vaccine with him. The liquid the vaccine had was black and white. Her mother then feel better.

9 MONTHS LATER...

Sepheniz was born. He had a little problem, black and white wings grew on him. The doctor explained that nothing he did had nothing to do. He's mother and father left sad, while hes brother, Gisteliz had a happy face because of the arrival of he's brother.

When he began to be a child, he began to develop bigger wings and tried to fly. One day, he was found lying in a tree. Gisteliz cared for him. Sepheniz most of he's time spents it with Gisteliz.

When he was a teenager, he's wings were quite bigger. He's mother and father came with the decision of letting him free. They talked and talked but the choice was sealed, he was to leave or they would confront social problems. Gisteliz and Sepheniz left.

15 YEARS LATER...

Sepheniz was a grown man and he's brother was aging. One day at the beach, Sepheniz and Gisteliz were relaxing. But at a moment, some men in black appeard and ambushed them. Gisteliz was left alone, but Sepheniz not. At a moment, the one responsible for Sepheniz's family rejection appears, Dr. Lugan. He reveals he's identity to be the famous REJECT dark organization group's leader, Nagul. After several speeches that revealed his an experiment to developed infinite life on human beings. Gisteliz was full of rage. Without thinking, he jumped toward the men who were holding down Sepheniz with some kind of blue stone called Sapphinezex. After attacking the men, he hugged hes brother... but! Nugal shot him with the gun, when they both opened their eyes, they saw how blood spilled n the ground and Gisteliz began falling. Sepheniz filled with anger and sadness, ascended to the skies and began to take a strange form. He turned completely white, black and red and released a strong energy that almost took of Nugal. After this, he knew that to trust was to rust life.

He now spends he's time delivering roses to Gisteliz's grave. After that incident, he told he's parents about this. They were shocked. He's parents died of sadness and couldn't stand for such departure. Since that day, he knew that to trust was to rust life. He began to hide from people and did what he was told to.
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Much better, I will take another look when you get rid of the "HP". Here in the BA we do not use HP, mmmkay?
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Old 04-24-2008, 06:47 PM   #7
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Much better, I will take another look when you get rid of the "HP". Here in the BA we do not use HP, mmmkay?
Ok! Bu what can I call it? Life Meter?
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There is no life meter, it is a battle between two people...If it helps you think of it more like two Anime Characters fighting then a Video game RPG.
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Old 04-25-2008, 03:35 PM   #9
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Sorry to be a bothe. I edited the character. The HP has been changed to fighting shape, as in how he looks. Either bad or good.
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Explain his Appereance a little more, is he tanned? Tall? Buff? Skinny? Some physcal descriptions would be nice, I would also like you to run this through spell checker. I willcheck it over once those are done.
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Old 04-25-2008, 04:42 PM   #12
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Okay, that should do for a first time character.

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